Arnold K from Goblin Punch helps me give editorial feedback for Outcast Unseelie and the Ooze Between by Jesse Winter00:00 - Goblin Punch18:30 - Outcast Unseelie and the Ooze Between by Jesse Winter30:39 - Overall feedback40:44- The Nitty gritty1:22:30 - Final thoughts----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Listen on Spotify: https://open.spotify.com/show/7qE8SA9nntLidSqZifWDys----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Puzzle Dungeon Jam: https://puzzledungeon.com/jamPuzzle Dungeon Blog: https://puzzledungeon.com/----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Outcast Unseelie: https://slimemind.itch.io/outcast-unseelie----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Goblin Punch: https://goblinpunch.blogspot.com/Lair of the Lamb: https://goblinpunch.blogspot.com/2020/04/lair-of-lamb-final.html----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------My next Puzzle DungeonA Familiar Tower: https://puzzledungeon.com/tower?ref=yt----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------