Do you cringe when a protagonist says something like, “I have to keep fighting until I overcome every obstacle.”? We feel your pain. Mark and Brian discuss why it hurts and how to fix it. Sponsor: <a title="Forever Young" href="http://foreveryoung.org" target="_blank" rel="noopener">Forever Young</a> Coming Up: <a title="TEDx Gilbert" href= "https://www.tedxgilbert.com" target="_blank" rel="noopener">TEDx Gilbert</a>

Do you cringe when a protagonist says something like, “I have to keep fighting until I overcome every obstacle.”? We feel your pain. Mark and Brian discuss why it hurts and how to fix it. Sponsor: Forever Young Coming Up: TEDx Gilbert

Do you cringe when a protagonist says something like, “I have to keep fighting until I overcome every obstacle.”? We feel your pain. Mark and Brian discuss why it hurts and how to fix it. Sponsor: <a title="Forever Young" href="http://foreveryoung.org" rel="noopener noreferrer">Forever Young</a> Coming Up: <a title="TEDx Gilbert" href="https://www.tedxgilbert.com" rel="noopener noreferrer">TEDx Gilbert</a>

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