Alex and Nick pursue the 2020 Paper Team Mentorship with mentee Ben Warner and the first draft of his drama pilot THE PIRATE KING.

Step four of the process: writing a first complete draft of the original pilot.

We address a polarizing email and discuss Ben's first draft.

Content

Mentorship recap and new audience feedback (00:00:43)

Discussion of "The Pirate King" first draft (00:16:41)

Links

"The Pirate King" first draft

2020 Paper Team Mentorship I - "The Pirate King" Overview (PT190)

2020 Paper Team Mentorship I - Ben's Update

2020 Paper Team Mentorship II - "The Pirate King" Beat Sheet (PT193)

2020 Paper Team Mentorship II - Ben's Update

2020 Paper Team Mentorship III – “The Pirate King” Outline (PT198)

2020 Paper Team Mentorship III - Ben's Update

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