🎓 In this video, I take you through a comprehensive review of an IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 essay written by one of my students. This essay initially stands at a Band 5.5 level, and I’ll be analyzing it thoroughly to identify the key areas where improvements are needed. From grammar and vocabulary to structure and clarity, I break down each mistake and explain how it impacts the overall score. 📝
After addressing the weaknesses and making the necessary corrections, I present a revised version of the essay. This is where you’ll see how small changes can significantly raise the band score. To give you a clearer understanding, I also share a Band 9 example essay, demonstrating the critical differences between a mid-band score and a top-tier response. ✨
Throughout the video, you'll learn important tips and strategies to enhance your own IELTS Writing skills. Whether you're struggling with data interpretation, grammatical accuracy, or using complex sentence structures, this video will provide you with actionable insights to help you achieve a higher band score. 💡
By the end of this video, you'll be better equipped to avoid common pitfalls, improve your coherence and cohesion, and understand what examiners are looking for in a high-scoring essay. 🚀 Perfect for IELTS candidates who want to sharpen their writing skills and work towards their dream Band 7, 8, or even 9! 🌟
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First, when you describe data, pay attention to sentence structure and clarity. For example, instead of saying:
"As we see in this diagram, local fixed-line was the most used by 1995-1999,"
it’s better to say:
"The diagram shows that the local fixed-line was the most used between 1995 and 1999."
This version is clearer and avoids unnecessary phrasing like “as we see”.
Next, remember to use the correct tenses. Instead of saying:
"According this we can see slightly decreasing up to finish the bar chart,"
it should be:
"According to the chart, we can see a slight decrease by the end of the period."
This makes the sentence grammatically correct and smoother.
Another mistake is in comparing data. Instead of saying:
"This line was not as nearly as local-fixed line,"
you should say:
"This line did not increase as much as the local fixed-line."
This version is easier to understand.
Also, be cautious with phrases like “a little bit lowering”. Instead, say:
"a slight decrease at the end of the year."
It’s more formal and appropriate for reports.
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