Scott talks dialogue revisions and dialogue tweaking (1:00) before moving to the new coloring process he's experimenting with (9:30).  Keith reviews his week (17:10) and character writing before we answer some listener questions on writing workshops, video resources for artists and comic scripts (32:05).

As promised in the discussion, here is the link for comic page examples:  https://keithrfoster.com/home-1/comic-scripts-examples