Leonardo Oliveira: I want to feel good and confident about reaching out to Unit Production Manager.

• Capture every story point on your long initial draft, then trim down to ensure flow and clarity.
• Take out a sentence on your value then transition it to the part of your story where you see a problem that you can provide a solution.
• Frame the message around their problem, then reveal how your skills solve it.
• Cut redundancy, combine ideas, and aim for 15–20% fewer words.
• Use a PS for intriguing extras that spark curiosity without cluttering the main message.
• Keep subject lines strong since forwarded emails depend on them to get opened and send the forwardable email separately with a short thank-you note to the connector.

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