What craft tools make a low-budget, contained, period drama riveting?

Explore how narrative POV, interweaving relationships, hooky dialogue, and even the screenplay format itself make the script for BLUE MOON - that runs largely in real time about an obscure songwriter in the 1940s - one that attracts world class talent and Academy Award nominations.

While Stu is still on show and we are between the 2026 Oscar nominations and the actual ceremony, our patreons selected BLUE MOON for this one-shot and boy are Mel and Chas glad they did. They dive into many lessons learned in previous episodes, like our character-driven episode… or analysis of French scenes in Adolescence… or the story-telling power that comes from the audience knowing the ending from biopics.

As always: SPOILERS ABOUND and all copyright material used under fair use for educational purposes.

CHAPTERS

00:00:00 - BLUE MOON 00:02:19 - Summary of Key Learnings 00:13:34 - Controlling narrative POV 00:27:49 - Using screenplay FORMAT to reflect the emotional story 00:39:27 - Interweaving relationships 00:56:46 - Repetition and pop culture references in dialogue 01:07:54 - Key learnings in full 01:16:02 - Patreon thanks!

LINKS

Read the script for BLUE MOON on Script Slug

See the slug line breakdown at https://melkillingsworth.substack.com/p/blue-moon-scene-headings-breakdown

RELATED EPISODES

• DZ-01: Do screenplay gurus win you Oscars?
• DZ-68: Using narrative POV to structure KNIVES OUT
• DZ-118: Adolescence and tension through questions
• DZ-90: Raising (a different kind of) Stakes
• DZ-35: Driving Characters or Character-Driven?
• DZ-63: Tools for Better Dialogue - Hook and Eye

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