Now that many of you have finished your Annotated Bibliographies, you will be spending this week drafting your papers. Here are some practical tips for completing your first draft, while making sure you are grounded in the text:
1. Figure out your thesis. Remember, it needs to be an interpretive, literary claim. If you're not talking about what a specific text and/or author is doing or showing in your argument, you are off-track. It also needs to make an argument, not just an observation. See the (Hypo)thesis lecture to refresh your memory on what I mean here.
2. Assemble your best quotes from the text(s) you're writing about. Think of at least 4 or 5 moments in the text that help demonstrate your thesis.
3. Now, assemble your quotes from your secondary sources. These could be claims that support your own; that highlight a concept or example you find important; that demonstrate a connection between your argument and an existing conversation or topic; or they could be pieces of biographical or historical information that help the reader understand something necessary about your text. Paste them separately.
4. Now, using your method of choice, create an outline for your argument. You can physically print and cut out both pages and move them around, or you can cut/paste in your word processor. The point is, you want to begin by thinking about how the text itself can help prove your argument, and how you want to present that argument. Then, it's just a matter of filling in the missing pieces: the topic sentences, the transitions connecting your ideas, etc.