In this podcast lesson, I review an online Band 9 essay and discuss 9 features of this essay which could be improved.
For each of the points I mention, I provide an alternative so that you can make changes to your own writing.
I'll put this on my website ASAP, but in the meantime, you can watch my YouTube video here, so you can see the essays that I'm discussing:
https://youtu.be/c4nMPXwJls4
My tips about Coherence and Cohesion (avoiding mechanical linking words) are here:
https://ieltsetc.com/2020/01/ielts-writing-coherence-cohesion/
There is a video to go with that lesson too.
Find more Band 9 essays and tips on my website:
https://ieltsetc.com/2019/04/band-9-essay/
https://ieltsetc.com/2021/03/ielts-task-2-band-9-essay-ceos/ (last week's podcast)
https://ieltsetc.com/2019/09/ielts-writing-task-2-topics-and-models-crime/
https://ieltsetc.com/2020/05/ielts-writing-task-2-how-to-write-an-introduction/
https://ieltsetc.com/2020/03/to-what-extent-do-you-agree/
https://ieltsetc.com/2020/11/ielts-formal-writing/
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IELTS Writing: 9️⃣ tips for a Band 9️⃣ essay

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Quick tips to help you with the Speaking Challenge followed by a Reading Passage 2 about the tool-making abilities of crows (and what we have in common with them). True/False/Not Given. Get the full reading here https://www.ieltsetc.com/2018/11/ielts-reading-two-wings-toolkit/

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IELTS Reading: Crows and tools 

This is my walkthrough of an Academic Passage 1 about Stonehenge.
Keyword before you listen:
‘Winter solstice’ - the shortest day of the year (December 21st)
Meaning: to stand still
The solstice (combining the Latin words sol for “sun” and ‘sistere’ for “stand still”) is the point where the Sun appears to reach either its highest or lowest point in the sky for the year and thus ancient astronomers came to know the day as one where the sun appeared to stand still.
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IELTS Reading: Stonehenge

This listening about a research project contains several examples of ‘academic’ language (language related to studying at university) that you need to understand Listening Part 3.


It's about a volcanic eruption, and is adapted from a Cambridge Past Paper (Book 18).


Get the full lesson notes and video in the Bronze Membership on my website ieltsetc.com and the Listening Course in the Members Academy.

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IELTS Listening 

This Part 4 Listening is all about moving elephants.
In the lesson you'll learn about:

 using word prompts to keep your place
 using intonation and sentence stress to identify answers
  using spelling patterns and plurals to get the right answers

The full transcript is available in the Bronze Membership on my website.
https://ieltsetc.com/2023/10/ielts-listening-part-4-keeping-up-with-the-speaker/



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IELTS Listening: Elephant translocation 

This is a relatively easy Passage 2 from a Cambridge Past Paper, with 3 sets of questions [Matching Information, Categorising and Gapfill].


https://ieltsetc.com/2023/10/ielts-reading-forest-management/

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IELTS Writing: 9️⃣ tips for a Band 9️⃣ essay

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