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SATW: 60 Second Travel Writer #3 - Numbers


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The old joke among journalists is that we chose our profession because we can’t do numbers. Here’s a 60-Second Travel Writer Tip from LA Times Travel Editor Catharine Hamm: You don’t have to be a mathematician to use numbers in stories, and that’s good because they lend gravitas. The number of square feet in a hotel room. How far a place is from the airport. How much it cost to build something. But sometimes we end up with sentences like this: The hotel, built at a cost of $7 billion and opened in 2013, has 204 rooms, each about 650 square feet in its eight stories that loom above downtown 22 miles from the airport. Rates begin at $225 a night for two people, excluding taxes and the $20-a-night resort fee. All of that information could be important, but stick to this rule of thumb: About three numbers is the maximum a reader can absorb in any sentence and, some editors say, any paragraph. Choose the two or three most important figures in what we’ll call a gravitas graf. If there are other stats that could help, sprinkle them in unobtrusively. Up next: how to use numbers more effectively. For SATW professional development, I’m Westways Travel Editor Elizabeth Harryman. SaveSave SaveSave
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