07.07.2016 - By Leslie Watts, Story Grid Certified fiction editor
In this episode, Leslie and Clark critique the opening pages of Sondra Turnbull's _Affery’s Earth_, an as yet unpublished magical realism novel. They discuss adverbs that end in _ly_, how to use adverbs to “unwrite” your sentences and make them stronger, the use of inanimate objects, and US vs. UK English.