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Episode 2: Four Must-Haves at the Top of Every Scene in Your Book

In this episode of "Show Don't Tell Writing," Suzy Vadori delves into the critical elements that need to be at the top of every scene to keep your readers hooked. Learn why some books fail to engage and discover the simple checklist that ensures your scenes are compelling and grounded. Suzy breaks down the psychological phenomenon known as the doorway effect and its impact on your writing, offering practical advice to make your story irresistible from the first paragraph.

Main Topics of This Episode Include:

• Introduction to the four must-haves at the top of every scene to engage readers.
• Explanation of the doorway effect and its relevance to writing.
• The importance of grounding readers in each scene to prevent them from feeling lost and disengaged.

Key Points and Checklist:

1. Whose Head Are They In?
   • Establish the point of view (POV) quickly 
   • Use inner thoughts, reactions, actions, or dialogue to clarify POV.
2. Who Is in the Scene?
   • Clarify who is present in the scene right from the beginning. 
   • Avoid surprises later in the scene that confuse the reader.
3. Where Are Your Characters in Time?
   • Ground the reader in the specific time relative to the previous scene.
   • Ensure smooth transitions in the timeline to keep the reader oriented.
4. What’s Around Your Characters?
   • Provide specific details about the setting within the first two paragraphs. 
   • Use interaction with the setting to avoid info dumping and keep the narrative moving.

Practical Advice:

• Avoid assuming readers remember details from previous scenes.
• Consistently apply the grounding technique to maintain reader engagement.
• Balance providing essential information quickly without making it feel mechanical.

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