【Writing Q】

Some people think buying a dog is good. Do you agree with this opinion?

【Writing A】数点誤りがありましたので音声と違う箇所があります。(healthyやtheの有無)

I agree that buying a dog is good.

First, taking care of dogs can learn(/teach) responsibilities because children have a chance to walk and feed the dog. For example, I have a dog at home and I can treat my dog.

Second, having a pet helps owners keep healthy because they usually have to take their dogs outside and it also has owners walk. For example, older people taking dogs outside look very healthy when I see them. I think they need to run to chase their dogs.

Therefore, I agree that buying a dog is good. (97文字)

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