In this episode, we'll delve into why essays are crucial, the use of AI in college applications, utilizing every word available in the Common Application and how to find your unique voice, and making your application truly resonate with your top schools. 

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Key Points:

• Why Essays Matter:

  • Essays play a pivotal role in the college application process as they offer a platform for applicants to convey their unique stories and experiences.
  • Unlike grades and test scores, essays allow schools to understand an applicant's life journey, values, and perspectives.
  • Essays provide context to achievements and allow applicants to stand out from the sea of similar academic credentials.

• Crafting an Effective Story:

  • Stories can stem from seemingly mundane experiences but should reflect your passions and intellectual curiosity.
  • Sharing genuine interests, even if not overly dramatic, can showcase valuable qualities like curiosity, cultural awareness, and creativity.
  • While stories don't have to be traumatic, they should provide insights into your character and values.

• Economy of Language:

  • • Shorter essays require concise language and an efficient narrative.
    • Avoid excessive preambles or fluff; dive straight into the heart of your story.
    • Choose impactful details over grandiose language; focus on effective communication.

• The Use of AI to help write your essay 

  • It can certainly be helpful to help generate ideas but perfectly polished essays get lost in the stack of applicants. 
  • Slick essays can raise suspicions about authenticity and the only person who can truly tell your story, is you. 

Takeaway: The college essay process is an opportunity to convey your unique story and character to admissions committees. Embrace the power of storytelling and authenticity. Be true to yourself, find your own voice, and use essays as a platform to showcase your passions, interests, and values. Communication skills gained from the essay process are invaluable in both academics and professional life. So remember, the journey of self-discovery and effective communication begins with crafting a compelling narrative in your college essays.

 

About Thomas Caleel

Thomas is an alumnus of the University of Pennsylvania. After earning his MBA at the Wharton School of Business in 2003, he moved to Silicon Valley. For three years, he was Director of MBA Admissions and Financial Aid at Wharton. He worked closely with admissions professionals, students, alumni, and professors to curate the best possible MBA class. Thomas has been an entrepreneur his entire life in the fields of finance, agriculture, wellness, and sporting goods. As the founder of Global Education Opportunities LLC, he works as a high level admissions advisor to help families and students achieve their education goals. Thomas started the podcast Admittedly because he is passionate about demystifying the application process for all parents and applicants.

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