Vito tries to surprise John with a fun intro but it goes horribly wrong and the guys have to settle for the dull doink of disappointment. Today, they discuss how to keep dialogue interesting and flowing without turning into a wall of indented dullness. To cap it off, they talk about how to give and take feedback on unfinished work. What's useful to point out and when should you take or ignore someone's feedback? 

Speaking of feedback, someone made John's day by actually leaving an Itunes review saying nothing but "good job." If you don't get it...go back and listen to our last ten episodes...