An appropriate message is:
Your company is my preferred career option because of the opportunities presented, I would like
to ensure that I am appropriately rewarded due to the value I will add in,,,
…shaping the operational efficiencies of the business over the next 6/12 months. Additionally
I will add organizational wide benefit because of my track record gained in identifying high
performing senior level talent.
or ,,,shaping the growth strategy/execution in a key market over the next 6/12 months.
Additionally I will add organizational wide benefit because of my track record gained in
identifying low cost business social media activity that provides superior ROI.