This is a full masterclass on writing better sentences in your fantasy novel, drawing from my experience of editing around 800,000 words over the past year. Get ProWritingAid (20% discount with my affiliate link): <a href="https://www.youtube.com/redirect?event=video_description&redir_token=QUFFLUhqbXhzT0x1SGZ3cExreG5QNWNPZ3NGUkJTc2I4UXxBQ3Jtc0trZ3d0QkZqb0h2TTI0emU1MUtySzV4b0VwVkQ1MXBxejQ4OUNLcXZBTEowbEUzSnY0SlBBdzdHNXZuc1pvVGsxXzE3dURZTzNmRUVFLWVCdmh2R2RzVXpPRUFzRDNkZ1JEdXE5UjZ4b01oYkg0ZkFDWQ&q=https%3A%2F%2Fjedherne.com%2Fprowritingaid&v=hWGBJQxqHkM" rel="noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">https://jedherne.com/prowritingaid</a> Watch the video version of this episode on YouTube: <a href="https://youtu.be/hWGBJQxqHkM?si=PwIgA_2fx2SuD4lv" rel="noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">https://youtu.be/hWGBJQxqHkM?si=PwIgA_2fx2SuD4lv</a><hr> Hosted on Acast. See <a style='color:grey;' target='_blank' rel='noopener noreferrer' href='https://acast.com/privacy'>acast.com/privacy</a> for more information.

This is a full masterclass on writing better sentences in your fantasy novel, drawing from my experience of editing around 800,000 words over the past year. Get ProWritingAid (20% discount with my affiliate link): https://jedherne.com/prowritingaid Watch the video version of this episode on YouTube: https://youtu.be/hWGBJQxqHkM?si=PwIgA_2fx2SuD4lv Hosted on Acast. See acast.com/privacy for more information.

This is a full masterclass on writing better sentences in your fantasy novel, drawing from my experience of editing around 800,000 words over the past year. Get ProWritingAid (20% discount with my affiliate link): <a href="https://www.youtube.com/redirect?event=video_description&amp;redir_token=QUFFLUhqbXhzT0x1SGZ3cExreG5QNWNPZ3NGUkJTc2I4UXxBQ3Jtc0trZ3d0QkZqb0h2TTI0emU1MUtySzV4b0VwVkQ1MXBxejQ4OUNLcXZBTEowbEUzSnY0SlBBdzdHNXZuc1pvVGsxXzE3dURZTzNmRUVFLWVCdmh2R2RzVXpPRUFzRDNkZ1JEdXE5UjZ4b01oYkg0ZkFDWQ&amp;q=https%3A%2F%2Fjedherne.com%2Fprowritingaid&amp;v=hWGBJQxqHkM" rel="noopener noreferrer">https://jedherne.com/prowritingaid</a> Watch the video version of this episode on YouTube: <a href="https://youtu.be/hWGBJQxqHkM?si=PwIgA_2fx2SuD4lv" rel="noopener noreferrer">https://youtu.be/hWGBJQxqHkM?si=PwIgA_2fx2SuD4lv</a> Hosted on Acast. See <a href="https://acast.com/privacy" rel="noopener noreferrer">acast.com/privacy</a> for more information.

20 Sentence Mistakes New Fantasy Writers Make

Hi! My name is Jed Herne, and on this podcast, I share the best fantasy writing advice that I've learned from publishing four fantasy novels and coaching 170+ writers in my different classes and programs. My books include Kingdom of Dragons, The Thunder Heist, Across the Broken Stars, and Fires of the Dead. I also wrote Siege of Treboulain - an interactive epic fantasy novel, published by Choice of Games. I also created the Wizards, Warriors, &amp; Words, and Novel Analyst podcasts. Expect to learn about plotting, character development, worldbuilding, magic systems, and lots more. *** If you want to take your writing further, check out my FREE 5-day character development course: <a href="https://jedherne.com/character-course/?podcast=Fantasy%20Writing%20Show%20-%20Link%20in%20'about'%20section" rel="noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">https://jedherne.com/character-course</a> <hr> Hosted on Acast. See <a style='color:grey;' target='_blank' rel='noopener noreferrer' href='https://acast.com/privacy'>acast.com/privacy</a> for more information.

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Hi! My name is Jed Herne, and on this podcast, I share the best fantasy writing advice that I've learned from publishing four fantasy novels and coaching 170+ writers in my different classes and programs. My books include Kingdom of Dragons, The Thunder Heist, Across the Broken Stars, and Fires of the Dead. I also wrote Siege of Treboulain - an interactive epic fantasy novel, published by Choice of Games. I also created the Wizards, Warriors, & Words, and Novel Analyst podcasts. Expect to learn about plotting, character development, worldbuilding, magic systems, and lots more. *** If you want to take your writing further, check out my FREE 5-day character development course: https://jedherne.com/character-course Hosted on Acast. See acast.com/privacy for more information.

Hi! My name is Jed Herne, and on this podcast, I share the best fantasy writing advice that I've learned from publishing four fantasy novels and coaching 170+ writers in my different classes and programs. My books include Kingdom of Dragons, The Thunder Heist, Across the Broken Stars, and Fires of the Dead. I also wrote Siege of Treboulain - an interactive epic fantasy novel, published by Choice of Games. I also created the Wizards, Warriors, &amp; Words, and Novel Analyst podcasts. Expect to learn about plotting, character development, worldbuilding, magic systems, and lots more. *** If you want to take your writing further, check out my FREE 5-day character development course: <a href="https://jedherne.com/character-course/?podcast=Fantasy%20Writing%20Show%20-%20Link%20in%20'about'%20section" rel="noopener noreferrer">https://jedherne.com/character-course</a> Hosted on Acast. See <a href="https://acast.com/privacy" rel="noopener noreferrer">acast.com/privacy</a> for more information.

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