I'm experimenting with where I'm putting my subtitles. Feedback on readability appreciated.

Original text: https://peakd.com/fiction/@internutter/challenge-01469-d008-judge-alike

A vintage story from my first year of writing flash fictions. Wooo!

Publically accessible original text here: https://peakd.com/fiction/@internutter/blast-from-the-past-challenge-00042-the-shocking-truth

[Link to the true original is present on that page]

One of my many HFY stories. Otherwise tagged "Humans are Space Orcs" over in Tumblr.

Original text: https://peakd.com/fiction/@internutter/challenge-01467-d006-surrender-now-or-what

We all know that one highly frustrating person who causes mayhem by "being helpful".

Original text: https://peakd.com/fiction/@internutter/challenge-01464-d003-dammit-dwayne

Getting better at these things. Suggestions for improvement appreciated.

Original text: https://peakd.com/fiction/@internutter/challenge-01463-d002-visit-zoq-in-university

I'm gaining a system to do these! Yay!

Original text here: https://peakd.com/fiction/@internutter/challenge-01461-d001-the-curse-of-vows

Finally, after absolute ages of trying to get subtitles to work more easily, I have my second story video ready for your entertainment. Hopefully, going forward, I'll get quicker at this.

You can find the original text here: https://peakd.com/fiction/@internutter/challenge-01459-c364-dangerous-encounters

I've gone through my achive of flash fictions and picked out the ones my audience seems to like the best. I'm still working out how to do titles and subtitles, and I had to brute force the subtitles. Maybe there's an easier way that does not involve me getting even more software to learn.

You can find the original text here: https://peakd.com/fiction/@internutter/challenge-01458-c363-protective-instinct

Tumblr is... an experience. This is just one of them.