This week on the podcast, Jeff and V.E. Griffith work through a piece together. They talk about making sure the reader gets all the details they need, using body language to show more emotion, writing in a 3rd Grade child's voice, and when to use a summary. V.E. was also on episode 99 of the podcast.

V.E. Griffith's podcast is Revision Wizards and you can find it here https://revisionwizards.com

For more on dialogue, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/