A poem from my book, House of Words (Korrektiv Press, 2010, p. 11) and a recently unearthed earlier version published in The Whitman College Pioneer (Feb 12, 1987, p. 9).

Written and performed by Jonathan Potter (jopomojo poetry podcast, 2023).

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