In this episode, we're looking at one of the most common mistakes people make when reaching out:

Writing too much.

Your instinct is to explain, soften, and add context, but that often makes the message harder to read and easier to ignore.

This episode explains why shorter messages work better, and how to keep your message clear without losing meaning.

In this episode, we cover:

• Why longer messages often feel less confident, not more thoughtful
• What actually needs to be included in a re-engagement message
• How to identify and remove unnecessary sentences
• Why short messages are more likely to be read and replied to
• How editing improves clarity and reduces friction

By the end, you'll understand how to say what you need to say, in fewer words.

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