Graphite dust and pressure
Fingertipped into the paper
as eyes emerge discretely
reflection in its feeling
Dotted fear against the canvas
The hint of laughter caught
wet edge of a lower lid
is it alive or did it rot?
Can you tell what it has seen
by a heavy handed shading?
Deep well surrounds the corners
Detail tremors the lash line
A soft fracture of light
tipped inside the vision
like something startled it awake
Who is watching who?
The artist or the art?
A memory left open
A spark of sound within its sight
Some sketches feel
unfinished
Come closer, take a look
The absence is
calculated
Space left for gasping breath
for the viewer’s view inside the pulse
to create its final gaze
as its hung upon the wall
I wonder then
when the lights go out
and the house falls into quiet bones
will the eyes remain wide open
in its place within the hall?
Is there detail enough
for the lids to grow so heavy?
Will the charcoal pupil soften
lowering its heavy lashes
like curtains drawn against the dark?
Does it dream, forgotten
of the hand that traced it into being?
Or does it stay awake all night
observing someone elses seeing
waiting for the morning
frozen and unblinking?
Written by https://www.threads.com/@morana_in_chaos
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