This week on Buffy and the Art of Story: Prophecy Girl (Season 1, Episode 12 of Buffy the Vampire Slayer).

This pivotal story for Buffy begins in Xander’s point of view. We’ll explore that as well as (1) creating multiple characters the audience identifies with; (2) using actions to demonstrate characters’ feelings; (3) a very layered Story Spark/Inciting Incident; and (4) a strong midpoint and three-quarter plot turn.

As always, the discussion is spoiler-free, except at the end (with plenty of warning).

Sorry, no Season 1 DVD commentary for Prophecy Girl.  

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Episode Transcript for Prophecy Girl

Hello and welcome to Buffy and the art of story.

If you love Buffy the Vampire Slayer and you love creating stories, or just taking them apart to see how they work, you’re in the right place.

I am Lisa M Lilly author of the Awakening Supernatural Thriller Series and the Q.C. Davis mysteries and founder of WritingAsASecondCareer.com. Today we’re talking about Season 1 Episode 12 Prophecy Girl. It is the finale for Season 1.

This is a huge story for Buffy.

Interestingly, it’s wrapped in Xander’s experience, so we’ll explore that as well as:

* the different characters we identify with emotionally

* how the writers and actors use action to express the characters’ feelings and emphasize them

* a very layered Story Spark

* and a strong Midpoint and three-quarter turn.

As always, there will be no spoilers except at the end to talk about foreshadowing. But I’ll give you plenty of warning.

Okay, let’s dive into the Hellmouth.

Opening Internal Conflict

Prophecy Girl was written and directed by Joss Whedon.

We began in the Bronze, a classic Buffy location. And we start with conflict — Xander’s conflict.

It is mainly internal. He is struggling over whether to, or how to, ask Buffy out. Specifically, for the Spring Fling,