Draft Zero: a screenwriting podcast

DZ-112: Breaking the 4th wall


Listen Later

Listen to understand how breaking the 4th wall directly involves the audience in a character's emotional present.

As part of our series on how filmmakers can directly communicate to the audience, we finally examine the most blatant tool of them all: when character look directly down the barrel of the camera… and thus look directly at us, the viewer. Chas, Stu and Mel take the craft tools/levers they identified in previous episodes and use them to examine the tv-version-of HIGH FIDELITY ("Top Five Breakups"), ABBOTT ELEMENTARY ("Attack Ad)") and - of course - FLEABAG.

By examining how “in-world” the camera is, who is talking, and whom the character is talking to (i.e. who we are in the relationship), we end up discovering how breaking the 4th wall can involve the audience in the emotional present of the character and also grants the character a degree of narrative control (a craft lever that can be dialled in and out).

Separately, in a Backmatter to this episode (which can be found on our Patreon page), Mel and Chas answer a listener question and take a deep dive into how breaking the 4th wall changes the RELATIONSHIP between you - the viewer - and character.

This episode brought to you by (drum roll) ArcStudio: go to $30 off a pro subscription! Thanks to Chris Walker for his excellent editing this episode.

As always: SPOILERS ABOUND and all copyright material used under fair use for educational purposes.

LIKE THIS EPISODE?

  • Discuss with our Patrons on Patreon.
  • Watch and comment on YouTube.
  • Send us feedback.
  • Thanks to our Patrons, especially Lily, Paulo, Alexandre, Malay, Jennifer, Thomas, Randy, Jesse, Sandra, Theis and Khrob.

    Read the transcript for this episode.

    ———

    "She's trying to work herself out in some ways. Like it's the reason a lot of people write in their diary or self-talk or do have a running monologue or encourage that. Like she's trying to understand and explain herself and in doing so maybe hopefully help herself." — Mel Killingsworth @ 00:35:50

    ———

    CHAPTERS

    • 00:00:00 – Cold Open
    • 00:00:16 – What is "barrelling"? or Breaking the Fourth Wall
    • 00:05:32 – › Narrative control as a resource in fourth wall breaking
    • 00:09:50 – › How voiceover levers apply to barrelling the camera
    • 00:13:44 – HIGH FIDELITY: "Top Five Heartbreaks"
    • 00:19:59 – › Fourth wall breaks as emotional present, not flashback
    • 00:25:21 – › Rob's narrative control and unreliable self-knowledge
    • 00:35:19 – › What Rob wants from the audience she's confiding in
    • 00:37:32 – ABBOTT ELEMENTARY: "Attack Ad"
    • 00:44:37 – › What each character wants when addressing the camera
    • 00:49:27 – › The documentary crew's agenda and point of view
    • 00:54:01 – › How the mockumentary form is extended and played with
    • 00:59:29 – › Format rigidity compared across mockumentary shows
    • 01:01:27 – Sponsor: Arc Studio Pro
    • 01:04:09 – FLEABAG:
    • 01:05:22 – › Establishing Fleabag's conceit and season two structure
    • 01:09:28 – › How fourth wall breaks become intrusive and uncontrolled
    • 01:20:12 – › Running from and returning to the camera as emotional avoidance
    • 01:31:45 – › Need versus want: what Fleabag seeks from the audience
    • 01:37:34 – › Why breaking the fourth wall externalises the internal
    • 01:40:54 – Key Learnings & Wrap Up
    • 01:43:38 – › Why granting narrative control limits fourth wall breaking
    • 01:50:48 – Thank You Patreons!
    • SHOWS

      • HIGH FIDELITY 1x1 "Top Five Heartbreaks" — Jeffrey Reiner, Jesse Peretz (d), Sarah Kucserka, Veronica West (w)
      • ABBOTT ELEMENTARY 2x7 "Attack Ad" — Matt Sohn (d), Justin Tan (w)
      • FLEABAG 2x4 — Harry Bradbeer (d), Phoebe Waller Bridge (w)
      • LINKS

        • Sponsor: ArcStudio - $30 off a pro subscription!
        • EPISODES IN THE TALKING DIRECTLY TO THE AUDIENCE SERIES

          • DZ-109: Talking DIRECTLY to your audience
          • DZ-110: Voiceover
          • DZ-111: Unreliable Narrators and FIGHT CLUB
          • DZ-112: Breaking the 4th wall
          • DZ-113: Tools For Filmmakers To Talk To The Audience
          • RELATED EPISODES

            • DZ-109: Talking DIRECTLY to your audience
            • DZ-110: Voiceover
            • DZ-111: Unreliable Narrators and FIGHT CLUB
            • ———

              More Draft Zero is brought to you by our awesome Patreons.

              If you enjoy the show, please leave a review on Apple Podcasts, a rating on Spotify, or a review on Podchaser.

              We are @stuwillis, @mehlsbells and @chasffisher on Twitter. You can find @draft_zero and @_shotzero on Instagram and Twitter.

              Full show notes at: https://draft-zero.com/2024/dz-112/

              ...more
              View all episodesView all episodes
              Download on the App Store

              Draft Zero: a screenwriting podcastBy Chas Fisher and Stuart Willis

              • 4.8
              • 4.8
              • 4.8
              • 4.8
              • 4.8

              4.8

              114 ratings


              More shows like Draft Zero: a screenwriting podcast

              View all
              The Business by KCRW

              The Business

              671 Listeners

              Scriptnotes Podcast by John August and Craig Mazin

              Scriptnotes Podcast

              2,434 Listeners

              The Director’s Cut - A DGA Podcast by Directors Guild of America

              The Director’s Cut - A DGA Podcast

              749 Listeners

              Talk Easy with Sam Fragoso by Higher Ground

              Talk Easy with Sam Fragoso

              1,489 Listeners

              The Watch by The Ringer

              The Watch

              5,410 Listeners

              Blank Check with Griffin & David by Blank Check Productions

              Blank Check with Griffin & David

              6,194 Listeners

              The A24 Podcast by A24

              The A24 Podcast

              1,083 Listeners

              Unspooled by Paul Scheer & Amy Nicholson | Realm

              Unspooled

              4,757 Listeners

              The Big Picture by The Ringer

              The Big Picture

              5,715 Listeners

              The Screenwriting Life with Meg LeFauve and Lorien McKenna by Meg LeFauve & Lorien McKenna

              The Screenwriting Life with Meg LeFauve and Lorien McKenna

              977 Listeners

              Team Deakins by James Ellis Deakins, Roger Deakins

              Team Deakins

              1,123 Listeners

              SmartLess by Jason Bateman, Sean Hayes, Will Arnett

              SmartLess

              58,226 Listeners

              The Prestige TV Podcast by The Ringer

              The Prestige TV Podcast

              1,701 Listeners

              The Town with Matthew Belloni by The Ringer

              The Town with Matthew Belloni

              1,121 Listeners

              Good Hang with Amy Poehler by The Ringer

              Good Hang with Amy Poehler

              12,456 Listeners