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DZ-122: Escalating Antagonism Across Genres


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Listen to learn how thinking of your hero as the horror (for your villains) makes your script dynamic.

In this episode Chas, Stu and guest Kim Ho continue their exploration into the power(s) of antagonism and how focusing on them can develop story.

While Part 1 looked at the horror film SINNERS, in Part 2 we venture into genres beyond horror with the action-thriller REBEL RIDGE, and the comedy classic MEET THE PARENTS.

To both these films we apply the generative story framework TOMBS (Transgression – Omens – Manifestation – Banishment – Slumber) and are surprised at just how well it maps. TOMBS comes from the MOTHERSHIP sci-fi horror table-top role-playing game. Which we love.

We explore how TOMBS, and thinking about antagonism in general, allows writers to deepen their understanding of their characters, their relationship of the heroes with the antagonists, and generate story fuel in a way that escalates the story.

We discuss how thinking of your hero as the horror for your villains helps everything become more dynamic.

Oh, and we talk about launching an actual play podcast. Which is happening. Stay tuned!

As always: SPOILERS ABOUND and all copyright material used under fair use for educational purposes.

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    Read the transcript for this episode.

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    "There's a great line from Don Johnson later where he says, the deal was fair. The issue is that you felt that you were allowed to offer it. He tells him that he has transgressed against the rules of the laws or the rules of this system of this world." — Chas Fisher @ 00:12:09

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    CHAPTERS

    • 00:00:00 – Cold Open
    • 00:00:12 – Escalating Antagonism Part 2
    • 00:03:29 – REBEL RIDGE
    • 00:09:30 – › Writing loglines from the antagonist's perspective
    • 00:14:36 – › Tombs cycle maps onto hero and villain escalation
    • 00:25:07 – › Solve, survive, save structure in action films
    • 00:33:16 – › Self-restraint as survival within systemic corruption
    • 00:45:30 – MEET THE PARENTS
    • 00:51:55 – › Greg's lying as the true transgression engine
    • 00:57:41 – › Structural turning points and escalating disaster beats
    • 01:01:28 – › Jack versus Greg's insecurity as twin sources of antagonism
    • 01:19:33 – › Applying TOMBS structure to map omens and manifestation
    • 01:30:29 – Key Learnings & Wrap Up
    • 01:34:38 – › Mapping antagonism sources to escalate story conflict
    • 01:38:53 – › Expanding beyond Western storytelling structures
    • 01:41:38 – Thanks to our Patreons
    • FILMS

      • REBEL RIDGE (2024) — (w) Jeremy Saulnier
      • MEET THE PARENTS (2000) — (w) Jim Herzfeld, John Hamburg (d) Jay Roach
      • LINKS

        • IMDB: Kim Ho
        • Explore: Mothership
        • YouTube: The Philosophy of Final Destination
        • Read: The Philosophy of Horror or Paradoxes of the Heart by Noël Carroll
        • YouTube: GinnyDI - "This Game used 5 steps to scare the crap out of me"
        • Listen: 1dZ-01: Arkyvrs - A Mansion Most Vile - Ep1
        • EPISODES IN THE ESCALATING ANTAGONISM SERIES

          • DZ-121: Escalating Antagonism in SINNERS
          • DZ-122: Escalating Antagonism Across Genres
          • RELATED EPISODES

            • DZ-49: Antagonists! 1 - vs Humans
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