Master Fiction Writing

Ever read a novel where two characters explain things to each other that they both already know? Or found yourself wading through three pages of backstory just when things were getting interesting?

Exposition gets a bad reputation, but the problem isn't necessarily the information itself. It's how, when and why we're giving it to the reader.

In this episode of Master Fiction Writing, I'm exploring how to make exposition feel like a natural part of your storytelling rather than an interruption.

We'll look at why characters rarely share information without a reason, how their motives influence what they reveal (and what they conveniently leave out), and why the difference between what characters know and what readers need to know can create some wonderfully interesting situations.

I'll also introduce James and Sarah, two siblings discussing their late father's house, to demonstrate how a rather dreadful piece of exposition can become a scene with genuine tension and conflict.

Along the way, we'll explore examples from Andy Weir's The Martian and Daphne du Maurier's Rebecca, consider the particular challenges of backstory and worldbuilding, and discuss why sometimes the best way to give readers information is simply to tell them.

Because not every piece of exposition needs to arrive disguised as a dramatic confrontation. Sometimes readers just need to know where the bloody train is going.

If you're struggling with a passage of exposition in your manuscript, ask yourself these five questions:

1. Why does the reader need this information now? Would it be more effective earlier, later, or not at all?

2. If a character is delivering the information, what do they want to achieve? Are they trying to persuade, reassure, justify, impress or conceal something?

3. Does the person receiving the information have their own agenda? What do they want from the conversation, and does it differ from what the other character wants?

4. Does the exposition belong naturally in the scene? Or are the characters explaining things purely for the reader's benefit?

5. Would straightforward narration actually work better? Sometimes one clear sentence is more effective than an elaborate exchange of dialogue.

Remember, the goal isn't to eliminate exposition from your novel. It's to make sure the information earns its place.

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You've spent chapters building towards a huge moment in your novel. A betrayal, a death, a shocking revelation, or perhaps a long-awaited victory. It happens, it's dramatic, and you're rather pleased with yourself... but what happens afterwards?

In this episode of Master Fiction Writing, I'm exploring the aftermath scene. Those moments when characters have to live with, make sense of, or respond to something significant that's happened.

Because sometimes what happens after the big moment is just as interesting as the moment itself.

We'll look at examples from The Hunger Games, Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix, and Pride and Prejudice, as well as an original scenario involving a woman who discovers that her sister, missing for eighteen years, is alive but doesn't want to be found.

Along the way, we'll explore why characters don't always react as we'd expect, how their interpretation of events can create new conflicts, and why an aftermath doesn't necessarily mean bringing the story to a halt for several pages of emotional reflection.

After all, sometimes the most revealing response to a life-changing event is to put the kettle on ( I see you, my fellow Brits).

If you're wondering whether your characters are properly experiencing the events of your novel, try asking yourself these five questions:

1. What has changed for the character because of this event? Think beyond their immediate circumstances. Has anything shifted in their understanding, priorities or relationships?

2. Does their response make sense for who they are? Not how you think somebody ought to react, but how this particular character might respond.

3. What might they be feeling, believing or interpreting that they aren't expressing? Is there a difference between what's happening internally and what they're showing the world?

4. What does their response reveal that the event itself didn't? Are we learning something new about the character or their relationships?

5. How does the aftermath influence what happens next? Does it lead to a decision, a new goal, a misunderstanding or a change in how the character sees things?

Remember, not every significant event needs its own aftermath scene, but if something important happens in your novel, it should matter to the people experiencing it.

A quick spoiler warning: This episode discusses significant plot developments in The Hunger Games, Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix, and Pride and Prejudice.

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Ever found yourself shouting at a fictional character because they're about to do something spectacularly stupid? We've all been there. But why do some terrible decisions make characters more compelling, while others leave us wondering what on earth the writer was thinking?

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In this episode of Master Fiction Writing, I'm exploring why bad decisions can be brilliant for character development, provided they make sense for the person making them.

We'll look at characters including Jane Austen's Emma Woodhouse, Boromir from The Lord of the Rings, and Walter White from Breaking Bad, and examine how their fears, beliefs, desires and personal blind spots influence their choices.

I'll also introduce Helen, a fictional theatre director whose determination to protect her company leads her into an increasingly disastrous series of decisions.

The important distinction? Readers don't have to agree with a character's decisions. They just have to understand why that character would make them at that particular point in the story.

If you're wondering whether a character's questionable choices are helping or hurting your novel, try these five questions:

1. Does the decision make sense for this character at this point in the story? Consider what they know, believe, want and fear.

2. Why does the character believe this is the right choice? Even if the reader can see they're mistaken.

3. What would making the sensible decision cost them? What makes the alternative emotionally difficult?

4. Have I established enough for the reader to understand their reasoning? The explanation needs to exist on the page, not just in your head.

5. What happens because of the decision? Does it create meaningful consequences that influence what happens next?

Remember, a character making a bad decision isn't necessarily a problem. A character making a decision purely because the writer needs something to happen probably is.

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The Bad Decision Test

Unreliable Narrators: How to Mislead Readers Without Cheating Them

Can your readers trust the person telling them the story? And if they can't, how do you make that part of the storytelling rather than a cheap trick?

In this episode of Master Fiction Writing, I'm exploring the wonderful, complicated world of unreliable narrators. Inspired by a listener's question about a locked-cabin murder mystery, we'll look at how to mislead readers without making them feel cheated, and why unreliable narration is about much more than characters who tell lies.

We'll explore the differences between deliberate deception, selective storytelling, mistaken assumptions and self-deception, and how each creates a different reading experience. I'll also explain how point of view affects what you can reasonably conceal, how to plant clues that take on new meaning after a revelation, and why sometimes revealing a secret earlier can make your story even more compelling.

And unreliable narrators aren't just for mysteries and thrillers. From romance to historical fiction and family sagas, we'll look at how the gap between what characters believe and what's actually true can create emotional depth, dramatic tension and powerful character arcs.

There's also a practical writing exercise to help you explore the difference between what happened, what your character believes happened, and what they're willing to admit.

Because the best unreliable narrators don't just make us question what happened. They make us reconsider the person who's been telling us what happened.

In this episode:

• What makes a narrator unreliable (and why they don't have to be lying)

• How to conceal information without breaking your point-of-view contract

• Planting clues that reward readers rather than tricking them

• Deciding when to reveal the truth

• Using unreliable narration for emotional depth and character development

• A practical exercise you can apply to your own manuscript

Mentioned in this episode:

The Remains of the Day by Kazuo Ishiguro

Previous Master Fiction Writing episodes: The POV Contract: What You Owe the Reader in Scene 1 and The Reveal Is Not the Secret: How to Control What Your Reader Knows

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How do you keep a story moving when there’s no ticking clock, no looming deadline, and the plot unfolds across decades?

This week’s episode comes from a question sent in by Joan over on Ko-fi, who’s writing an epic family saga and wanted to know how to create pressure and momentum across a long timeframe.

I look at why momentum isn’t the same as speed, and how expansive stories can build narrative pressure through accumulation, consequence, emotional deadlines, generational cause and effect, time jumps, and recurring patterns.

Because the opposite of a thriller isn’t a story without pressure. It’s a story where pressure behaves differently.

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A great secret can give you material. The reveal is what turns that material into story.

In this episode of Master Fiction Writing, I’m looking at how to control what your reader knows, when they know it, and how the timing of information can completely change the tension in a scene or an entire novel.

We’ll explore the difference between mystery, suspense and surprise, why some reveals land while others feel flat, and how revealing information earlier can sometimes create far more story than saving everything for the final act.

There’s also a free workbook to go with the episode: The Reveal Map.

The exercises will help you:

• track who knows what, and when;

• test what happens if you move a reveal earlier or later;

• work out what changes after the truth comes out;

• seed information so the reveal feels surprising but earned.

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What makes dialogue feel alive? Very often, it’s what the characters aren’t saying.

In this episode of Master Fiction Writing, I’m looking at subtext: the gap between what a character wants from a conversation and what they’re actually prepared to say out loud.

We’ll explore how subtext can create tension, intimacy, humour, conflict and emotional depth, and why it works best when characters have a genuine reason to avoid directness. We’ll also look at how silence, deflection, physical behaviour and seemingly ordinary conversations can reveal far more than a page of explanation.

There’s a simple exercise, too: choose a scene, work out what each character really wants from the conversation, then ask why they can’t simply say it.

Because sometimes the most important thing in a scene is the thing nobody is quite ready to say yet.

Who really has the power in your scene?

Status is one of the hidden forces that can make a scene feel alive. It shapes who controls the conversation, who needs something more, who can walk away, and how the balance between characters changes from moment to moment.

In this episode of Master Fiction Writing, I explore how status works in dialogue, relationships, romance, comedy, conflict and quiet scenes. We’ll look at how power can shift even when a character’s official position stays exactly the same, why silence can be a status move, and how tiny behavioural choices can completely change the emotional temperature of a scene.

There’s also a simple exercise you can try with your own work: choose a two-character scene, decide who has the higher status at the beginning, track where the balance shifts, and see who holds the power by the end.

If a scene feels technically fine but somehow flat, status may be the missing ingredient.

What makes some characters instantly compelling to one another? Sometimes it isn’t vulnerability, physical attraction, or even conflict. Sometimes it’s the moment one character looks at another and thinks: Oh. You’re good.

In this episode of Master Fiction Writing, I explore the Hawksian woman, the confident, capable, quick-witted female character associated with the films of director Howard Hawks, and ask what this classic Hollywood archetype can teach contemporary fiction writers about creating characters with agency and relationships with genuine chemistry.

Using examples from To Have and Have Not, His Girl Friday, Much Ado About Nothing, Pride and Prejudice, Star Wars, The X-Files, Killing Eve, Mad Max: Fury Road, The Hunger Games, Firefly and more, we’ll look beyond the archetype itself to uncover the storytelling principles underneath it.

We’ll explore why competence can be attractive, why banter alone doesn’t create chemistry, how characters earn one another’s respect, and why some of the best relationships are built through mutual reassessment. We’ll also look at the limitations of the traditional Hawksian woman and how writers can take what works about the archetype without falling into the tired idea of the woman who earns respect simply because she’s “not like other girls.”

There’s also a practical exercise to help you examine an important relationship in your own story. You’ll identify what your characters initially believe about one another, find the actions that force them to reconsider those assumptions, and explore what becomes possible in the relationship as recognition turns into trust and intimacy.

Because sometimes the most powerful relationship progression isn’t:

They hated each other. Then they fell in love.

It’s:

They learned how to operate together.

And sometimes the most romantic words in fiction aren’t I love you.

They’re I trust you.

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A magic system. A monster. A machine. A prophecy. A portal. A ghost. A dystopian regime. An impossible world.

Speculative fiction often begins with a brilliant what if? But the idea becomes a story when that impossible thing collides with something deeply human.

This episode of Master Fiction Writing is an audio version of my presentation for the WorldShift summit for speculative fiction writers. In it, I explore how to move beyond the “cool premise” and discover the emotional pressure hiding inside your speculative idea.

We’ll look at The Human Cost Framework and six elements you can use to connect premise and character: The Impossible Thing, The Human Desire, The Pressure Point, The Cost, The Choice, and The Change.

Along the way, you’ll learn how to:

• identify why this protagonist belongs in this speculative story;
• find the vulnerable place where your premise and character collide;
• give magic, monsters and technology emotional consequences, not simply rules;
• turn enormous external stakes into intimate personal ones;
• create choices in which every available option costs something;
• and use the speculative element itself to drive character transformation.

Whether you write fantasy, science fiction, horror, dystopian fiction, paranormal fiction, magical realism or something that cheerfully refuses to sit in any one genre box, this episode will help you ask a deceptively simple question:

Don’t ask only what the impossible thing does. Ask what it costs.

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Use the framework from this episode with your own story.

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