Constructive Criticism always appreciated!
After last week, I felt pretty defeated, but determined to create through the feeling, rather than wallow in it. Throat is still a little dry/scratchy from being sick so vocals had to be done in short windows of time, rather than just sitting down for a couple of hours.
I really went in on the production of this track, playing with mixing, automation, and buildups more than I really have in the past.
Originally, this song was very different, I was maybe 80% done a track, and then when I woke up on wednesday I HATED it and restarted. And then on Friday I hated my lyrics/melody/chord progression so I deleted THAT. So this was put together just on Friday/Saturday - and I like it!
As always, Lyrics below (But now I learned how to hide them behind spoiler tags so they don't take up a bunch of screenspace ha ha)
› Lyrics‹ Lyrics
I am ambivilant
try as you might
the forces win
the one who gives
the one who takes
the one who chooses
who lives and who breaks
Try to stop
the oncoming tide
never stop the push
I've broken walls
I've broken continents
and I will break
you
you think you can take me
you're not the first to try
armies explorers
the rich and the poor
all have failed to my grandeur
Try to stop
the oncoming tide
never stop the push
I've broken walls
I've broken continents
and I will break
you
was here before
be here after too
eternity's just a blip
I gave you life
and you chose to fight
you humans aren't so bright
Try to stop
the oncoming tide
never stop the push
I've broken walls
I've broken continents
and I will break
you
All I need
is a little respect
and I can bring you joy
what you need
is to respect me
no room to debate
Try to stop
the oncoming tide
never stop the push
I've broken walls
I've broken continents
and I will break
you
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