Welcome to The Writing Coach. On this podcast, I speak with the instructors, editors, coaches, and mentors who help writers and authors create their art, build their audience, and sell their work.
Welcome to episode #100 of The Writing Coach podcast.
In this special milestone episode of the show, host Kevin T. Johns answers questions from listeners and clients!
During the episode, Kevin answers questions about:
* How to keep your story realistic* When to approach beta readers* How to avoid falling into ruts with your writing* The most common mistakes he sees in his clients’ writing* How to know if a subplot is contributing to, or distracting from, the main story* His thoughts on writing software* How to work backstory into your narrative* How to get a writing coach certification* And much more!
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The Writing Coach Episode #100 Show Notes
Episode Transcript:
First up we have a question from author V.L. Stuart. V.L.’s the author of The Orb and Arrow series. They write, “A reviewer has told me that my battle scene is unrealistic. It involves archers, some of whom are elf and non-human species and magic users against orcs, undead, and a couple of nasty humans. How realistic can I be under those circumstances?”
That’s a great question. Obviously, you’re writing a
fantasy novel and so by mere nature of writing in that genre, you take a step
away from reality. What I think is usually going on when people say that they
feel like a story or a moment in a story is unrealistic is not actually that
the story doesn’t feel like the real world, but actually that the story isn’t
being true to the logic in physics and the laws created within the story world
of the noel itself.
To give you an example of what I’m talking about, I always remember the moment in the very first Mission: Impossible movie. That movie… As those movies went on, they kind of got more and more fantastic, but if you go back and watch that very first movie, it’s actually very much based in reality. It’s not superheroics, it’s much more of a traditional spy movie where people have normal skills and their technology isn’t too over the top.
There is a moment about three-quarters of the way through that movie or something, I don’t remember the exact details, but it’s something along the lines of Tom Cruise… I think he’s hanging onto like the front of the helicopter. The helicopter flies into like a train tunnel, it’s chasing a train. The helicopter explodes and Tom Cruise is blown… The force of the explosion blows Tom Cruise off the front of the helicopter and onto the roof of the moving train. I believe that’s it, and to me I thought that was a perfect example of a moment where people are going to roll their eyes and go, “That’s not realistic”, because nothing else in that movie has led us to believe this character could survive something like that or that the physics of the universe work in that manner.
If you go and watch Mission: Impossible 2, stuff like that’s happening all over the place. People are flying through the air and like karate chopping each other off of motorcycles and stuff like… It’s a John Woo movie and he’s clearly established this universe,