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Title: Taking the Team: An Explicit Hot Wife Group Menage
Subtitle: Explicit Tales: Group Fun, Book 1
Author: Lolita Minx
Narrator: Sarah Hinojosa
Format: Unabridged
Length: 14 mins
Language: English
Release date: 09-30-15
Publisher: eXplicitTales
Ratings: 2.5 of 5 out of 2 votes
Genres: Erotica & Sexuality, Fiction
Publisher's Summary:
I told my man, Gary, if his team won the match, there'd be a special reward. A reward for all 11 who make up the squad. When the final whistle blew and the game was over, the time came to make good on my promise. We would go into the locker room, and the whole team would get a go. It won't be long before I'll be showered and filled from all sides.
Members Reviews:
Short and skimpy where more detail would made me care about the characters.
Note: This is a work of fiction for grown adults, not want a bees!
The story had a tantalizing premise and that is about all. Why did the protagonist act so? her husband and friends? nothing makes us wonder, or tells us.
If the author spent sometime teasing us with why and how proposal was set, we could have been participants not a computer reading words with no meaning.
There was one trade that prevented me from giving this a zero. When events unfold she wonders if it's a one time deal. If a follow-up awaits, tell us motivations with various characters, differences and how she rationalized all. That would be worthy of reading.
This one skip!
Adjusted review to meet guidelines
Picked up while free on Kindle (very short - 15 page - erotica ... no, (sigh) really, this one is p. o. r. n)
Story is a gang--bang/"group menage" where the woman volunteered to take on entire (English football - American soccer) team. She enjoys the degradation (says so in the story). ... And story isn't quite the right word: no character development, no plot, no conflict, no resolution, and ... well, the setting is described better than the sex which only described the actions, not the feelings (talking about touch and tingle, don't care about emotions in a piece like this). Erotica requires a story, and this story doesn't have a story.
Gets a star for describing the locker room and bar settings well. A second star for describing the character motivations and making you believe the main characters motivations and relationship with boyfriend. And that is all "Taking the Team" has going for it. Need more touch&tingle to be good reading p. o. r. n..
Just ok for me.
This is a short. Poorly written and edited book. Not worth reading. I hate typos. This book has them in abundance. Storyline ok if you're into voyourism. Sex scenes are so so.
Truth
The title of this story is literally the truth. Fast paced from start to finish, there was no stopping in the action and entertainment. Exciting all the way through.
Two Stars
ok