In this insightful episode of Indie Author Magazine, our hosts take a deep dive into one of the most common challenges writers face: how to use point of view (POV) to skillfully filter detail and steer clear of the dreaded infodump. Drawing on Rona Gofstein’s practical advice, they explore how leveraging POV isn’t just a stylistic choice—it’s a structural fix for keeping your story moving, your characters vivid, and your readers fully engaged.

From understanding how character history shapes every observation, to harnessing selective description that reveals motivation and drives plot, we showcase techniques you can apply right away, whatever your genre. With relatable examples—from bibliophiles distracted by bookshelves, to city dwellers awestruck by country stars—they demonstrate how POV turns setting and detail into tools for deepening characterization and forward momentum.

Whether you’re wrestling with too much detail or struggling to bring your world alive, this episode offers tangible ways to revise, refine, and make every moment in your manuscript count.

Timestamps for Key Segments:

• 00:00:16 – Spotlight on Dropcap Marketplace: Connecting indie authors globally

• 00:01:44 – The Infodump Dilemma: Why balance matters

• 00:03:05 – POV as a Filter: The key to relevant description

• 00:04:15 – Character Examples: Value-based observation in action

• 00:06:04 – When Noticing Detail Moves Plot and Relationships

• 00:08:08 – Volume Control: Matching detail to genre and length

• 00:09:19 – Revision Strategies: Where to add and what to cut

• 00:10:16 – Spotlight on Change: Using new details to drive story

• 00:11:35 – Final Takeaways: Making every detail worthwhile

Join us for practical, lively discussion designed to help you think differently about detail—so description becomes your secret weapon, not your stumbling block.