The boys bring Tim's work under their scrutinizing glass. Two fiction pieces, "A Patch of Wild Grass" and "Motley of Denial" are read. This brings about a number of discussion points regarding how refrain works in fiction, what it means to be in Kentucky but not be able to write in Kentucky metaphorically, and how to know if a story is packed too tight or strung too loose. As always, more questions than answers, but a small workshop session studying the concrete details of our own writing. To read along, the pieces are on our Discord.