Books are a bit like amusement park rides.
They come in all shapes and sizes and even levels of thrill, with enough
variation that there are few who don’t enjoy any sort of ride at all. But
there is one element that all rides must have if they're to succeed: an
expectation of pace.
Fast rides fly. Slow rides meander. But it’s rare that a ride will catapult
between high and low speeds until the rider begs to be removed. Why? Well,
the intense change in pacing would leave most riders bewildered—and likely
a bit nauseated, too.
The same goes for stories that lack consistent pacing. So let's avoid
bewildering, and perhaps even nauseating, our readers, shall we? Buckle up,
writers. We’re about to go for a ride!