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Title: Bathing Suits Optional
Author: La Marchesa
Narrator: Cressida Wolf
Format: Unabridged
Length: 1 hr and 30 mins
Language: English
Release date: 05-20-13
Publisher: Mars Audio Books
Ratings: 3.5 of 5 out of 18 votes
Genres: Erotica & Sexuality, Fiction
Publisher's Summary:
When Steven and Lisa attend a big pool party presented for Hollywoods most beautiful people, they learn, to their surprise that bathing suits are optional - and thats not all. As they enter the pool enclosure from the conservatory, they discover a wanton orgy is taking place. Steven wants to leave, but Lisa wants to stay and apparently participate.
Heating up fast, Steven wants to participate too, as long as Lisa doesnt. What follows is a sexy hilarious romp, which is liable to excite you and leave you smiling.
WARNING: This story contains extreme sexual situations.
Members Reviews:
Good.......ish
This short story got 4 stars instead of 5 due to a couple of reasons. It was a very spicy story that got a lot said in a short space and I appreciated that. I didn't care for the ending and I also found the male character a bit off-putting with the way the author had him talking/thinking. The words and phrases he used were a little unbelievable n a "No one really talks like that" way. Otherwise, I liked it!
Fun, with reservations
A nice, brief orgy romp, guided by the alternating points-of-view of a married hetero- couple attending their first swing party. The wealth of graphic detail coupled with the couple's internal dialogues make for an easy visualization of the afternoon's events. The "trick my partner into attending a sex party" gimmick is well-executed, providing a humorous insight to their perhaps-not-so-adventurous relationship of late.
All in all an enjoyable tale, but there are a couple of weak points worth noting. The frequent omission of words from otherwise well-structured sentences tends to jolt the reader out of the voyeuristic mind frame commonly enjoyed by fans of this genre, and interrupts what could be a very pleasurable interlude with far-too-frequent fourth-wall reminders. The offending passages read as though the author is struggling with English composition-if indeed this is the case, a more proficient editor should've been employed to counteract the linguistic unfamiliarity or second-language grammatical transitions. Another issue of note is the somewhat unusual inclusion of a pronounced jealousy issue suffered by one of the married partners. The green-eyed monster is at once refreshing in it's portrayal as a real-life issue to be dealt with, (as was the specific and consistent inclusion of condom usage) and annoying in it's tendency to slow the narration to a near-standstill repeatedly, only to be set aside until the next "attack of conscience" arises, but is left, ultimately, unresolved. The story's conclusion seems a bit contrived and erratic as well, as though some pages were lost, or the word-count limit had been reached and a hasty end to the couple's adventure were due.
As a sequel is promised, perhaps relating further forays into the lifestyle for the intrepid couple will allow the author to polish technique, improve flow, and hire a competent proof reader.
Quite enjoyable
I enjoyed the story. There was a great erotic story as well as a nice interplay between the thoughts of the couple as they were experiencing new things.
Funny- prob meant for chicks
I love me some wife swapping but this one was for chicks. Guys seemed a little weird and the funny parts were for chicks.