Nick LS Whelan from Papers & Pencils helps me give editorial feedback for The Thief Trap by JohnOutWest00:00 - The LS stands for many things04:10 - Errant05:54 - Domain play procedures12:47 - Blogs on Tape21:18 - Go Die in a Hole26:21 - Puzzle Dungeon Jam28:37 - The Thief Trap by JohnOutWest30:39 - Overall feedback40:44- The Nitty gritty1:34:05 - Closing thoughts----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Puzzle Dungeon Jam: https://puzzledungeon.com/jamPuzzle Dungeon Blog: https://puzzledungeon.com/----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------The Thief Trap: https://johnoutwest.itch.io/thief-trap----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Papers & Pencils: https://www.paperspencils.com/Blogs on Tape: https://blogsontape.paperspencils.com/----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------My next Puzzle DungeonA Familiar Tower: https://puzzledungeon.com/tower?ref=yt----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------