In this episode, SW Milar returns to the podcast. He and Jeff look at a piece together and talk about removing the burden from the reader, talking to inanimate objects, bringing back repeated conversations to show character growth, and placing prose between segments.

For more on dialogue, check out https://dialoguedoctor.com/.

To find more of SW Milar's work, go to https://swmillar.com/

To listen to other episodes with SW Milar, check out episodes 58 and 71.