Episode 095
Can I Come In
I slept in Keanu’s Airstream the other night with rain pattering down in full surround sound. An energetic immersion of splish, drip and splatter while curled up warm and cozy. A delicious dichotomy all night long, then waking up electric and happy. Life at the movie studio.
Welcome to 095, Can I Come In, Daughter of Godcast Season Two Crowd Creation.
In 094 Grown Up Ghost we considered an orphaned fragment, a scene that has no movie, yet. The request we made then was for help discovering how Grown Up Ghost might be reclaimed. In episode 095, we’re sussing out Grown Up Ghost’s destiny, antennae quivering with feedback and then offering a related scene, Can I Come In.
Originally, there were three story objectives for Grown Up Ghost. The first was to give Christina Joe’s hat. The second was to establish the PKD theme and the third reveal Christina’s unique experience of reality. These last two have already been touched on in prior scenes, so they are not primary outcomes. Aside from the hat, what’s Grown Up Ghost driving at? I am not sure. I see a wooden Buddha, crudely carved but with a secret gem at the heart.
Because Daughter of God is resonant with all creation, asking for feedback on Grown Up Ghost is like reading a spread of tarot cards. We receive opinions and comments knowing that everything is redolent with the essential, even or maybe especially flippant wise cracks, disinterest, and digressions. Everything is a finger pointing to the ineffable.
Let’s read the scattered bones, the swirl of tea leaves and find out what the feedback REALLY means. Rediscover what this scene might be about.
Frank via FB got things off to a promising start.
“For some reason I don’t get a “vacation” type vibe.. more like they are traveling with a purpose… such as visiting family.. or they’re on the run, but they seem too chill for that.”
Not a “vacation” vibe. Traveling with a purpose. On the run. Frank’s take feels spot on for me. This scene is slightly charged, or should be. Are they even traveling? Perhaps they are waiting, biding their time, letting a catastrophe pass them by. Perhaps this is training. How to hide, how to be ready for what’s coming. How to pass the time.
Perhaps this moment has significance in the outside world, where were you when? I was in that sailboat with Uncle Joe, he was reading me a story, and then… WHOOSH! Paradigm shift.
What if the movie opened with this scene, fragmented and slightly contradictory, maybe reversed left to right and then back again, wavery. How would an authentic memory feel for Christina?
Tony who lives over the hill via Facebook .
“LOL is that the boat in your front yard?”
This is Tony’s first foray into feedback, so we gotta cut him some slack. Aside from earning his wise ass merit badge, what has Tony revealed with his question?
The actual boat is indeed on a trailer at my house. In shooting the scene, no attempt was made to make this boat seem to be in open water or even moored. Creating the illusion that the boat is floating would not be trivial. The plan was to establish this as a the grounded boat by adding an additional shot of Uncle Joe stomping up the gang plank. Tony’s remark emphasizes that whatever reason Christina and Joe have for being on the boat, traveling is not one of them.
Jil via email was concise.
[snip] “The scene with Uncle Joe and Christina was not interesting to me. Philip K Dick is not as interesting as dialogue written by Dan Kelly. At all. No” [snip]
Jil is opining that the scene is BORING, doesn’t have a