This episode is also a video! If you'd like to view our agent's screen as she works, click here: https://manuscriptacademy.com/mystery-agent-september

We love this experiment! We asked you to send in your queries, pages, and questions--all in the hopes of a meeting with our mystery agent.

This month, our mystery agent chose a beautiful, intricate thriller--and spoke with the writer about optimizing for how agents read. The edits include reordering, swapping out descriptions, and making sure she makes the best use of her limited query real estate.