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Your inciting incident sets the stage for everything that follows. Here's what to revise so it can carry the story.
A great inciting incident does a lot of heavy lifting.
→ It hooks your readers, pulling them into the story.
→ And it sets up everything to come, laying the foundation for a brilliant climax your readers will love.
The beginning matters. Which means there’s a lot of pressure to get it right.
But what does right actually mean? How do you start a story well?
That’s what I’m tackling in this episode. I’m going beyond the definition of the inciting incident to share what I as an editor am looking for when I edit inciting incidents.
In other words, if you’ve written an inciting incident and aren’t sure how to tell if it works, this episode is your guide to edit it.
You’ll hear:
Plus, I’ve gathered it all into a one-page cheat sheet you can reference every time you edit an inciting incident. Print it out and keep it in your writing space for easy access.
If you’ve ever found the advice to “make sure your story has an inciting incident” unsatisfactory, this episode is for you.
Don’t just make sure your story has an inciting incident. Use this episode to revise it until it’s good. Great. Unputdownable, even.
Links mentioned in the episode:
Send me a Text Message!
Want my support in your revision?
In Story Clarity, we’ll work one-on-one to sharpen your story’s structure and craft a revision plan that works. If you’re ready for thoughtful, personalized feedback from an editor who gets what you’re trying to do, I’d love to hear what you’re working on.
Get started by telling me about your story here.
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"I love Alice and Your Next Draft." If that sounds like you, please consider rating and reviewing my show! This helps me support more writers through the mess—and joy—of the editing process. Click here, scroll to the bottom, tap the stars to rate, and select “Write a Review.” Then be sure to let me know what you loved most about the episode!
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Your inciting incident sets the stage for everything that follows. Here's what to revise so it can carry the story.
A great inciting incident does a lot of heavy lifting.
→ It hooks your readers, pulling them into the story.
→ And it sets up everything to come, laying the foundation for a brilliant climax your readers will love.
The beginning matters. Which means there’s a lot of pressure to get it right.
But what does right actually mean? How do you start a story well?
That’s what I’m tackling in this episode. I’m going beyond the definition of the inciting incident to share what I as an editor am looking for when I edit inciting incidents.
In other words, if you’ve written an inciting incident and aren’t sure how to tell if it works, this episode is your guide to edit it.
You’ll hear:
Plus, I’ve gathered it all into a one-page cheat sheet you can reference every time you edit an inciting incident. Print it out and keep it in your writing space for easy access.
If you’ve ever found the advice to “make sure your story has an inciting incident” unsatisfactory, this episode is for you.
Don’t just make sure your story has an inciting incident. Use this episode to revise it until it’s good. Great. Unputdownable, even.
Links mentioned in the episode:
Send me a Text Message!
Want my support in your revision?
In Story Clarity, we’ll work one-on-one to sharpen your story’s structure and craft a revision plan that works. If you’re ready for thoughtful, personalized feedback from an editor who gets what you’re trying to do, I’d love to hear what you’re working on.
Get started by telling me about your story here.
Support the show
Rate, Review, & Follow on Apple Podcasts
"I love Alice and Your Next Draft." If that sounds like you, please consider rating and reviewing my show! This helps me support more writers through the mess—and joy—of the editing process. Click here, scroll to the bottom, tap the stars to rate, and select “Write a Review.” Then be sure to let me know what you loved most about the episode!
Loving the show? Show your support with a monthly contribution »
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