Arcane secrets of writing: how do we spin stories out of our heads, and some discussion of editing. Plus more tangential rants than ever before! Also, a letter from a famous podcaster! And a special guest weasel!

For the second straight week, K.M. geeks out, this time about D and D blow jobs. Before that, though, serious writing issues! World-building, film adaptations, and some other stuff.

We meet our first non-human audience member, Kyell expounds on furry reaching the mainstream, and we play our first Unsheathed Pyramid game, courtesy of the magnificent K-Tech!

Kyell and K.M. discuss making characters more real, making characters based on real people less real, and the real problem with the Star Wars prequels. Also: Doctor Who geekery!

K.M. Hirosaki reads one of his early stories, where a pizza delivery fox gets much more than a tip. Kyell helps, and not as the voice of the fox.

Savrin, of Knotcast and Vox Zerda, joins our hosts in a discussion of reading out loud, character perspective, and a certain amount of yaff yaff.

Kyell and K.M. discuss how much simile and metaphor is too much, how inspiring a well-written book can be, and Kyell tells his secret to "great" books.

Kyell, K.M., and foozzzball devote an hour to going over three paragraphs. In detail. With almost no blow job references.

We talk about more editing, we catch up with Pyro, and read an intriguing offer from our friend Kandrel, who sets his nationality straight for us.

Do you edit as you go along? How do you stop from obsessively editing your own work? How do you get someone else to edit it for you? Kyell and K.M. tackle thorny editing questions.