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Each episode of The First 15 brings screenwriting members of Trigger Street Labs to a live workshop of their screenplay's first 15 pages.

Today's screenplay is MIND OF THE BEHOLDER by Carl Salminen.

Synopsis:

Ito Asami, a detective on the Osaka police force has been tasked, against his wishes, with assembling a team of psychics to track down a brutal serial killer. The most skilled among these psychics is Sera Owens, a woman whose tragic past drives her to use her abilities as a way to make up for lingering guilt and fears. Ito and this team of psychics work to uncover truths about the killer. When they finally do, the one truth they never expected was that he would also be a psychic – a psychic more powerful than they are. The tables turn as the hunters become the hunted. Ito’s psychics die, one-by-one, until only Sera remains and she is locked up in protective custody. But Sera, it turns out, is the killer’s ultimate prize. He comes for her, snatches her from under the nose of the police and takes her to his lair. All hope seems lost until an astonishing and unexpected psychic link forms between Ito and Sera. Ito becomes the only one who can find her – he’s her last and only hope. What results is a battle between forces of good and evil in a final, mind-boggling showdown that pits the power of the heart and will against the powers of a soulless killer.

Today's Script is FAMOUS FRANK by Richard Fordyce.

Synopsis:

After a career teaching Latin and Greek to schoolchildren, Frank is widowed and sliding happily into retirement as a grumpy old codger. But his personal life is turned topsy-turvy when his brother dies in a traffic accident. Frank suddenly becomes the owner of a family business he was never interested in: a company which manufactures toothpaste. His late arrival into the arena of business and commerce leads him into misunderstandings, celebrity, street brawling, ghosts from the past… and romance.

"A Circle in the Water"

by Michael Daniel

Synopsis: A Stone Mountain family fights societal hatred for a generation to save its family farm and dignity

Today's Script:

"Rated R"

By Mike Leon

Synopsis: A bored video store clerk learns that her co-worker is really a disgruntled action hero hiding from super villains.

Check out the script here and watch the show live every other Thursday at 5pm Pacific on trigg.la/live!

Each week, Phil and Carter review a script from Trigger Street labs and have the writer on as a guest in order to give them honest and hopefully constructive criticism and notes. This weeks guest is John Suetmeier with his script, DUNGEON MASTER OLYMPICS.

Are you interested in submitting your script the First 15?

This is not a cattle call seminar or overpriced workshop run by failed execs. If you have a tough skin and would like your screenplay to be considered for this then send the following to [email protected]:

Your name and your labs.triggerstreet.com username.

The link to your screenplay on labs.triggerstreet.com

Your Skype name

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Your email and contact info