Poets At War

Poets At War Ep. 259: Broodcast May 2026


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The meeting of "The Brood of Writers" begins with casual catch-up, including the Joshua's recent vehicle troubles and his completion of a Peter Pan-themed pop-punk concept album, before transitioning into sharing and critiquing creative works. Carey shares an early draft of an animal-centric story titled "The Great Bayou Adventure," prompting a discussion on target demographics and pacing, with the group drawing comparisons to Redwall and The Secret of NIMH. Joshua then reads a chapter from absent member Marty's Civil War-era story, which the group highly praises for its authentic narrative voice, engaging atmosphere, and effective repetition of key character details.The session continues with Brendan sharing an action-packed excerpt from his anime-inspired screenplay set in the magical realm of Avalon, leading to a brief discussion on the unique challenges of performing script reads and a proposal to do a full voice-cast reading in the future. Next, Joshua reads a sci-fi chapter by Joel, where characters navigate a teammate's nightmarish mindscape; the group critiques the scene's heavy reliance on exposition and suggests ways to better balance showing versus telling. Finally, Joshua reads three narrative poems from his "World of Wrestling" series. Brendan provides constructive feedback, suggesting Joshua pad out the emotional beats and refine the dialogue to better contrast the protagonist's core identity against corporate marketing pressures, bringing the creative meeting to a close.

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Poets At WarBy Joshua David Ling