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➪➫➬➭正文开始！雅思写作题目:
Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
9分范文：
Experts throughout both the developing and developed world have debated whether the advent of sophisticated modern technology such as mobile phones, laptops and iPad have helped to enhance and improve people’s social lives or whether the opposite has become the case.
发展中国家和发达国家的专家都在争论，手机、笔记本电脑和 iPad 等复杂现代技术的出现是否有助于增强和改善人们的社交生活 还是相反。
Personally, I strongly advocate the former view. This essay will discuss both sides using examples from the UK government and Oxford University to demonstrate points and prove arguments.
就我个人而言，我强烈支持前一种观点。本文将使用英国政府和牛津大学的例子来讨论双方，以证明观点和论点。
On the one hand there is ample, powerful, almost daily evidence that such technology can be detrimental especially to the younger generation who are more easily affected by it’s addictive nature and which can result in people feeling more isolated from the society.
一方面，有大量、有力的、几乎每天都有证据表明，这种技术可能是有害的，尤其是对年轻一代，他们更容易受到其成瘾性的影响，这可能导致人们感到与社会更加孤立 。
The central reason behind this is twofold, firstly, the invention of online social media sites and apps, such as Twitter and Facebook have reduced crucial face-to-face interactions dramatically. Through use of these appealing and attractive mediums, people feel in touch and connected yet lack key social skills and the ability to communicate.
这背后的主要原因有两个，首先，Twitter 和 Facebook 等在线社交媒体网站和应用程序的发明大大减少了 重要的面对面互动 。通过使用这些吸引人和有吸引力的媒介，人们会感到有联系和联系，但缺乏关键的社交技能和沟通能力。
Secondly, dependence on such devices is built up frighteningly easily which may have a damaging effect on mental health and encourage a sedentary lifestyle. For example, recent scientific research by the UK government demonstrated that 90% of people in their 30s spend over 20 hours per week on Messenger and similar applications to chat with their friends instead of meeting up and spending quality time together or doing sport. As a result, it is conclusively clear that these technology advancements have decreased and diminished our real life interactions.
其次，对此类设备的依赖很容易建立起来，这可能会对心理健康产生破坏性影响 ，并鼓励久坐不动的生活方式 。例如，英国政府最近的科学研究表明，90% 的 30 多岁的人每周在 Messenger 和类似应用程序上花费超过 20 小时与朋友聊天，而不是见面、 共度美好时光或进行运动。因此，很明显，这些技术进步已经减少并减少了我们现实生活中的互动。
On the other hand, although there are significant downsides to technological developments, its’ multifold advantages cannot be denied. This is largely because the popularity of technology such as cellphones allows people to connect freely and easily with no geographical barriers.
另一方面，尽管技术发展存在重大缺点，但它的多重优势是不可否认的。这主要是因为手机等技术的普及使人们能够自由轻松地连接，没有地理障碍 。
People are able to share any type of news, information, photos and opinions with their loved ones whenever and wherever they want therefore keeping a feeling of proximity and closeness. For example, an extensive study by Oxford University illustrated that people who work, or study abroad and use applications like Facetime and WhatsApp to chat with their families, are less likely to experience loneliness and feel out of the loop than those who do not.
人们能够随时随地与亲人分享任何类型的新闻、信息、照片和意见，从而保持亲近感。 例如，牛津大学的一项广泛研究表明，与不工作或出国留学并使用 Facetime 和 WhatsApp 等应用程序与家人聊天的人相比，他们不太可能感到孤独和脱离圈子。
Consistent with this line of thinking is that businessmen are also undoubtedly able to benefit from these advances by holding virtual real -time meetings using Skype which may increase the chance of closing business deals without the need to fly.
与这种思路一致的是，商人无疑也能够通过使用 Skype 举行虚拟实时会议从这些进步中受益，这可能会增加无需飞行即可完成业务交易的机会。
From the arguments and examples given I firmly believe that overall communication and mans’ sociability has been advanced enormously due to huge the huge technological progress of the past twenty years and despite some potentially serious health implications which governments should not fail to address, it is predicted that its popularity will continue to flourish in the future.
从给出的论点和例子中，我坚信，由于过去 20 年的巨大技术进步，整体交流和人类的社交能力已经得到了极大的进步，尽管政府不应忽视一些潜在的严重健康影响，但可以预测它的受欢迎程度将在未来继续蓬勃发展 。
实用搭配：
- sophisticated modern technology 先进的现代技术
- enhance and improve people’s social lives 增强和改善人们的社交生活
- addictive nature 令人上瘾的本质
- feel out of the loop 感觉脱离了循环
- isolated from society 与社会隔绝
- reduce crucial face-to-face interactions dramatically 显著减少关键的面对面互动
- a damaging effect on mental health 对心理健康的破坏性影响
- encourage a sedentary lifestyle 鼓励久坐不动的生活方式
- spend quality time together 共度美好时光
- connect freely and easily with no geographical barriers 轻松自由连接，没有地域障碍
- proximity and closeness 接近度和接近度
- its less likely to experience loneliness 它不太可能感到孤独
- popularity will continue to flourish 人气将继续蓬勃发展
题目分析：
题目类型：
属于雅思写作Task 2中“程度同意”（To what extent）型的观点类议论文，要求评估对题干陈述的同意程度并给出理由。
应根据“To what extent”要求，决定是AA（全同意）、DD（全不同意）还是AD（部分同意/平衡观点），并围绕选定立场展开论点；本范文采取AD结构，先论反方不足，再论正方优势，最后重申完全同意立场。
解题思路
- 同义转换 & 背景引入：初步用不同表达复述题干，展示丰富词汇句型与准确理解；
- 表明立场 & 文章预览：在引言段给出“I strongly advocate…”等明确立场，并通过“This essay will…”提示行文结构；
- “让步反驳法”（Concession-Refutation Structure）平衡论证：主体段既展开反方（On the one hand…），又展开正方（On the other hand…），并配合数据与实例支撑；
- 总结重申：结论段对观点进行概括，并可适当展望或提出建议，始终围绕题意作答
结构特色与得分作者采用“让步反驳法”（Concession-Refutation Structure），通过平衡讨论正反观点，最终强化己方立场。
- 让步反驳的层次性：
- 先承认反方（技术导致孤立），但通过限定条件（“年轻人”“可能”）削弱其普遍性。
- 再用更强例证（牛津研究、商业案例）覆盖更广泛人群，证明技术社交价值的“不可逆趋势”。
- 例证权威性与多样性：
- 政府数据（UK government研究）：增强反方论点的客观性。
- 学术研究（Oxford University）：提升正方论点的可信度。
- 多场景覆盖：个人社交（家庭联系）、职业需求（商务会议）体现技术影响的全面性。
- 批判性思维体现：
- 结论段承认技术弊端（健康问题），但将其归为“政府应解决的次要问题”，而非否定技术本身的价值，符合高分作文的“ nuanced position”（复杂立场）。
- 语言与逻辑衔接：
- 对比连接词：”On the one hand… On the other hand…” 清晰划分正反论点。
- 因果逻辑：
- 反方：”dependence… sedentary lifestyle” → 结果：”diminished real-life interactions”。
- 正方：”connect with no geographical barriers” → 结果：”feel proximity and closeness”。
答题技巧与要领总结
- 精准解题规划：写作前用2–3分钟进行思路和段落结构规划，确保每段聚焦一个中心话题，并预留统计或例证位置。
- 同义替换与高级词汇：引言段运用同义转换复述题目，全文穿插地道搭配（detrimental, sedentary lifestyle, geographical barriers等）满足Lexical Resource要求。
- 清晰段落框架：引言Paraphrase+Thesis+Outline，主体Topic Sentence→Explain→Example→Summary，结论Summary+Restate构成标准模板，有助于Coherence & Cohesion评分。
- 逻辑衔接手段：使用On the one hand/On the other hand, Firstly/Secondly, As a result等连接词自然过渡，段内段间衔接紧密。
- 具体数据与权威例证：引用官方研究（UK government, Oxford University）或典型案例增强说服力，体现Task Response对“fully extended and well supported ideas”的要求。
- 句式多样化：灵活使用复合句、倒装、被动语态及长短句交替，提升Grammatical Range & Accuracy评分。
- 观点一致性：保持引言至结论立场一致，避免自相矛盾，确保Task Response的连贯性与一致性。
思维导图：
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