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Title: The Haunted Hearse
Author: Drac Von Stoller
Narrator: Mike Vendetti
Format: Unabridged
Length: 6 mins
Language: English
Release date: 06-04-12
Publisher: Drac Von Stoller
Genres: Fiction, Horror
Publisher's Summary:
Business as usual down at Dracs funeral home - so they say. But there was one thing wrong with this picture: Dracs funeral home hasn't been in operation since old man Wethers' funeral home was shut down because a brand new funeral home was built across the street from Dracs. When old man Wethers was run down by a speeding hearse, 20 years later the ghost of old man Wethers would be back, seeking revenge after midnight if anyone dared to pass by Dracs funeral home. Old man Wethers was about to find out who the killer was that ran him down at his cemetery all those years ago. And revenge would be just what he had been wanting for all those years.
Members Reviews:
Bad Story Telling, Bad Editing, Just Bad Bad Bad
I love a good ghost story. A good revenge ghost story is even better. Except when it is written badly. Which this one was. The amount of times the phrase "Dracs Funeral Home and Cemetary" was written in this 3 page story I was wondering if the author thought we would forget who owned the Funeral Home. This was worse because he never mentions the name of the competing Funeral Home.
At times the author would contradict himself i.e.
" People would make fun of Dracs Funeral Home because it was small and musty inside and the cemetery wasn't well kept either....Dracs Funeral Home was the only one in town so there was no other funeral home to bury their loved ones."
while earlier he had said
" old man Wethers Funeral Home and Cemetery was shut down because a brand new funeral home and cemetery was built across the street from Dracs Funeral Home and cemetery."
Did Wethers close the funeral home because people made fun of the old funeral home or did he close it because there was a new one? I would also like to point out that in the 2nd quote the author calls the funeral home by two names. I had to read the first paragraph several times to see if there were 2 funeral homes or 3.
Later on we get two paragraphs back to back describing what happens when a car passes Dracs Funeral Home at midnight. Two paragraphs basically saying the exact same thing.
There are also grammar and spelling mistakes, but then my review would be longer than the story.
I do NOT recommend this story. It's worse than an elementary school composition.
Von Stoller, Drac (2011-08-01). The Haunted Hearse (Kindle Location various). . Kindle Edition.
Take an aspirin before reading!
Oh my, this book is, well, at the bottom of the barrel. The editing is almost non existent. The first paragraph is one very long sentence! In all honesty the book had a somewhat good storyline, however the execution was way off the mark. I felt like it was written by a ten year old who is an aspiring author. Maybe given time and some polishing there is hope for a good book in the future.
I Didn't Care For It
I remember watching an old movie that starred a creepy hearse which always showed up as an omen of things to come. . . .I remember it scaring me to pieces! Maybe I just expected too much, but I found this book a little anticlimactic.
just ok
the story was ok. I got lost really early in it though. imagination was pretty good here, but needs to be proofread by someone else. was confused by a word play that made no sense.
Don't waste your time
This reads like a fifth grade English assignment. Horrible. I am glad it only took less than five minutes to read