Ben Laurence helps me give editorial feedback for RESERVOIR by Cameron Maas00:00 - Ben Laurence24:43 - RESERVOIR by Cameron Maas33:05 - Overall feedback49:14 - The Nitty gritty2:01:32 - Final thoughts----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Listen on Spotify: https://open.spotify.com/show/7qE8SA9nntLidSqZifWDys----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Puzzle Dungeon Jam: https://puzzledungeon.com/jamPuzzle Dungeon Blog: https://puzzledungeon.com/----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------RESERVOIR: https://cameronmaas.itch.io/reservoirBackerKit Crowdfunder: https://www.backerkit.com/call_to_action/75378330-9efa-4e3e-8290-f96ea3e63fc0/landingCameron Maas: https://cameronmaas.com/----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Ben Laurence: https://maziriansgarden.blogspot.com/Through Ultan's Door: https://ben-laurence.itch.io/through-ultans-door-issue-1----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------My next Puzzle DungeonA Familiar Tower: https://puzzledungeon.com/tower?ref=yt----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------