How do you revise your log lines?

We practice revising log lines by reading Emily's log line for her work-in-progress!

Our hope is that these critique sessions help you work on your own log lines and pitches. If you have a log line you would like to send us to critique, please feel free to share it in the comments or email it to us at [email protected]!

SHOUT OUTS

Jon Meyers recommends the book Writing and Selling Killer Screenplays: From TV Pilot to Feature Film by Lucy V. Hay.