This chapter offers a change of pace, a little melodrama. Let me know what you think in the comments.

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In which chapters 11 and 12 are discussed. Join the discussion. Leave a comment.

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This is what Google had to say when I asked how my book was different from other MG fantasy adventures. What do you think? Let me know in the comments.

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Here’s what Google Notebook has to say about my folk horror story for kids. What do you have to say? Let me know in the comments.

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In which chapters 10 and 11 are discussed, inferences are made, and predictions are, well, predicted. Let me know your thoughts in the comments.

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In which chapters 9 and 10 are discussed. Add to the discussion in the comments

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I asked Google how this story was different from other Middle Grade Sci-Fi/Fantasy Adventures. This is what they had to say. What do you have to say? Let me know in the comments.

To clarify, Ryder isn’t a bird-man in the book. AI creative license, I guess.

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I asked Google how my book was different from most middle grade fantasy stories. They had a lot to say about it. Let me know what you have to say in the comments.

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This is what Google Notebook LM thinks about what makes my book different from other middle grade fantasy. What do you think? Let me know in the comments.

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In which the bog booms, the witches get hysterical, and the pumpkin glows.

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