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  • mahak chhoR jaauNga-krishn gopal maGhmum

    For word meanings and explanatory discussion in English click on the tabs marked “Roman” or “Notes”.

    https://urdushahkar.org/wp-content/uploads/2025/10/kgm-mahak-chhoR-jaauNga-audio.mp3

    Recitation

    • اُردو
    • देवनागरी
    • Roman
    • Notes
    • مہک  چھوڑ  جاؤں  گا  ۔  کرشن  گوپال  مغمومؔ

      ۱

      ہر  دل  میں  پیار  کی  ہی  کسک  چھوڑ  جاؤں  گا

      اے  خارِ  عشق،  تیری  کھٹک  چھوڑ  جاؤں  گا

      ۲

      باغِ  جہاں  کا  اِک  گُلِ  خوشرنگ  میں  بھی  ہوں

      مرجھانے  پر  بھی  اپنی  مہک  چھوڑ  جاؤں  گا

      ۳

      ہرگز  فنا  نصیب  نہیں  پیار  کی  تپک

      ہر  دل  میں  اپنے  دل  کی  تپک  چھوڑ  جاؤں  گا

      ۴

      ٹوٹے  گا  سازِ  شعر  میرا  ایک  دن  مگر

      ساری  فضا  میں  ایک  گمک  چھوڑ  جاؤں  گا

      ۵

      میرے  چراغِ  فکر  سے  محفل  ہے  پُر  ضیا

      بُجھنے  پہ  کچھ  نہ  کچھ  تو  چمک  چھوڑ  جاؤں  گا

      ۶

      میں  اپنے  بعد  اپنے  ہی  شعروں  کی  شکل  میں

      نایاب  گوہروں  کی  دمک  چھوڑ  جاؤں  گا

      ۷

      ہر  اِک  مہم  میں  جان  کی  بازی  لگا  کے  میں

      ہر  نوجوان  دل  میں  للک  چھوڑ  جاؤں  گا

      ۸

      ہر  لہجے  کو  میں  دوں  گا  کلی  کی  چٹک  کا  لوچ

      ہر  لے  میں  شاخِ  گُل  کی  لچک  چھوڑ  جاؤں  گا

      ۹

      کتنے  ہی  ہم  نوا  ہیں  تو  کتنے  ہی  ہم  خیال

      میں  اپنے  پیچھے  اپنی  جھلک  چھوڑ  جاؤں  گا

      ۱۰

      ہوگا  نہ  سرد  روح  کا  شعلہ  کسی  طرح

      مِٹ  کر  بھی  میں  تپک  سی  تپک  چھوڑ  جاؤں  گا

      ۱۱

      مغمومؔ،  میری  نبض  ہو  ساکِت  تو  غم  نہیں

      نبضِ  حیات  میں  تو  دھمک  چھوڑ  جاؤں  گا

      महक छोढ जाऊंगा – क्रिष्ण गोपाल मग़्मूम

      १

      हर दिल में प्यार की हि कसक छोढ जाऊंगा

      अए ख़ार-ए इश्क़, तेरी खटक छोढ जाऊंगा

      २

      बाग़-ए जहां का एक गुल-ए ख़ुशरंग मैं भी हूं

      मुर्झाने पर भी अपनी महक छोढ जाऊंगा

      ३

      हर्गिज़ फ़ना नसीब नहीं प्यार की तपक

      हर दिल में अपने दिल की तपक छोढ जाऊंगा

      ४

      टूटेगा साज़-ए शे’र मेरा एक दिन मगर

      सारी फ़ज़ा में एक गमक छोढ जाऊंगा

      ५

      मेरे चराग़-ए फ़िक्र से महफ़िल है पुर-ज़िया

      बुझने पे कुछ न कुछ तो चमक छोढ जाऊंगा

      ६

      मैं अपने बाद अपने हि शे’रौं की शक्ल में

      नायाब गौहरौं कि दमक छोढ जाऊंगा

      ७

      हर एक मोहिम में जान की बाज़ी लगा के मैं

      हर नौजवान दिल में ललक छोढ जाऊंगा

      ८

      हर लहजे को मैं दूंगा कली की चिटक का लोच

      हर लय में शाख़-ए गुल की लचक छोढ जाऊंगा

      ९

      कितने ही हमनवा हैं तो कितने हि हम ख़याल

      मैं अपने पीछे अपनी झलक छोढ जाऊंगा

      १०

      होगा न सर्द रूह का शो’ला किसी तरह

      मिट कर भी मैं तपक सी तपक छोढ जाऊंगा

      ११

      मग़्मूम, मेरी नब्ज़ हो साकित तो ग़म नहीं

      नब्ज़-ए हयात में तो धमक छोढ जाऊंगा

       

      Click here for background and on any passage for word meanings and explanatory discussion. krishn gopal baada maGhmum (1916-xxxx), aTak district (now in pakistan). His father was a scholar of urdu and faarsi and grandfather (tulsidas) was also an urdu shaa’er. Ill-treatment by his stepmother drove him to seclusion and reading. All the books at home including religious texts were in urdu. He read up all of them and learnt to write too. Interest in shaa’eri started from childhood. In college he was class fellow of jagan nath azad and through him became a disciple of tilok chand mahroom. Continued education incluing Public Service Commission exam. Worked for the government of panjab and later haryana, retiring in 1974. At least 10 collections of his shaa’eri including Ghazal, rubaaii and nazm.

      1
      har dil meN pyaar kii hi kasak1 chhoR jaauNgaa
      aye Khaar2-e ishq, teri khaTak3 chhoR jaauNgaa     1.ache 2.thorn 3.prick, sting
      The shaa’er wants to leave behind the pain of love as his legacy. I will leave behind only the ache of love in every heart; O thorn of love, I will leave only your sting behind.
      2
      baaGh-e jahaaN1 ka ek gul2-e KhushraNg3 maiN bhi huN
      murjhaane4 par bhi apni mahak5 chhoR jaauNgaa    1.world 2.rose 3.beautiful colour 4.wilted 5.fragrance
      Even as a flower that may wither, the poet believes he will leave his fragrance behind. He may not last, but his essence (his impact, perhaps poetry) will.
      3
      hargiz1 fanaa-nasiib2 nahiN pyaar ki tapak3
      har dil meN apne dil ki tapak3 chhoR jaauNgaa     1.under any circumstance, certainly 2.fated for mortality 3.throbbing pain
      Certainly, the throbbing pain/yearning of love is not fated to die i.e., it is eternal. I will leave behind the throbbing of my heart in every heart.
      4
      TuuTe gaa saaz1-e she’r meraa ek din magar
      saari fazaa2 meN ek gamak3 chhoR jaauNgaa    1.musical instrument 2.surroundings, atmosphere 3.short for ‘gamak-chand’-a poetic meter
      Surely the musical instrument of my verse will one day break and go silent, but I will leave behind the reverberations of the melody of my ash’aar.
      5
      mere charaaGh1-e fikr2 se mahfil3 hai pur-diyaa4
      bujhne pe kuchh na kuchh to chamak chhoR jaauNgaa    1.lamp 2.thought, reason, imagination 3.gathering 4.used here to mean full of light
      His thoughts light up gatherings charaaGh-e fikr is the lamp of thought. Even when extinguished, it will leave behind a glow-suggesting that his ideas will endure even after he is gone.
      6
      maiN apne baad apne hi she’roN ki shakl1 meN
      naayaab2 gauharoN3 ki damak4 chhoR jaauNgaa    1.shape, form 2.rare 3.pearls, gems 4.brilliance
      After me, in the shape of my ash’aar I will leave behind rare precious gems that shine.
      7
      har ek muhim1 meN jaan ki baazi2 lagaa ke maiN
      har naujavaan3 dil meN lalak4 chhoR jaauNgaa    1.endeavour, undertaking 2.wager 3.youthful 4.zeal, enthusiasm
      By putting my life on the line in every endeavour, I will leave behind the spirit of zeal in every youthful heart.
      8
      har lahje1 ko maiN duNgaa kali ki chaTak2 kaa loch3
      har la’i4 meN shaaKh5-e gul6 ki lachak7 chhoR jaauNgaa     1.accent, tone 2.clicking 3.sweetness 4.tune 5.branch 6.rose 7.suppleness
      In urdu poetic imagery when a bud blooms and its petals unfurl, they make a very gentle sound called a chaTak. The shaa’er wants to bestow the sweetness of that chaTak on every accent/word. To every tune he wants to give the suppleness of a rose branch.
      9
      kitne hi ham-navaa1 haiN to kitne hi ham-Khayaal2
      maiN apne piichhe apni jhalak3 chhoR jaauNgaa     1.same voice 2.same thoughts 3.glimpse
      There are many poets who think like me and many who speak in the same voice/words. But as I depart, I will leave behind me, a glimpse of my own unique image.
      10
      hogaa na sard1 ruuh2 kaa sho’la3 kisi tarah
      miT4 kar bhi maiN tapak5 si tapak chhoR jaauNgaa    1.cold 2.soul 3.flame 4.erase 5.throbbing pain, emotional imprint
      Even after death, the flame of my soul won’t go cold. I will leave behind a throbbing pain, a subtle pain of love – a persistent emotional imprint.
      11
      maGhmum1, meri nabz2 ho saakit3 to Gham4 nahiN
      nabz2-e hayaat5 meN to dhamak6 chhoR jaauNgaa     1.pen-name 2.pulse 3.still, silent 4.sorrow, regret 5.life 6.resonant beat
      There is no sorrow/regret even if my pulse goes still because I will leave behind a resonant beat in the pulse of life.

      krishn gopal baada maGhmum (1916-xxxx), aTak district (now in pakistan).  His father was a scholar of urdu and faarsi and grandfather (tulsidas) was also an urdu shaa’er.  Ill-treatment by his stepmother drove him to seclusion and reading.  All the books at home including religious texts were in urdu.  He read up all of them and learnt to write too.  Interest in shaa’eri started from childhood.  In college he was class fellow of jagan nath azad and through him became a disciple of tilok chand mahroom.  Continued education incluing Public Service Commission exam.  Worked for the government of panjab and later haryana, retiring in 1974.  At least 10 collections of his shaa’eri including Ghazal, rubaaii and nazm.

      1
      har dil meN pyaar kii hi kasak1 chhoR jaauNgaa
      aye Khaar2-e ishq, teri khaTak3 chhoR jaauNgaa

      1.ache 2.thorn 3.prick, sting

      The shaa’er wants to leave behind the pain of love as his legacy.  I will leave behind only the ache of love in every heart; O thorn of love, I will leave only your sting behind.

      2
      baaGh-e jahaaN1 ka ek gul2-e KhushraNg3 maiN bhi huN
      murjhaane4 par bhi apni mahak5 chhoR jaauNgaa

      1.world 2.rose 3.beautiful colour 4.wilted 5.fragrance

      Even as a flower that may wither, the poet believes he will leave his fragrance behind.  He may not last, but his essence (his impact, perhaps poetry) will.

      3
      hargiz1 fanaa-nasiib2 nahiN pyaar ki tapak3
      har dil meN apne dil ki tapak3 chhoR jaauNgaa

      1.under any circumstance, certainly 2.fated for mortality 3.throbbing pain

      Certainly, the throbbing pain/yearning of love is not fated to die i.e., it is eternal.  I will leave behind the throbbing of my heart in every heart.

      4
      TuuTe gaa saaz1-e she’r meraa ek din magar
      saari fazaa2 meN ek gamak3 chhoR jaauNgaa

      1.musical instrument 2.surroundings, atmosphere 3.short for ‘gamak-chand’-a poetic meter

      Surely the musical instrument of my verse will one day break and go silent, but I will leave behind the reverberations of the melody of my ash’aar. 

      5
      mere charaaGh1-e fikr2 se mahfil3 hai pur-diyaa4
      bujhne pe kuchh na kuchh to chamak chhoR jaauNgaa

      1.lamp 2.thought, reason, imagination 3.gathering 4.used here to mean full of light

      His thoughts light up gatherings charaaGh-e fikr is the lamp of thought. Even when extinguished, it will leave behind a glow-suggesting that his ideas will endure even after he is gone.

      6
      maiN apne baad apne hi she’roN ki shakl1 meN
      naayaab2 gauharoN3 ki damak4 chhoR jaauNgaa

      1.shape, form 2.rare 3.pearls, gems 4.brilliance

      After me, in the shape of my ash’aar I will leave behind rare precious gems that shine.

      7
      har ek muhim1 meN jaan ki baazi2 lagaa ke maiN
      har naujavaan3 dil meN lalak4 chhoR jaauNgaa

      1.endeavour, undertaking 2.wager 3.youthful 4.zeal, enthusiasm

      By putting my life on the line in every endeavour, I will leave behind the spirit of zeal in every youthful heart.

      8
      har lahje1 ko maiN duNgaa kali ki chaTak2 kaa loch3
      har la’i4 meN shaaKh5-e gul6 ki lachak7 chhoR jaauNgaa

      1.accent, tone 2.clicking 3.sweetness 4.tune 5.branch 6.rose 7.suppleness

      In urdu poetic imagery when a bud blooms and its petals unfurl, they make a very gentle sound called a chaTak.  The shaa’er wants to bestow the sweetness of that chaTak on every accent/word.  To every tune he wants to give the suppleness of a rose branch.

      9
      kitne hi ham-navaa1 haiN to kitne hi ham-Khayaal2
      maiN apne piichhe apni jhalak3 chhoR jaauNgaa

      1.same voice 2.same thoughts 3.glimpse

      There are many poets who think like me and many who speak in the same voice/words.  But as I depart, I will leave behind me, a glimpse of my own unique image.

      10
      hogaa na sard1 ruuh2 kaa sho’la3 kisi tarah
      miT4 kar bhi maiN tapak5 si tapak chhoR jaauNgaa

      1.cold 2.soul 3.flame 4.erase 5.throbbing pain, emotional imprint

      Even after death, the flame of my soul won’t go cold. I will leave behind a throbbing pain, a subtle pain of love – a persistent emotional imprint.

      11
      maGhmum1, meri nabz2 ho saakit3 to Gham4 nahiN
      nabz2-e hayaat5 meN to dhamak6 chhoR jaauNgaa

      1.pen-name 2.pulse 3.still, silent 4.sorrow, regret 5.life 6.resonant beat

      There is no sorrow/regret even if my pulse goes still because I will leave behind a resonant beat in the pulse of life.

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      4 min
    • mansab-e mansoor har kisi ke liye-gopal mittal

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      https://urdushahkar.org/wp-content/uploads/2025/10/gplm-mansab-e-mansoor-har-kisi-ke-liye-audio.mp3

      Recitation

      • اُردو
      • देवनागरी
      • Roman
      • Notes
      • منصبِ  منصور  ہر  کسی  کے  لیے  ۔  گوپال  مِتّل

        ۱

        ہر  ایک  بات  بجا  ہے  تری  مگر  ناصح

        وفا  کو  کون  کرے  ترک  زندگی  کے  لیے

        ۲

        شراب  اپنے  لہو  سے  کشید  کرتے  ہیں

        جواز  چاہیے  کیا  اور  میکشی  کے  لیے

        ۳

        پڑے  ہیں  راہِ  تمنّا  میں  گرد  کی  مانند

        بہ  زعمِ  خویش  جو  اُٹّھے  تھے  رہبری  کے  لیے

        ۴

        اجارہ  دار  تھے  جو  مشعلِ  ہدایت  کے

        اب  اپنے  گھر  میں  ترستے  ہیں  روشنی  کے  لیے

        ۵

        کب  اتنا  سہل  ہے  تاراجِ  گلستاں  گلچیں

        ہم  اپنا  خون  بہا  دیں  گے  ہر  کلی  کے  لیے

        ۶

        بقدرِ  ظرف  ہے  جرمِ  وفا  کی  بھی  تعزیر

        نہیں  ہے  منصبِ  منصور  ہر  کسی  کے  لیے

        मन्सब-ए मंसूर हर किसी के लिए – गोपाल मित्तल

        १

        हर एक बात बजा है तेरी मगर नासेह
        वफ़ा को कौन करे तर्क ज़िन्दगी के लिये

        २

        शराब अपने लहू से कशीद करते हैं
        जुवाज़ चाहिए क्या और मैकशी के लिये

        ३

        पढे हैं राह-ए तमन्ना में गर्द की मानिन्द
        ब-ज़ो’म-ए ख़्वेश जो उट्ठे थे रहबरी के लिये

        ४

        इजारा-दार थे जो मश’अल-ए हिदायत के
        अब अपने घर में तरसते हैं रौशनी के लिये

        ५

        कब इतना सहल है ताराज-ए गुलिस्ताँ गुलचीं
        हम अपना ख़ून बहा देंगे हर कली के लिये

        ६

        ब-क़द्र-ए ज़र्फ़ है जुर्म-ए वफ़ा की भी ताज़ीर
        नहीं है मन्सब-ए मंसूर हर किसी के लिये

         

        Click here for background and on any passage for word meanings and explanatory discussion. gopal mittal (1901-1993), maaler koTla, punjab. College in lahore. Later, lived in dehli as a poet, writer and editor of literary magazine. His usual style is to write intellectual, agnostic and irreverant Ghazal/nazm.

        1
        har aek baat bajaa1 hai teri magar2 naaseh3
        vafaa4 ko kaun kare tark5 zindagi ke liye     1.appropriate, acceptable 2.but 3.advisor, preacher, censor 4.promise, commitment, fidelity 5.give up, quit, turn away from
        This is a bold declaration that the poet/rebel is willing to lay down his life to keep his word/promise/commitment. O advisor, everything you say (about the value of life and about preseving it) is acceptable, but who can turn away from their commitment just to save one’s life i.e., personal integrity is placed above mere survival.
        2
        sharaab apne lahu1 se kashiid2 karte hain
        juvaaz3 chaahiye kya aur maikashi4 ke liye    1.blood 2.brew, distill 3.justification 4.drinking wine
        Here ‘wine’ is symbolic of the wine of universal love and ‘maikashi’ is done at the liberal accepting space provided by the tavern. The maikada (tavern) and maikashi (drinking) symbolize an unconventional, inclusive space, often celebrated in urdu poetry as a place of acceptance and liberation; unlike rigid religious or societal spaces, the tavern represents freedom, where human divisions dissolve, and love is celebrated. It is this space where the poet’s love, distilled with his own essence, finds expression. The poet/rebel distills this wine of love with his own blood, suggesting that this love or spiritual elixir is not something merely enjoyed but something personally, even sacrificially, crafted. What more justification is needed for drinking wine.
        3
        paR’e1 haiN raah2-e tamanna3 meN gard4 ki maanind5
        ba-zo’am-e-Khwesh6 jo uTThe the rahbari7 ke liye    1.lay fallen 2.path 3.desire 4.dust 5.like, similar to 6.with self-declared confidence/arrogance 7.leadership, showing the way
        There were those who rose to be leaders with self-declared confidence akin to arrogance. But they seem to have met their just ends. They lie on the path of desire/aspiration like dust.
        4
        ijaara-daar1 th’e jo mash’al2-e hidaa’et3 ke
        ab apne ghar meN tarast’e4 haiN raushni ke liye    1.monopolist, custodian 2.torch 3.teaching, showing 4.thirst, long
        This is similar in theme to the previous she’r where leaders with self-declared confidence lie like dust on the path of progress. They also thought that they had monopoly over guidance/instruction; that they were custodians of the torch of knowledge. Now they thirst for light in their own houses. I am not sure if he is talking about a specific group of leaders who, in his eyes, are discredited. I do not know the historical context of this she’r.
        5
        kab itna sahl1 hai taaraaj2-e gulsitaaN3 gulchiiN4
        hum apna Khoon bahaa deNge har kali ke liye     1.easy 2.destruction, desolation 3.garden 4.flower-picker
        In urdu poetic tradition the ‘flower-picker’ is the tyrant (just like the birdcatcher) who picks roses and separates lovers (gul o bulbul … the rose and nightingale). O flower-picker, is the desolation of the garden ever that easy. We are prepared to shed every drop of our blood for each bud (that you intend to pick). This is probably about politicians to try to sow discord between communities i.e., try to separate lovers. This could be in the light of partition and/or inciting communal riots in India.
        6
        ba-qadr1-e zarf2 hai jurm3-e vafaa4 ki bhi taaziir5
        nahiN hai mansab6-e mansuur7 har kisii ke liye    1.in proportion to 2.capacity, capability 3.crime 4.fidelity 5.punishment 6.rank, status 7.mansuur-al-hallaaj
        mansuur-al-hallaaj (858-922) was a sufi mystic who travelled extensively including India. Upon his return to baGhdaad he declared and explicated ‘an-al-haqq – I am the Truth’ considered to be equivalent to ‘aham brahmasmi’. He was sentenced to die but given a chance to recant. He refused and chose to be executed. He is considered a high symbol of courage and fidelity of being true to his convictions. In the first she’r the poet has already declared his willingness to die for his convictions. Punishment for the crime of fidelity is meted out in proportion to the capacity to bear/tolerate the punishment. Not everyone reaches the high rank of mansuur. Only the courageous like mansuur choose to die. I am not sure if this is an expression of the poet’s humility saying that he himself does not have that courage or once again a re-affirmation of his willingness to die.

        gopal mittal (1901-1993), maaler koTla, punjab.  College in lahore.  Later, lived in dehli as a poet, writer and editor of literary magazine.  His usual style is to write intellectual, agnostic and irreverant Ghazal/nazm.

        1
        har aek baat bajaa1 hai teri magar2 naaseh3
        vafaa4 ko kaun kare tark5 zindagi ke liye

        1.appropriate, acceptable 2.but 3.advisor, preacher, censor 4.promise, commitment, fidelity 5.give up, quit, turn away from

        This is a bold declaration that the poet/rebel is willing to lay down his life to keep his word/promise/commitment.  O advisor, everything you say (about the value of life and about preseving it) is acceptable, but who can turn away from their commitment just to save one’s life i.e., personal integrity is placed above mere survival.

        2
        sharaab apne lahu1 se kashiid2 karte hain
        juvaaz3 chaahiye kya aur maikashi4 ke liye

        1.blood 2.brew, distill 3.justification 4.drinking wine

        Here ‘wine’ is symbolic of the wine of universal love and ‘maikashi’ is done at the liberal accepting space provided by the tavern.  The maikada (tavern) and maikashi (drinking) symbolize an unconventional, inclusive space, often celebrated in urdu poetry as a place of acceptance and liberation; unlike rigid religious or societal spaces, the tavern represents freedom, where human divisions dissolve, and love is celebrated. It is this space where the poet’s love, distilled with his own essence, finds expression.  The poet/rebel distills this wine of love with his own blood, suggesting that this love or spiritual elixir is not something merely enjoyed but something personally, even sacrificially, crafted.  What more justification is needed for drinking wine.

        3
        paR’e1 haiN raah2-e tamanna3 meN gard4 ki maanind5
        ba-zo’am-e-Khwesh6 jo uTThe the rahbari7 ke liye

        1.lay fallen 2.path 3.desire 4.dust 5.like, similar to 6.with self-declared confidence/arrogance 7.leadership, showing the way

        There were those who rose to be leaders with self-declared confidence akin to arrogance.  But they seem to have met their just ends.  They lie on the path of desire/aspiration like dust.

        4
        ijaara-daar1 th’e jo mash’al2-e hidaa’et3 ke
        ab apne ghar meN tarast’e4 haiN raushni ke liye

        1.monopolist, custodian 2.torch 3.teaching, showing 4.thirst, long

        This is similar in theme to the previous she’r where leaders with self-declared confidence lie like dust on the path of progress.  They also thought that they had monopoly over guidance/instruction; that they were custodians of the torch of knowledge.  Now they thirst for light in their own houses.  I am not sure if he is talking about a specific group of leaders who, in his eyes, are discredited.  I do not know the historical context of this she’r.

        5
        kab itna sahl1 hai taaraaj2-e gulsitaaN3 gulchiiN4
        hum apna Khoon bahaa deNge har kali ke liye

        1.easy 2.destruction, desolation 3.garden 4.flower-picker

        In urdu poetic tradition the ‘flower-picker’ is the tyrant (just like the birdcatcher) who picks roses and separates lovers (gul o bulbul … the rose and nightingale).  O flower-picker, is the desolation of the garden ever that easy.  We are prepared to shed every drop of our blood for each bud (that you intend to pick).  This is probably about politicians to try to sow discord between communities i.e., try to separate lovers.  This could be in the light of partition and/or inciting communal riots in India.

        6
        ba-qadr1-e zarf2 hai jurm3-e vafaa4 ki bhi taaziir5
        nahiN hai mansab6-e mansuur7 har kisii ke liye

        1.in proportion to 2.capacity, capability 3.crime 4.fidelity 5.punishment 6.rank, status 7.mansuur-al-hallaaj

        mansuur-al-hallaaj (858-922) was a sufi mystic who travelled extensively including India.  Upon his return to baGhdaad he declared and explicated ‘an-al-haqq – I am the Truth’ considered to be equivalent to ‘aham brahmasmi’.  He was sentenced to die but given a chance to recant.  He refused and chose to be executed.  He is considered a high symbol of courage and fidelity of being true to his convictions.  In the first she’r the poet has already declared his willingness to die for his convictions.  Punishment for the crime of fidelity is meted out in proportion to the capacity to bear/tolerate the punishment.  Not everyone reaches the high rank of mansuur.  Only the courageous like mansuur choose to die.  I am not sure if this is an expression of the poet’s humility saying that he himself does not have that courage or once again a re-affirmation of his willingness to die.

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        3 min
      • saj ke aashiyaaN apna-syed shifaa’at hanson rehaani

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        Recitation

        • اُردو
        • देवनागरी
        • Roman
        • Notes
        • سج  کے  آشیاں  اپنا  ۔  سید  شفاعت  ہینسن  ریحانیؔ

          ۱

          جب  چمن  ہی  اپنا  ہے،  اور  نہ  باغباں  اپنا

          کیا  کریں  گے  پھولوں  سے،  سج  کے  آشیاں  اپنا

          ۲

          کوئی  بھی  نہیں  واقف،  راہ  و  رسمِ  منزل  سے

          دشت  دشت  پھرتا  ہے،  کب  سے  کارواں  اپنا

          ۳

          حالِ  دل  سنائیں  گے،  ہم  بھی  اُن  کی  محفل  میں

          مل  گیا  جو  قسمت  سے،  کوئی  ہمزباں  اپنا

          ۴

          خاک  ہو  کے  پہنچیں  گے،  ہم  کسی  کے  دامن  تک

          گو  نہیں  پہنچتا  ہے،  دستِ  ناتواں  اپنا

          ۵

          خوف  ہے  نہ  چھن  جائے،  یہ  بھی  اِس  زمانے  میں

          زندگی  کا  حاصل  ہے،  دردِ  جاوداں  اپنا

          ۶

          ہم  خدا  کے  نائب  ہیں،  کیا  نہیں  خبر  تم  کو

          ہے  زمیں  کنیز  اپنی،  خادم  آسماں  اپنا

          ۷

          گُل  بدوش  آئے  گی،  پھر  بہار  ریحانیؔ

          گو  خزاں  بداماں  ہے،  آج  گلستاں  اپنا

          सज के आशियां अपना – सय्यद शफ़ा’अत हैन्सन रेहानी

          १

          जब चमन हि अपना है, और न बाग़्बां अपना

          क्या करेंगे फूलौं से, सज के आशियां अपना

          २

          कोई भी नहीं वाक़फ़, राह ओ रस्म-ए मंज़िल से

          दश्त दश्त फिरता है, कब से कारवां अपना

          ३

          हाल-ए दिल सुनाएंगे, हम भी उन की महफ़िल में

          मिल गया जो क़िस्मत से, कोई हम-ज़बां अपना

          ४

          ख़ाक हो के पहुंचेंगे, हम किसी के दामन तक

          गो नहीं पहुंचता है, दस्त-ए नातवां अपना

          ५

          ख़ौफ़ है न छिन जाए, ये भी इस ज़माने में

          ज़िंदगी का हासिल है, दर्द-ए जावदां अपना

          ६

          हम ख़ुदा के नाएब हैं, क्या नहीं ख़बर तुम को

          है ज़मीं कनीज़ अपनी, ख़ादिम आस्मां अपना

          ७

          गुल-बदोश आएगी, फिर बहार रेहानी

          गो ख़िज़ां बदामां है, आज गुल्सितां अपना

           

          Click here for background and on any passage for word meanings and explanatory discussion. syed shafaa’at Hanson rehani (1912-????), born in lukhnau. Educated in urdu and faarsi in raampur and later in punjab university. Started composing at an early age both in urdu and in faarsi with mirza jafar ali KhaaN asar lakhnavi (urdu) and farruKh shiiraazi (faarsi) as his mentors. He is a Christian urdu poet who has written conventional Ghazal as well as Christian devotional nazm. He has four collections to his credit and also compiled a booklet on devotional nazm for observing Good Friday and celebrating Easter. He served as pastor at the Methodist Church in hyderabad. This Ghazal is a poignant expression of alienation and injustice. It has the same radeef and qaafiya as Ghalib’s ‘tha jo raazdaaN apna’ and is linked to ‘Ghalib naqsh-e qadam’. The Ghazal is dated 1958. I am not sure if it reflects a specific development or just the general trend.

          1
          jab chaman hi apna hai, aur na baaGhbaaN1 apna
          kya kareNge phooloN se, saj ke aashiyaaN2 apna    1.gardener 2.nest
          When neither are we welcome in the garden, nor is the gardener sympathetic to us, what is the use of embellishing the nest with flowers. This is probably an expression of a feeling of alienation in the homeland, of being marginalized.
          2
          koii bhi nahiN vaaqif1, raah-o-rasm2-e manzil3 se
          dasht-dasht4 phirta hai, kab se kaarvaaN apna   1.aware 2.ways and traditions 3.destination 4.wilderness to wilderness
          No one knows the ways and traditions of (the journey towards the) destination. For a long time now, this group of seekers has been wandering from wilderness to wilderness.
          3
          haal1-e dil sunaa’eNge, hum bhi un ki mahfil2 meN
          mil gaya jo qismat se, koii ham-zabaaN3 apna    1.condition 2.gathering, presence 3.speaking the same language, supportive of my words
          We too will relay the condition of our heart in her gathering, if by luck, I find someone sympathetic who can support my words. The ‘her’ could be the beloved or the political leadership. The poet (and the people he represents) feel that there is no one supportive of their plea.
          4
          Khaak1 ho ke pahuNcheNge, ham kisi ke daaman2 tak
          go3 nahiN pahuNchta hai, dast4-e naatavaaN5 apna    1.dust 2.hem of the skirt/robe 3.even though 4.hand 5.weak
          Here also ‘kisi’ can be the beloved or the political leadership. Reaching to catch the hem of the skirt/robe is to plead for attention. But his hand is too weak i.e., he has no access. The only way he can reach the hem of the skirt is to die, be buried in the beloved’s lane, get converted to dust and reach the hem of the skirt. This is a classical picture of a spurned lover but the simile can be applied to political leadership.
          5
          Khauf1 hai na chhin2 jaa’e, ye bhi is zamaane3 meN
          zindagi ka haasil4 hai, dard-e-jaavedaaN5 apna    1.fear 2.snatched away 3.times 4.end result, yield, benefit 5.permanent/constant sorrow
          In classical poetic tradition pain of sorrow is treasured. That is the only thing that the poet has left. But times have changed so much that even that may be snatched away from him. That is what he is afraid of.
          6
          ham Khuda ke naa’eb1 haiN, kya nahiN Khabar2 tum ko
          hai zamiiN kaniiz3 apni, Khaadim4 aasmaaN apna     1.deputy, representative 2.knowledge 3.female slave 4.servant
          This probably refers to the observation that human beings have claimed rights over all other creatures by declaring themselves to be representative of god on earth. But this could well be a sarcastic comment about the rulers claiming such powers over the rest. They go on to claim that the earth and sky were made for their use and are subservient to them.
          7
          gul-badosh1 aa’egi, phir bahaar2 rehaani3
          go4 KhizaaN5 badaamaaN6 hai, aaj gulsitaaN7 apna    1.flower bearing 2.spring 3.pen-name of the poet 4.even though 5.autumn, dry season 6.in the lap of 7.garden
          The poet ends on an optimistic note. O rehaani, spring will arrive bearing flowers, even though today our garden is in the lap of autumn.

          syed shafaa’at Hanson rehani (1912-????), born in lukhnau.  Educated in urdu and faarsi in raampur and later in punjab university.  Started composing at an early age both in urdu and in faarsi with mirza jafar ali KhaaN asar lakhnavi (urdu) and farruKh shiiraazi (faarsi) as his mentors.  He is a Christian urdu poet who has written conventional Ghazal as well as Christian devotional nazm.  He has four collections to his credit and also compiled a booklet on devotional nazm for observing Good Friday and celebrating Easter.  He served as pastor at the Methodist Church in hyderabad.  This Ghazal is a poignant expression of alienation and injustice.  It has the same radeef and qaafiya as Ghalib’s ‘tha jo raazdaaN apna’ and is linked to ‘Ghalib naqsh-e qadam’.  The Ghazal is dated 1958.  I am not sure if it reflects a specific development or just the general trend.

          1
          jab chaman hi apna hai, aur na baaGhbaaN1 apna
          kya kareNge phooloN se, saj ke aashiyaaN2 apna

          1.gardener 2.nest

          When neither are we welcome in the garden, nor is the gardener sympathetic to us, what is the use of embellishing the nest with flowers.  This is probably an expression of a feeling of alienation in the homeland, of being marginalized.

          2
          koii bhi nahiN vaaqif1, raah-o-rasm2-e manzil3 se
          dasht-dasht4 phirta hai, kab se kaarvaaN apna

          1.aware 2.ways and traditions 3.destination 4.wilderness to wilderness

          No one knows the ways and traditions of (the journey towards the) destination.  For a long time now, this group of seekers has been wandering from wilderness to wilderness.

          3
          haal1-e dil sunaa’eNge, hum bhi un ki mahfil2 meN
          mil gaya jo qismat se, koii ham-zabaaN3 apna

          1.condition 2.gathering, presence 3.speaking the same language, supportive of my words

          We too will relay the condition of our heart in her gathering, if by luck, I find someone sympathetic who can support my words.  The ‘her’ could be the beloved or the political leadership.  The poet (and the people he represents) feel that there is no one supportive of their plea.

          4
          Khaak1 ho ke pahuNcheNge, ham kisi ke daaman2 tak
          go3 nahiN pahuNchta hai, dast4-e naatavaaN5 apna

          1.dust 2.hem of the skirt/robe 3.even though 4.hand 5.weak

          Here also ‘kisi’ can be the beloved or the political leadership.  Reaching to catch the hem of the skirt/robe is to plead for attention.  But his hand is too weak i.e., he has no access.  The only way he can reach the hem of the skirt is to die, be buried in the beloved’s lane, get converted to dust and reach the hem of the skirt.  This is a classical picture of a spurned lover but the simile can be applied to political leadership.

          5
          Khauf1 hai na chhin2 jaa’e, ye bhi is zamaane3 meN
          zindagi ka haasil4 hai, dard-e-jaavedaaN5 apna

          1.fear 2.snatched away 3.times 4.end result, yield, benefit 5.permanent/constant sorrow

          In classical poetic tradition pain of sorrow is treasured.  That is the only thing that the poet has left.  But times have changed so much that even that may be snatched away from him.  That is what he is afraid of.

          6
          ham Khuda ke naa’eb1 haiN, kya nahiN Khabar2 tum ko
          hai zamiiN kaniiz3 apni, Khaadim4 aasmaaN apna

          1.deputy, representative 2.knowledge 3.female slave 4.servant

          This probably refers to the observation that human beings have claimed rights over all other creatures by declaring themselves to be representative of god on earth.  But this could well be a sarcastic comment about the rulers claiming such powers over the rest.  They go on to claim that the earth and sky were made for their use and are subservient to them.

          7
          gul-badosh1 aa’egi, phir bahaar2 rehaani3
          go4 KhizaaN5 badaamaaN6 hai, aaj gulsitaaN7 apna

          1.flower bearing 2.spring 3.pen-name of the poet 4.even though 5.autumn, dry season 6.in the lap of 7.garden

          The poet ends on an optimistic note.  O rehaani, spring will arrive bearing flowers, even though today our garden is in the lap of autumn.

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          3 min
        • mera raasta koii aur hai – darshan siNgh darshan

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          Recitation

          • اُردو
          • देवनागरी
          • Roman
          • Notes
          • میرا  راستہ  کوئی  اور  ہے  ۔  درشن  سنگھ  درشنؔ

            ۱

            تجھے  کیا  خبر  مرے  ہم  سفر  مرا  مرحلہ  کوئی  اور  ہے

            مجھے  منزلوں  سے  گریز  ہے  میرا  راستہ  کوئی  اور  ہے

            ۲

            میری  چاہتوں  کو  نہ  پوچھئے  جو  ملا  طلب  سے  سوا  ملا

            مری  داستاں  ہی  عجیب  ہے  مرا  مسئلہ  کوئی  اور  ہے

            ۳

            یہ  ہوس  کے  بندے  ہیں  ناصحا  نہ  سمجھ  سکے  مرا  مدعا

            مجھے  پیار  ہے  کسی  اور  سے  مرا  دلربا  کوئی  اور  ہے

            ۴

            مرا  ذوقِ  سجدہ  ہے  ظاہری  کہ  ہے  کشمکش  مری  زندگی

            یہ  گمان  دل  میں  رہا  سدا  مرا  مدعا  کوئی  اور  ہے

            ۵

            وہ  رحیم  ہے  وہ  کریم  ہے  وہ  نہیں  کہ  ظلم  کرے  سدا

            ہے  یقیں  زمانے  کو  دیکھ  کر  کہ  یہاں  خدا  کوئی  اور  ہے

            ۶

            میں  چلا  کہاں  سے  خبر  نہیں  کہ  سفر  میں  ہے  مری  زندگی

            مری  ابتدا  کہیں  اور  ہے  مری  انتہا  کوئی  اور  ہے

            ۷

            مرا  نام  درشنؔ  خستہ  تن  مرے  دل  میں  کوئی  ہے  ضو  فگن

            میں  ہوں  گم  کسی  کی  تلاش  میں  مجھے  ڈھونڈھتا  کوئی  اور  ہے

            मेरा रास्ता कोई और है – दरशन सिंघ दरशन

            १

            तुझे क्या ख़बर मेरे हम-सफ़र मेरा मरहला कोई और है

            मुझे मंज़िलों से गुरेज़ है मेरा रास्ता कोई और है

            २

            मेरी चाहतों को न पूछिए जो मिला तलब से सिवा मिला

            मेरी दास्ताँ ही अजीब है मेरा मसअला कोई और है

            ३

            ये हवस के बंदे हैं नासेहा न समझ सके मेरा मुद्दआ

            मुझे प्यार है किसी और से मेरा दिल-रुबा कोई और है

            ४

            मेरा ज़ौक़-ए सज्दा है ज़ाहेरी के है कश्मकश मेरी ज़िंदगी

            ये गुमान दिल में रहा सदा मेरा मुद्दआ कोई और है

            ५

            वो रहीम है वो करीम है वो नहीं कि ज़ुल्म करे सदा

            है यक़ीं ज़माने को देख कर के यहाँ ख़ुदा कोई और है

            ६

            मैं चला कहाँ से ख़बर नहीं के सफ़र में है मेरी ज़िंदगी

            मेरी इब्तेदा कहीं और है मेरी इन्तेहा कोई और है

            ७

            मेरा नाम दर्शन-ए ख़स्ता-तन मेरे दिल में कोई है ज़ौ-फ़गन

            मैं हूँ गुम किसी की तलाश में मुझे ढूँढता कोई और है

             

            Click here for background and on any passage for word meanings and explanatory discussion. darshan singh duggal darshan (1921-1989) orthodox and observant sikh, grew up in lahore with a promising academic record headed for the sciences or engineering. But when his father took him to the priest/sant for blessings, the priest advised him to take faarsi, and English literature. He started composing verse in urdu in 1937. In spite of (or perhaps because of) his sikh upbringing he is accepting of all faiths and has written with much feeling about diverse religious personalities. It is a recognition of the role urdu has played in the history of the sub-continent and hindus, muslims, sikhs and Christians wrote odes to their respective religious figures in that language. The family migrated to India where he retired as deputy secretary of finance for the government of India. He took over from his father as president of the World Fellowship of Religions. He has composed odes to religious figures across the board. This Ghazal is one of a series with the radeef ‘koi aur hai’ and are linked to the appropriate icon on the Refrain page.

            1
            tujhe kya Khabar1 mere ham-safar2 mera marhala3 koi aur hai
            mujhe manziloN4 se gurez5 hai mera raasta koi aur hai     1.awareness, knowledge 2.fellow seeker, friend 3.difficulty, obstacle 4.destination 5.running away, shun
            O my friend, you do not know, my issues are different (from the usual). I shun destinations, my path is different (from the beaten path). The implication is that he likes the journey more than the destination.
            2
            meri chaahatoN1 ko na poochhiye jo mila talab2 se siva3 mila
            meri daastaaN4 hi ajiib5 hai mera mas’ala6 koi aur hai     1.likes, desires 2.demand, asking 3.beyond, more than 4.story 5.strange 6.problem
            Do not ask me about what I like/want. I have received more than I asked for. My story is strange/unusual, my problem is different. The implication is that he is focussed on ‘Gham-e dauraaN’ – the needs of humanity not on himself or perhaps, on spirituality and not materialism.
            3
            ye havas1 ke bande2 haiN naaseha3 na samajh sake mera mudd’aa4
            mujhe pyaar hai kisi aur se, mera dil-ruba5 koi aur hai     1.greed, lust 2.servants, devotees 3.preacher 4.goal 5.beloved
            They are devotees of greed O preacher, they do not understand my goal. I love something else; my beloved is someone else. The implication is that his goal is not material wealth or carnal pleasure, but something else i.e., spiritual.
            4
            mera zauq-e-sajda1 hai zaahiri2 keh hai kashmakash3 meri zindagi
            ye gumaan4 dil meN raha sada5 mera mudd’aa6 koi aur hai   1.desire for obeisance/worship 2.superficial 3.struggle 4.doubt 5.always 6.goal
            I always have doubts that my desire for worship may be superficial. I struggle with it, always doubting/suspecting myself whether I am sincere in my devotion to the divine.
            5
            vo rahiim1 hai vo kariim2 hai vo nahiN keh zulm3 kare sada4
            hai yaqiN5 zamaane6 ko dekh kar keh yahaaN Khuda koi aur hai   1.kind 2.generous 3.cruelty 4.always 5.certainty 6.world
            He/she/it is kind. He is generous. He is not the one to be always vengeful. Looking at the world, it appears certain that the god here is someone else i.e., someone other than my concept of a kind and generous god i.e. people worship a false god – materialism.
            6
            maiN chala kahaaN se Khabar1 nahiN keh safar2 meN hai meri zindagi
            meri ibteda3 kahiN aur hai meri intehaa4 koi aur hai     1.awareness, knowledge 2.journey 3.beginning 4.end, destination
            I do not know from where I started. My life is a journey (or in the middle of a journey). My beginning is somewhere else my end is something else (different from that of the havas-parast – the greedy and lecherous).
            7
            mera naam darshan1-e Khasta-tan2 mere dil meN koi hai zau-figan3
            maiN huN gum4 kisi ki talaash5 meN mujhe DhooNDtaa koi aur hai   1.name and pen-name of the poet 2.broken body, distressed 3.shining forth, casting light 4.lost, engrossed 5.search
            I am the broked hearted darshan. There is a light in my heart that shines and shows the way. I am engrossed in the search with the help of this light, but something else (possibly temptation) is seeking to trap me.

            darshan singh duggal darshan (1921-1989) orthodox and observant sikh, grew up in lahore with a promising academic record headed for the sciences or engineering.  But when his father took him to the priest/sant for blessings, the priest advised him to take faarsi, and English literature.  He started composing verse in urdu in 1937.  In spite of (or perhaps because of) his sikh upbringing he is accepting of all faiths and has written with much feeling about diverse religious personalities.  It is a recognition of the role urdu has played in the history of the sub-continent and hindus, muslims, sikhs and Christians wrote odes to their respective religious figures in that language.  The family migrated to India where he retired as deputy secretary of finance for the government of India.  He took over from his father as president of the World Fellowship of Religions.  He has composed odes to religious figures across the board.  This Ghazal is one of a series with the radeef ‘koi aur hai’ and are linked to the appropriate icon on the Refrain page.

            1
            tujhe kya Khabar1 mere ham-safar2 mera marhala3 koi aur hai
            mujhe manziloN4 se gurez5 hai mera raasta koi aur hai

            1.awareness, knowledge 2.fellow seeker, friend 3.difficulty, obstacle 4.destination 5.running away, shun

            O my friend, you do not know, my issues are different (from the usual).  I shun destinations, my path is different (from the beaten path).  The implication is that he likes the journey more than the destination.

            2
            meri chaahatoN1 ko na poochhiye jo mila talab2 se siva3 mila
            meri daastaaN4 hi ajiib5 hai mera mas’ala6 koi aur hai

            1.likes, desires 2.demand, asking 3.beyond, more than 4.story 5.strange 6.problem

            Do not ask me about what I like/want.  I have received more than I asked for.  My story is strange/unusual, my problem is different.  The implication is that he is focussed on ‘Gham-e dauraaN’ – the needs of humanity not on himself or perhaps, on spirituality and not materialism.

            3
            ye havas1 ke bande2 haiN naaseha3 na samajh sake mera mudd’aa4
            mujhe pyaar hai kisi aur se, mera dil-ruba5 koi aur hai

            1.greed, lust 2.servants, devotees 3.preacher 4.goal 5.beloved

            They are devotees of greed O preacher, they do not understand my goal.  I love something else; my beloved is someone else.  The implication is that his goal is not material wealth or carnal pleasure, but something else i.e., spiritual.

            4
            mera zauq-e-sajda1 hai zaahiri2 keh hai kashmakash3 meri zindagi
            ye gumaan4 dil meN raha sada5 mera mudd’aa6 koi aur hai

            1.desire for obeisance/worship 2.superficial 3.struggle 4.doubt 5.always 6.goal

            I always have doubts that my desire for worship may be superficial.  I struggle with it, always doubting/suspecting myself whether I am sincere in my devotion to the divine.

            5
            vo rahiim1 hai vo kariim2 hai vo nahiN keh zulm3 kare sada4
            hai yaqiN5 zamaane6 ko dekh kar keh yahaaN Khuda koi aur hai

            1.kind 2.generous 3.cruelty 4.always 5.certainty 6.world

            He/she/it is kind.  He is generous.  He is not the one to be always vengeful.  Looking at the world, it appears certain that the god here is someone else i.e., someone other than my concept of a kind and generous god i.e. people worship a false god – materialism.

            6
            maiN chala kahaaN se Khabar1 nahiN keh safar2 meN hai meri zindagi
            meri ibteda3 kahiN aur hai meri intehaa4 koi aur hai

            1.awareness, knowledge 2.journey 3.beginning 4.end, destination

            I do not know from where I started.  My life is a journey (or in the middle of a journey).  My beginning is somewhere else my end is something else (different from that of the havas-parast – the greedy and lecherous).

            7
            mera naam darshan1-e Khasta-tan2 mere dil meN koi hai zau-figan3
            maiN huN gum4 kisi ki talaash5 meN mujhe DhooNDtaa koi aur hai

            1.name and pen-name of the poet 2.broken body, distressed 3.shining forth, casting light 4.lost, engrossed 5.search

            I am the broked hearted darshan.  There is a light in my heart that shines and shows the way.  I am engrossed in the search with the help of this light, but something else (possibly temptation) is seeking to trap me.

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            4 min
          • chheRta koii aur hai – rajesh reDDi

            For word meanings and explanatory discussion in English click on the tabs marked “Roman” or “Notes”.

            https://urdushahkar.org/wp-content/uploads/2025/10/rajeshr-chheRta-koii-aur-hai-audio.mp3

            Recitation

            • اُردو
            • देवनागरी
            • Roman
            • Notes
            • چھیڑتا  کوئی  اور  ہے  ۔  راجیش  ریڈّی

              ۱

              ترے  میرے  دین  کا  مسٔلہ،  نہیں  مسٔلہ  کوئی  اور  ہے

              نہ  ترا  خدا  کوئی  اور  ہے،  نہ  مرا  خدا  کوئی  اور  ہے

              ۲

              میں  جہاں  ہوں  صرف  وہیں  نہیں،  میں  جہاں  نہیں  ہوں  وہاں  بھی  ہوں

              مجھے  یوں  نہ  مجھ  میں  تلاش  کر،  کہ  مرا  پتہ  کوئی  اور  ہے

              ۳

              مرے  فیصلے  سے  خفا  ہے  جو،  مرے  حوصلوں  سے  ڈرا  ہے  جو

              مرے  ساتھ  ہی  مری  شخصیت،  میں  چھپا  ہوا  کوئی  اور  ہے

              ۴

              وہ  بھی  وقت  تھا  کہ  جب  آسماں،  پہ  دھویں  کا  نام  و  نشاں  نہ  تھا

              مگر  اب  کے  آگ  ہے  کچھ  الگ،  مگر  اب  ہوا  کوئی  اور  ہے

              ۵

              تجھے  خود  سے  کوئی  گلہ  نہیں،  مجھے  خود  میں  میں  ہی  ملا  نہیں

              ترا  آئینہ  کوئی  اور  ہے،  مرا  آئینہ  کوئی  اور  ہے

              ۶

              جس  اُفق  پہ  میں  تھا  کِرن  کِرن،  ہوں  اُسی  اُفق  پہ  دھواں  دھواں

              مری  ابتدا  کوئی  اور  تھی،  مری  اِنتہا  کوئی  اور  ہے

              ۷

              مرے  فکر  و  فن  کا  غرور  وہ،  مرے  ہر  سخن  کا  سرور  وہ

              مرا  ذہن  ایسا  رباب  ہے،  جسے  چھیڑتا  کوئی  اور  ہے

              छेढता कोई और है – राजेश रेड्डी

              १

              तेरे मेरे दीन का मस’अला, नहीं मस’अला कोई और है

              न तेरा ख़ुदा कोई और है, म मेरा ख़ुदा कोई और है

              २

              मैं जहां हुं सिर्फ़ वहीं नहीं, मैं जहां नहीं हुं वहां भी हुं

              मुझे यूं न मुझ में तलाश कर, के मेरा पता कोई और है

              ३

              मेरे फ़ैसले से ख़फ़ा है जो, मेरे हौस्ले से डरा है जो

              मेरे साथ हि मेरी शख़्सिय्यत, में छुपा हुआ कोई और है

              ४

              वो भी वक़्त था के जब आस्मां, पे धुएं का नाम ओ निशां न था

              मगर अब के आग है कुछ अलग, मगर अब हवा कोई और है

              ५

              तुझे ख़ुद से कोई गिला नहीं, मुझे मुझ में कोई मिला नहीं

              मेरा आइना कोई और है, तेरा आइना कोई और है

              ६

              जिस उफ़क़ पे मैं था किरन किरन, हुं उसी उफ़क़ पे धुआं धुआं

              मेरी इब्तेदा कोई और थी, मेरी इन्तेहा कोई और है

              ७

              मेरे फ़िक्र ओ फ़न का ग़रूर वो, मेरे हर सुख़न का सुरूर वो

              मेरा ज़हन ऐसा रबाब है, जिसे छेढता कोई और है

               

              Click here for background and on any passage for word meanings and explanatory discussion. rajesh reDDii (1952-living), was born in nagpur and lives in mumbai. All I could get from a radio interview recording is that he fell in love with urdu and particularly Ghazal during his college days. He worked for All India Radio and retired from there. He has published three collections of his verse. This Ghazal is linked to other Ghazaliyaat of the same radeef on the radeef/refrain index page.

              1
              tere mere diin1 ka mas’ala2, nahiN mas’ala koii aur hai
              na tera Khuda koii aur hai, na mera Khuda koii aur hai   1.faith 2.puzzle, problem
              This probably refers to prevailing communal animosity. He implies that differences are not because of faith but because of something else. Thus, the differences between your faith and mine are not the issue, the real problem is something else. Your god is no different from mine.
              2
              maiN jahaaN huN sirf1 vahiiN nahiiN, maiN jahaaN nahiN huN vahaaN bhi huN
              mujhe yuN na mujh meN talaash2 kar, keh mera pata koii aur hai    1.only 2.search
              This she’r appears to be a paraphrase of what god might say. Where I am, is not the only place where I can be found. Sometimes, I am where I am not. Don’t search for me just in my present form, for I have other addresses/locations/forms. Don’t pigeon-hole me into a single stereotype. I am not a god of the muslims or hindus exclusively.
              3
              mere faisle1 se Khafa2 hai jo, mere hausle3 se Dara hai jo
              mere saath hi meri shaKhsiyyat4, meN chhupa hua koii aur hai    1.decision, determination 2.unhappy 3.courage, resolve 4.personality, identity
              The one who is unhappy about my decision. The one who is scared of my resolve. He is hidden within me, along with my personality/ego. Thus, he acknowledges the existence of multiple personalities within himself, sometimes in conflict with each other.
              4
              vo bhi vaqt tha keh jab aasmaaN, pe dhueN1 ka naam-o-nishaaN2 na tha
              magar3 ab ke aag hai kuchh alag, magar ab havaa koii aur hai    1.smoke, fog, confusion 2.slightest trace 3.but
              There was a time when there was no trace of smoke on the sky, but this time, the fires have a different character, this time the air blows differently. This could well be interpreted in the political sense about communal confict. We have had such conflicts in the past but the ‘sky was always clear’ – we always knew what is right and what is wrong. But this time, it is different. Communal fires are intentional/planned. The air blows from a different direction i.e., the intentions of the powerful are different. This could also be a reflection of the development of his own thought from certainty to scepticism.
              5
              tujhe Khud1 se koii gila2 nahiN, mujhe mujh meN koii mila nahiN
              mera aaina3 koii aur hai, tera aaina koii aur hai     1.self 2.complaint 3.mirror as in looking at oneself in the mirror
              You have no complaint against yourself i.e., you are satisfied, sure of yourself, righteous in your thinking. I looked into myself and did not find anyone i.e., I examined myself but not find any fault there. The mirror you look into is different from mine. Said kabiir …
              bura jo dekhan maiN gaya, bura na miliya koye
              jo man khoja aapna, mujh sa bura na koye
              6
              jis ufaq1 pe maiN tha kiran-kiran2, huN usi ufaq pe dhuaaN-dhuaaN3
              meri ibteda4 koii aur thi, meri intehaa5 koii aur hai    1.horizon 2.rays of light 3.smoky, foggy 4.beginning 5.ending
              On the horizon that I once was a ray of light, on that same horizon I am now a hazy fog i.e., I was of clear thinking, speaking clearly but now I am confused. My beginning was different, but I have ended up in a different place. This could well be a philosophical statement of the development of thought from certainty to scepticism. It can also be interpreted to mean something entirely different. In a very different spirit, mir taqi mir …
              raah-e duur-e ishq meN rotaa hai kyaa
              aage aage dekhiye hotaa hai kyaa
              Why do you weep so much along the long path of love
              Just wait there are more problems to come
              7
              mere fikr-o-fun1 ka Ghuroor2 vo, mere har suKhan3 ka suroor4 vo
              mera zahn5 aisa rabaab6 hai, jise chheRta7 koii aur hai    1.thought and capabilities/talent 2.pride 3.word, verse 4.exhilaration, joy 5.mind 6.stringed musical instrument 7.pulling strings
              He declares that his mind is the pride and joy of his talent. But his own mind is like a ‘rabaab/sitaar’ that someone else pulls the strings of. Is he saying that his verse is inspired by god … like Ghalib …
              aate haiN Ghaib se ye mazaamiiN Khayaal meN
              Ghalib sariir-e Khaama navaa-e sarosh hai

              rajesh reDDii (1952-living), was born in nagpur and lives in mumbai.  All I could get from a radio interview recording is that he fell in love with urdu and particularly Ghazal during his college days.  He worked for All India Radio and retired from there.  He has published three collections of his verse. This Ghazal is linked to other Ghazaliyaat of the same radeef on the radeef/refrain index page.

              1
              tere mere diin1 ka mas’ala2, nahiN mas’ala koii aur hai
              na tera Khuda koii aur hai, na mera Khuda koii aur hai

              1.faith 2.puzzle, problem

              This probably refers to prevailing communal animosity.  He implies that differences are not because of faith but because of something else.  Thus, the differences between your faith and mine are not the issue, the real problem is something else.  Your god is no different from mine.

              2
              maiN jahaaN huN sirf1 vahiiN nahiiN, maiN jahaaN nahiN huN vahaaN bhi huN
              mujhe yuN na mujh meN talaash2 kar, keh mera pata koii aur hai

              1.only 2.search

              This she’r appears to be a paraphrase of what god might say.  Where I am, is not the only place where I can be found.  Sometimes, I am where I am not.  Don’t search for me just in my present form, for I have other addresses/locations/forms.  Don’t pigeon-hole me into a single stereotype.  I am not a god of the muslims or hindus exclusively.

              3
              mere faisle1 se Khafa2 hai jo, mere hausle3 se Dara hai jo
              mere saath hi meri shaKhsiyyat4, meN chhupa hua koii aur hai

              1.decision, determination 2.unhappy 3.courage, resolve 4.personality, identity

              The one who is unhappy about my decision.  The one who is scared of my resolve.  He is hidden within me, along with my personality/ego.  Thus, he acknowledges the existence of multiple personalities within himself, sometimes in conflict with each other.

              4
              vo bhi vaqt tha keh jab aasmaaN, pe dhueN1 ka naam-o-nishaaN2 na tha
              magar3 ab ke aag hai kuchh alag, magar ab havaa koii aur hai

              1.smoke, fog, confusion 2.slightest trace 3.but

              There was a time when there was no trace of smoke on the sky, but this time, the fires have a different character, this time the air blows differently.  This could well be interpreted in the political sense about communal confict.  We have had such conflicts in the past but the ‘sky was always clear’ – we always knew what is right and what is wrong.  But this time, it is different.  Communal fires are intentional/planned.  The air blows from a different direction i.e., the intentions of the powerful are different.  This could also be a reflection of the development of his own thought from certainty to scepticism.

              5
              tujhe Khud1 se koii gila2 nahiN, mujhe mujh meN koii mila nahiN
              mera aaina3 koii aur hai, tera aaina koii aur hai

              1.self 2.complaint 3.mirror as in looking at oneself in the mirror

              You have no complaint against yourself i.e., you are satisfied, sure of yourself, righteous in your thinking.  I looked into myself and did not find anyone i.e., I examined myself but not find any fault there.  The mirror you look into is different from mine.  Said kabiir …

              bura jo dekhan maiN gaya, bura na miliya koye
              jo man khoja aapna, mujh sa bura na koye
              6
              jis ufaq1 pe maiN tha kiran-kiran2, huN usi ufaq pe dhuaaN-dhuaaN3
              meri ibteda4 koii aur thi, meri intehaa5 koii aur hai

              1.horizon 2.rays of light 3.smoky, foggy 4.beginning 5.ending

              On the horizon that I once was a ray of light, on that same horizon I am now a hazy fog i.e., I was of clear thinking, speaking clearly but now I am confused.  My beginning was different, but I have ended up in a different place.  This could well be a philosophical statement of the development of thought from certainty to scepticism.  It can also be interpreted to mean something entirely different.  In a very different spirit, mir taqi mir …

              raah-e duur-e ishq meN rotaa hai kyaa
              aage aage dekhiye hotaa hai kyaa
              Why do you weep so much along the long path of love
              Just wait there are more problems to come
              7
              mere fikr-o-fun1 ka Ghuroor2 vo, mere har suKhan3 ka suroor4 vo
              mera zahn5 aisa rabaab6 hai, jise chheRta7 koii aur hai

              1.thought and capabilities/talent 2.pride 3.word, verse 4.exhilaration, joy 5.mind 6.stringed musical instrument 7.pulling strings

              He declares that his mind is the pride and joy of his talent.  But his own mind is like a ‘rabaab/sitaar’ that someone else pulls the strings of.  Is he saying that his verse is inspired by god … like Ghalib …

              aate haiN Ghaib se ye mazaamiiN Khayaal meN
              Ghalib sariir-e Khaama navaa-e sarosh hai

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              4 min
            • qadr daaN mera-jagat mohan lal ravaaN

              For word meanings and explanatory discussion in English click on the tabs marked “Roman” or “Notes”.

              https://urdushahkar.org/wp-content/uploads/2025/10/jmlr-qadr-daaN-mera-audio.mp3

              Recitation

              • اُردو
              • देवनागरी
              • Roman
              • Notes
              • قدرداں  میرا  ۔  جگت  موہن  لعل  رواںؔ

                ۱

                گُلِ  ویرانہ  ہوں  کوئی  نہیں  ہے  قدرداں  میرا

                تو  ہی  دیکھ  اے  مرے  خلّاق  حُسنِ  رائیگاں  میرا

                ۲

                یہ  کہہ  کر  روح  نکلی  ہے  تنِ  عاشق  سے  فرقت  میں

                مجھے  عُجلت  ہے  بڑھ  جائے  نہ  آگے  کارواں  میرا

                ۳

                ہَوا  اُس  کو  اُڑا  لے  جائے  اب  یا  پھونک  دے  بجلی

                حفاظت  کر  نہیں  سکتا  مری  جب  آشیاں  میرا

                ۴

                زمیں  پر  بار  ہوں  اور  آسمان  سے  دور  اے  مالک

                نہیں  معلوم  کچھ  آخر  ٹھکانا  ہے  کہاں  میرا

                ۵

                مجھے  نغمے  کا  لُطف  آتا  ہے  راتوں  کی  خموشی  میں

                دلِ  بشکستہ  ہے  اک  سازِ  آہنگِ  فغاں  میرا

                ۶

                وہیں  سے  ابتدائے  کوچۂ  دلدار  کی  حد  ہے

                قدم  خود  چلتے  چلتے  آ  کے  رک  جائے  جہاں  میرا

                ۷

                ذرا  دور  اور  ہے  اے  کشتئ  عمر  رواں  ساحل

                کہ  اس  بحرِ  جہاں  میں  ہر  نفس  ہے  بادباں  میرا

                ۸

                ہوئی  جاتی  ہے  تنہائی  میں  لذّت  روح  کی  ضائع

                لٹا  جاتا  ہے  ویرانے  میں  گنجِ  شائگاں  میرا

                ۹

                عناصر  ہنستے  ہیں  دنیا  کی  وسعت  مسکراتی  ہے

                کسی  سے  پوچھتے  ہیں  اہلِ  بینش  جب  نشاں  میرا

                ۱۰

                مرے  بعد  اور  پھر  کوئی  نظر  مجھ  سا  نہیں  آتا

                بہت  دن  تک  رکھیں  گے  سوگ  اہلِ  خانداں  میرا

                ۱۱

                غنیمت  ہے  نفس  دو  چار  جو  باقی  ہیں  اب  ورنہ

                کبھی  کا  لُٹ  چکا  سرمایۂ  سُود  و  زیاں  میرا

                ۱۲

                ابھی  تک  فصلِ  گل  میں  اک  صدائے  درد  آتی  ہے

                وہاں  کی  خاک  سے  پہلے  جہاں  تھا  آشیاں  میرا

                ۱۳

                رواںؔ  سچ  ہے  محبت  کا  اثر  ضائع  نہیں  ہوتا

                وہ  رو  دیتے  ہیں  اب  بھی  ذکر  آتا  ہے  جہاں  میرا

                क़द्र-दाँ मेरा – जगत मोहन लाल रवां

                १

                गुल-ए वीराना हूँ कोई नहीं है क़द्र-दाँ मेरा

                तू ही देख अए मेरे ख़ल्लाक़ हुस्न-ए राएगाँ मेरा

                २

                ये कह कर रूह निकली है तन-ए आशेक़ से फ़ुर्क़त में

                मुझे उज्लत है बढ़ जाए न आगे कारवाँ मेरा

                ३

                हवा उस को उढा ले जाए अब या फूँक दे बिजली

                हिफ़ाज़त कर नहीं सकता मेरी जब आशियाँ मेरा

                ४

                ज़मीं पर बार हूँ और आसमान से दूर अए मालिक

                नहीं मालूम कुछ आख़िर ठिकाना है कहाँ मेरा

                ५

                मुझे नग़्मे का लुत्फ़ आता है रातों की ख़मोशी में

                दिल-ए बशिकस्ता है एक साज़-ए आहंग-ए फ़ुग़ाँ मेरा

                ६

                वहीं से इब्तेदा-ए कूचा-ए दिलदार की हद है

                क़दम ख़ुद चलते चलते आ के रुक जाए जहाँ मेरा

                ७

                ज़रा दूर और है अए कश्ती-ए उम्र-ए रवाँ साहिल

                के इस बहर-ए जहाँ में हर नफ़स है बादबाँ मेरा

                ८

                हुई जाती है तन्हाई में लज़्ज़त रूह की ज़ा’ए

                लुटा जाता है वीराने में गंज-ए शाएगाँ मेरा

                ९

                अनासिर हँसते हैं दुनिया की वुस’अत मुस्कुराती है

                किसी से पूछते हैं अहल-ए बीनिश जब निशाँ मेरा

                १०

                मेरे बाद और फिर कोई नज़र मुझ सा नहीं आता

                बहुत दिन तक रखेंगे सोग अहल-ए ख़ान्दाँ मेरा

                ११

                ग़नीमत है नफ़स दो चार जो बाक़ी हैं अब वर्ना

                कभी का लुट चुका सर्माया-ए सूद-ओ-ज़ियाँ मेरा

                १२

                अभी तक फ़स्ल-ए गुल में एक सदा-ए दर्द आती है

                वहाँ की ख़ाक से पहले जहाँ था आशियाँ मेरा

                १३

                रवां सच है मोहब्बत का असर ज़ा’ए नहीं होता

                वो रो देते हैं अब भी ज़िक्र आता है जहाँ मेरा

                 

                Click here for background and on any passage for word meanings and explanatory discussion. jagat mohan lal ravaaN (1889-1934) learnt urdu, faarsi and arabi at a local maktab and went on to get an MA and and LLB. He practiced law and also left a reasonable collection of verse, given his short life span. He wrote a masnavi in praise of buddha. This Ghazal is in a similar zamin as Ghalib’s ‘ban gaya raqiib aaKhir thaa jo raazdaaN apna’ – just with meraa replacing apna.

                1
                gul1-e viiraana2 huN koii nahiiN hai qadr-daaN3 meraa
                tu hii dekh aye mer’e Khallaaq4 husn5-e raa’egaaN6 meraa     1.rose 2.wilderness 3. connoisseur, people who value 4.creator 5.skill, merit 6.wasted
                I am a rose in the wilderness, there is no one to appreciate me. You yourselves see, my creator, this wasted talent of mine.
                2
                yeh kah kar ruuh1 niklii hai tan2-e aashiq3 se furqat4 meN
                mujhe ujlat5 hai baRh6 jaa’e na aage kaarvaaN meraa    1.soul 2.body 3.lover 4.separation 5.hurry 6.proceed, get further ahead
                The lover is separated from the beloved and is dying of sorrow. It is conventional for the beloved to visit him on his death bed. But as usual, she is late and the soul does not want to wait. As his soul leaves the body it declares that it is in a hurry because it is afraid that its caravaan would get further ahead and it would be left behind. The soul had to undertake a journey, and a journey usually requires a caravan, which the soul does not want to miss.
                3
                havaa1 uss ko uRaa le jaa’e ab yaa phuuNk2 de bijlii3
                hifaazat4 kar nahiiN saktaa merii jab aashiyaaN5 meraa     1.wind 2.blow, burn, destroy 3.lightning 4.protection 5.nest
                In urdu poetic tradition, the poet/protagonist is often portrayed a bird whose nest is always in danger of getting struck by lightning or blown away in a storm. Here the poet/bird is frustrated that the nest is not able to protect it. So, he expresses his anger … let the wind blow it away or lightning burn it up, I don’t care, says he.
                4
                zamiiN par baar1 huN aur aasmaaN se duur aye maalik
                nahiiN maaluum kuchh aaKhir Thikaanaa2 hai kahaaN meraa     1.burden 2.home, refuge
                O lord, I am a burden on this earth and am far away from the sky. I don’t know where I will find refuge.
                5
                mujhe naGhme1 kaa lutf2 aataa hai raatoN kii Khamoshii3 meN
                dil-e bashikasta4 hai ek saaz5-e aahaNg6-e fuGhaaN7 meraa     1.song 2.pleasure 3.silence 4.broken 5.musical instrument, harp 6.melody 7.wailing
                I get pleasure in singing during the silence of the night. My broken heart is a harp of the melody of my wails.
                6
                vahiiN se ibtedaa1-e kuucha2-e dildaar3 kii hadd4 hai
                qadam5 Khud6 chalte chalte aa ke ruk jaa’e jahaaN7 meraa     1.beginning 2.street 3.beloved 4.boundary 5.step 6.itself 7.where
                The poet/lover/seeker is on a journey, his destination, the beloved’s street. His desire is so intense that even his feet know his goal. When they get there, they will stop by themselves and he will know that that is the head/start of the beloved’s street. Any number of refinements to the interpretation are possible. This is not a physical journey, but an emotional one and it takes him into unknown territory, but the lover will know in his heart when he has reached his destination. The beloved could be the romantic beloved, the divine beloved or even his literary creativity.
                7
                zaraa duur aur hai aye kashti-e umr-e-ravaaN1 saahil2
                keh iss bahr-e-jahaaN3 meN har nafas4 hai baadbaaN5 meraa    1.flowing/passing life 2.shore 3.ocean of the world, ocean of life 4.breath 5.sail of a boat
                The poet’s life is like a boat sailing over the ocean of life. It has just a little more distance to cover before it reaches the shore. Every breath is like a wind blowing the sail of his boat a little further along. The unstated feeling is a sense of peace and acceptance as the shore/end of life approaches.
                8
                huii jaatii hai tanhaa’ii1 meN lazzat2 ruuh3 kii zaa’e4
                luTaa jaataa hai viiraane5 meN ganj6-e shaa’egaaN7 meraa   1.solitude 2.pleasure 3.soul 4.wasted 5.wilderness 6.treasure 7.precious
                It is customary/common for poets to feel or at least to claim that they feel that they are underappreciated. Thus, ganj-e shaa’egaaN could be the rich treasure of his thought expressed in his verse. It is this that gives pleasure to the soul but is going to waste in solitude, it is as if it is being plundered in the wilderness.
                9
                anaasir1 haNste haiN duniyaa kii vus’at2 muskuraatii3 hai
                kisii se puuchhte haiN ahl4-e biinish5 jab nishaaN6 meraa    1.elements – air, water, fire, clay 2.expanse 3.smile 4.people of 5.insight, discernment 6.mark, impact
                This can be interpreted either as a lament of underappreciation or a boast of excellence depending on the nature of the laugh and smile of the elements and the expanse of the world. People of insight, of discerning tastes ask about the mark/impact of the poet. The elements laugh and the expanse of creation smiles. This could be a mocking laugh and derisive smile discounting the impact of the poet (lament of underappreciation) or it could be a knowing laughter and appreciative smile because the mark of the poet/his verse is synchronous with the beauty of creation (boast of high quality).
                10
                mer’e b’aad aur phir koii nazar1 mujh saa2 nahiiN aataa
                bahut din tak rakheNge sog3 ahl4-e KhaandaaN5 meraa    1.seen, recognized 2.short of jaisa-like, similar to 3.mourn 4.people of 5.family, tribe
                Here the interpretation of KhaandaaN can be expansive, meaning the tribe of poets, people who understand/appreciate fine poetry. Thus, the first misra declares – after me, there is no one that is obviously like me (implied is with poetic skills like mine). Discerning people will mourn my loss for a long time.
                11
                Ghaniimat1 hai nafas2 do-chaar3 jo baaqii4 haiN ab varna5
                kabhii kaa luT6 chukaa sarmaaya7-e suud-o-ziyaaN8 meraa     1.at least this much, just enough 2.breath 3.a few 4.remain 5.otherwise 6.plundered 7.treasure 8.gains and losses
                It may be a bit of a stretch but sarmaaya-e suud-o-ziyaaN should be interpreted as the treasure of gains and losses – successes and failures in composing verse that the poet is leaving behind. It is good that he has a little more time to live (a few more breaths left) otherwise this treasure would have been plundered/lost/wasted.
                12
                abhii tak fasl-e-gul1 meN ek sadaa2-e dard3 aatii hai
                vahaaN kii Khaak4 se pahle jahaaN5 thaa aashiyaaN6 meraa   1.season of flowers, spring 2.sound 3.pain 4.dust, ashes 5.where 6.nest, home
                In urdu poetic tradition the poet is often portrayed as a bird whose nest is struck by lightning and burnt to ashes. This happened to the poet’s nest sometime ago but even to this day – abhii tak – a sound of pain rises in the spring (a season of love, merriment and rejuvenation) from the ashes/dust of the place where once the nest was.
                13
                ravaaN1 sach2 hai mohabbat kaa asar3 zaa’e4 nahiiN hotaa
                vo ro dete haiN ab bhii zikr5 aataa hai jahaaN6 meraa   1.pen-name, taKhallus 2.true 3.effect 4.wasted 5.mention, narration 6.where, when
                The poet is dead and gone (but he still observes what is going on and writes about it). The vo in the second misra is the beloved. She weeps whenever the poet/lover is mentioned. That is enough for the dead poet to declare – O ravaaN, it is true, the effect of love does not go to waste.

                jagat mohan lal ravaaN (1889-1934) learnt urdu, faarsi and arabi at a local maktab and went on to get an MA and and LLB.  He practiced law and also left a reasonable collection of verse, given his short life span.  He wrote a masnavi in praise of buddha.  This Ghazal is in a similar zamin as Ghalib’s ‘ban gaya raqiib aaKhir thaa jo raazdaaN apna’ – just with meraa replacing apna.

                1
                gul1-e viiraana2 huN koii nahiiN hai qadr-daaN3 meraa
                tu hii dekh aye mer’e Khallaaq4 husn5-e raa’egaaN6 meraa

                1.rose 2.wilderness 3. connoisseur, people who value 4.creator 5.skill, merit 6.wasted

                I am a rose in the wilderness, there is no one to appreciate me.  You yourselves see, my creator, this wasted talent of mine.

                2
                yeh kah kar ruuh1 niklii hai tan2-e aashiq3 se furqat4 meN
                mujhe ujlat5 hai baRh6 jaa’e na aage kaarvaaN meraa

                1.soul 2.body 3.lover 4.separation 5.hurry 6.proceed, get further ahead

                The lover is separated from the beloved and is dying of sorrow.  It is conventional for the beloved to visit him on his death bed.  But as usual, she is late and the soul does not want to wait.  As his soul leaves the body it declares that it is in a hurry because it is afraid that its caravaan would get further ahead and it would be left behind.  The soul had to undertake a journey, and a journey usually requires a caravan, which the soul does not want to miss.

                3
                havaa1 uss ko uRaa le jaa’e ab yaa phuuNk2 de bijlii3
                hifaazat4 kar nahiiN saktaa merii jab aashiyaaN5 meraa

                1.wind 2.blow, burn, destroy 3.lightning 4.protection 5.nest

                In urdu poetic tradition, the poet/protagonist is often portrayed a bird whose nest is always in danger of getting struck by lightning or blown away in a storm.  Here the poet/bird is frustrated that the nest is not able to protect it.  So, he expresses his anger … let the wind blow it away or lightning burn it up, I don’t care, says he.

                4
                zamiiN par baar1 huN aur aasmaaN se duur aye maalik
                nahiiN maaluum kuchh aaKhir Thikaanaa2 hai kahaaN meraa

                1.burden 2.home, refuge

                O lord, I am a burden on this earth and am far away from the sky.  I don’t know where I will find refuge.

                5
                mujhe naGhme1 kaa lutf2 aataa hai raatoN kii Khamoshii3 meN
                dil-e bashikasta4 hai ek saaz5-e aahaNg6-e fuGhaaN7 meraa

                1.song 2.pleasure 3.silence 4.broken 5.musical instrument, harp 6.melody 7.wailing

                I get pleasure in singing during the silence of the night.  My broken heart is a harp of the melody of my wails.

                6
                vahiiN se ibtedaa1-e kuucha2-e dildaar3 kii hadd4 hai
                qadam5 Khud6 chalte chalte aa ke ruk jaa’e jahaaN7 meraa

                1.beginning 2.street 3.beloved 4.boundary 5.step 6.itself 7.where

                The poet/lover/seeker is on a journey, his destination, the beloved’s street.  His desire is so intense that even his feet know his goal.  When they get there, they will stop by themselves and he will know that that is the head/start of the beloved’s street.  Any number of refinements to the interpretation are possible.  This is not a physical journey, but an emotional one and it takes him into unknown territory, but the lover will know in his heart when he has reached his destination.  The beloved could be the romantic beloved, the divine beloved or even his literary creativity.

                7
                zaraa duur aur hai aye kashti-e umr-e-ravaaN1 saahil2
                keh iss bahr-e-jahaaN3 meN har nafas4 hai baadbaaN5 meraa

                1.flowing/passing life 2.shore 3.ocean of the world, ocean of life 4.breath 5.sail of a boat

                The poet’s life is like a boat sailing over the ocean of life.  It has just a little more distance to cover before it reaches the shore.  Every breath is like a wind blowing the sail of his boat a little further along.  The unstated feeling is a sense of peace and acceptance as the shore/end of life approaches.

                8
                huii jaatii hai tanhaa’ii1 meN lazzat2 ruuh3 kii zaa’e4
                luTaa jaataa hai viiraane5 meN ganj6-e shaa’egaaN7 meraa

                1.solitude 2.pleasure 3.soul 4.wasted 5.wilderness 6.treasure 7.precious

                It is customary/common for poets to feel or at least to claim that they feel that they are underappreciated.  Thus, ganj-e shaa’egaaN could be the rich treasure of his thought expressed in his verse.  It is this that gives pleasure to the soul but is going to waste in solitude, it is as if it is being plundered in the wilderness.

                9
                anaasir1 haNste haiN duniyaa kii vus’at2 muskuraatii3 hai
                kisii se puuchhte haiN ahl4-e biinish5 jab nishaaN6 meraa

                1.elements – air, water, fire, clay 2.expanse 3.smile 4.people of 5.insight, discernment 6.mark, impact

                This can be interpreted either as a lament of underappreciation or a boast of excellence depending on the nature of the laugh and smile of the elements and the expanse of the world.  People of insight, of discerning tastes ask about the mark/impact of the poet.  The elements laugh and the expanse of creation smiles.  This could be a mocking laugh and derisive smile discounting the impact of the poet (lament of underappreciation) or it could be a knowing laughter and appreciative smile because the mark of the poet/his verse is synchronous with the beauty of creation (boast of high quality).

                10
                mer’e b’aad aur phir koii nazar1 mujh saa2 nahiiN aataa
                bahut din tak rakheNge sog3 ahl4-e KhaandaaN5 meraa

                1.seen, recognized 2.short of jaisa-like, similar to 3.mourn 4.people of 5.family, tribe

                Here the interpretation of KhaandaaN can be expansive, meaning the tribe of poets, people who understand/appreciate fine poetry.  Thus, the first misra declares – after me, there is no one that is obviously like me (implied is with poetic skills like mine).  Discerning people will mourn my loss for a long time.

                11
                Ghaniimat1 hai nafas2 do-chaar3 jo baaqii4 haiN ab varna5
                kabhii kaa luT6 chukaa sarmaaya7-e suud-o-ziyaaN8 meraa

                1.at least this much, just enough 2.breath 3.a few 4.remain 5.otherwise 6.plundered 7.treasure 8.gains and losses

                It may be a bit of a stretch but sarmaaya-e suud-o-ziyaaN should be interpreted as the treasure of gains and losses – successes and failures in composing verse that the poet is leaving behind.  It is good that he has a little more time to live (a few more breaths left) otherwise this treasure would have been plundered/lost/wasted.

                12
                abhii tak fasl-e-gul1 meN ek sadaa2-e dard3 aatii hai
                vahaaN kii Khaak4 se pahle jahaaN5 thaa aashiyaaN6 meraa

                1.season of flowers, spring 2.sound 3.pain 4.dust, ashes 5.where 6.nest, home

                In urdu poetic tradition the poet is often portrayed as a bird whose nest is struck by lightning and burnt to ashes.  This happened to the poet’s nest sometime ago but even to this day – abhii tak – a sound of pain rises in the spring (a season of love, merriment and rejuvenation) from the ashes/dust of the place where once the nest was.

                13
                ravaaN1 sach2 hai mohabbat kaa asar3 zaa’e4 nahiiN hotaa
                vo ro dete haiN ab bhii zikr5 aataa hai jahaaN6 meraa

                1.pen-name, taKhallus 2.true 3.effect 4.wasted 5.mention, narration 6.where, when

                The poet is dead and gone (but he still observes what is going on and writes about it).  The vo in the second misra is the beloved.  She weeps whenever the poet/lover is mentioned.  That is enough for the dead poet to declare – O ravaaN, it is true, the effect of love does not go to waste.

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              • lafzoN meN samo bhi na sakuuN-shaaz tamkanat

                For word meanings and explanatory discussion in English click on the tabs marked “Roman” or “Notes”.

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                Recitation

                • اُردو
                • देवनागरी
                • Roman
                • Notes
                • لفظوں  میں  سمو  بھی  نہ  سکوں  ۔  شاذؔ  تمکنت

                  ۱

                  کیا  قیامت  ہے  کہ  اک  شخص  کا  ہو  بھی  نہ  سکوں

                  زندگی  کون  سی  دولت  ہے  کہ  کھو  بھی  نہ  سکوں

                  ۲

                  گھر  سے  نکلوں  تو  بھرے  شہر  کے  ہنگامے  ہیں

                  میں  وہ  مجبور،  تری  یاد  میں  رو  بھی  نہ  سکوں

                  ۳

                  دن  کے  پہلو  سے  لگا  رہتا  ہے  اندیشۂ  شام

                  صبح  کے  خوف  سے  نیند  آئے  تو  سو  بھی  نہ  سکوں

                  ۴

                  ختم  ہوتا  ہی  نہیں  سلسلۂ  موجِ  سراب

                  پار  اُتر  بھی  نہ  سکوں  ناؤ  ڈبو  بھی  نہ  سکوں

                  ۵

                  شاذؔ  معلوم  ہوا  عجز  بیانی  کیا  ہے

                  دل  میں  وہ  آگ  ہے  لفظوں  میں  سمو  بھی  نہ  سکوں

                  लफ़्ज़ों में समो भी न सकूँ – शाज़ तम्कनत

                  १

                  क्या क़यामत है के इक शख़्स का हो भी न सकूँ

                  ज़िंदगी कौन सी दौलत है के खो भी न सकूँ

                  २

                  घर से निकलूँ तो भरे शहर के हंगामे हैं

                  मैं वो मज्बूर तेरी याद में रो भी न सकूँ

                  ३

                  दिन के पहलू से लगा रहता है अंदेशा-ए शाम

                  सुब्ह के ख़ौफ़ से नींद आए तो सो भी न सकूँ

                  ४

                  ख़त्म होता ही नहीं सिलसिला-ए मौज-ए सराब

                  पार उतर भी न सकूँ नाउ डुबो भी न सकूँ

                  ५

                  शाज़ मालूम हुआ इज्ज़-बयानी क्या है

                  दिल में वो आग है लफ़्ज़ों में समो भी न सकूँ

                   

                  Click here for background and on any passage for word meanings and explanatory discussion. syed maslahuddin shaaz tamkanat (1933-1985), hyderabad. PhD from osmania university for his thesis on the life and works of a prominent progressive poet maKhdoom mohiuddin. Later, he taught at the university. This Ghazal, with the same radeef/qaafiya as Ghalib’s ‘maiN gaya vaqt nahiN huN keh phir aa bhi na sakuN’, is linked to ‘Ghalib naqsh-e qadam’ and also to ‘hyderabad shuara’.

                  1
                  kya qayaamat1 hai keh ek shaKhs2 ka ho bhi na sakuN
                  zindagi kaun si daulat3 hai ki kho bhi na sakuN   1.calamity 2.one particular person or any person 3.wealth, treasure
                  ‘kisi ka ho jaana’ can imply ‘jaan kho dena’ – lose one’s life in their longing. ‘zindagi kaun si daulat hai’ – implies that it is not of such a high value, he is quite willing to give it up, to lose it. Thus, what a calamity that I cannot belong to anyone (or to that someone special). After all I don’t value life so much that I would hesitate in giving it up/away. Why is he not able to do so, remains for us to guess. Possibly because he is rejected or ignored by the beloved.
                  2
                  ghar se nikluN to bhare shahr ke haNgaame1 haiN
                  maiN vo majbuur2 teri yaad meN ro bhi na sakuN   1.tumult, crowds 2.circumscribed, limited
                  The convention of love requires the lover to be stoic, he cannot weep in front of crowds, in public. Thus, if I step outside the house into the teeming city, I am faced with crowds. I am so circumscribed that I cannot even cry, vent my sorrow.
                  3
                  din ke pahlu1 se laga rahta hai andesha2-e shaam
                  sub’h ke Khauf3 se niiNd aaye to so bhi na sakuN   1.side, embrace, in company of 2.anticipation, anxiety 3.fear
                  There is anxiety of the night because night is a time of loneliness, missing the beloved. Thus, always accompanying the day is the anxiety of the impending night. During the night there is the fear of dawn and confirmation of a broken promise. Thus, for the fear of dawn, even if I am sleepy I cannot sleep i.e., he is restless and anxious day and night.
                  4
                  Khatm1 hota hi nahiN silsila2-e mauj3-e saraab4
                  paar utar bhi na sakuN naau5 Dubo bhi na sakuN   1.finish, end 2.continuation, series 3.waves 4.mirage, illusion 5.boat
                  The series of waves of mirage (continuous illusions) never ends. He keeps traversing the desert with mirage after mirage. Neither can he row across nor can he sink his boat (drown himself). He is totally helpless.
                  5
                  shaaz1 m’aalum hua ijz-bayaani2 kya hai
                  dil meN vo aag hai lafzoN3 meN samo4 bhi na sakuN    1.pen-name of the poet 2.humility of speech/composing poetry 3.words 4.contain
                  O shaaz, I have come to understand the meaning of humility of versification. There is such a fire/passion in my heart that I cannot contain it in words.

                  syed maslahuddin shaaz tamkanat (1933-1985), hyderabad.  PhD from osmania university for his thesis on the life and works of a prominent progressive poet maKhdoom mohiuddin.  Later, he taught at the university.  This Ghazal, with the same radeef/qaafiya as Ghalib’s ‘maiN gaya vaqt nahiN huN keh phir aa bhi na sakuN’, is linked to ‘Ghalib naqsh-e qadam’ and also to ‘hyderabadi shuara’.

                  1
                  kya qayaamat1 hai keh ek shaKhs2 ka ho bhi na sakuN
                  zindagi kaun si daulat3 hai ki kho bhi na sakuN

                  1.calamity 2.one particular person or any person 3.wealth, treasure

                  ‘kisi ka ho jaana’ can imply ‘jaan kho dena’ – lose one’s life in their longing.  ‘zindagi kaun si daulat hai’ – implies that it is not of such a high value, he is quite willing to give it up, to lose it.  Thus, what a calamity that I cannot belong to anyone (or to that someone special).  After all I don’t value life so much that I would hesitate in giving it up/away.  Why is he not able to do so, remains for us to guess.  Possibly because he is rejected or ignored by the beloved.

                  2
                  ghar se nikluN to bhare shahr ke haNgaame1 haiN
                  maiN vo majbuur2 teri yaad meN ro bhi na sakuN

                  1.tumult, crowds 2.circumscribed, limited

                  The convention of love requires the lover to be stoic, he cannot weep in front of crowds, in public.  Thus, if I step outside the house into the teeming city, I am faced with crowds.  I am so circumscribed that I cannot even cry, vent my sorrow.

                  3
                  din ke pahlu1 se laga rahta hai andesha2-e shaam
                  sub’h ke Khauf3 se niiNd aaye to so bhi na sakuN

                  1.side, embrace, in company of 2.anticipation, anxiety 3.fear

                  There is anxiety of the night because night is a time of loneliness, missing the beloved.  Thus, always accompanying the day is the anxiety of the impending night.  During the night there is the fear of dawn and confirmation of a broken promise.  Thus, for the fear of dawn, even if I am sleepy I cannot sleep i.e., he is restless and anxious day and night.

                  4
                  Khatm1 hota hi nahiN silsila2-e mauj3-e saraab4
                  paar utar bhi na sakuN naau5 Dubo bhi na sakuN

                  1.finish, end 2.continuation, series 3.waves 4.mirage, illusion 5.boat

                  The series of waves of mirage (continuous illusions) never ends.  He keeps traversing the desert with mirage after mirage.  Neither can he row across nor can he sink his boat (drown himself).  He is totally helpless.

                  5
                  shaaz1 m’aalum hua ijz-bayaani2 kya hai
                  dil meN vo aag hai lafzoN3 meN samo4 bhi na sakuN

                  1.pen-name of the poet 2.humility of speech/composing poetry 3.words 4.contain

                  O shaaz, I have come to understand the meaning of humility of versification.  There is such a fire/passion in my heart that I cannot contain it in words.

                  The post lafzoN meN samo bhi na sakuuN-shaaz tamkanat appeared first on UrduShahkar.

                  3 min
                • soorat-e urdu zabaaN hai zindagi-gopal krishn shafaq

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                  Recitation

                  • اُردو
                  • देवनागरी
                  • Roman
                  • Notes
                  • صورتِ  اُردو  زباں  ہے  زندگی  ۔  کرشن  گوپال  شفقؔ

                    ۱

                    داستاں  ہی  داستاں  ہے  زندگی

                    زندگی  میں  اب  کہاں  ہے  زندگی

                    ۲

                    آپ  منزل  آپ  منزل  کا  جُنُوں

                    آپ  میرِ  کارواں  ہے  زندگی

                    ۳

                    کھو  گئی  ہے  حادثوں  کی  بھیڑ  میں

                    اب  کہاں  ڈھونڈوں  کہاں  ہے  زندگی

                    ۴

                    نامُرادِ  آرزُوئے  عشق  کو

                    ایک  بیوہ  کا  جہاں  ہے  زندگی

                    ۵

                    راہِ  حق  میں  ہو  گئی  جو  بھی  نثار

                    زندگی  وہ  جاوداں  ہے  زندگی

                    ۶

                    مل  گئی  خوشیوں  کی  ہر  منزل  مجھے

                    آج  مجھ  پہ  مہرباں  ہے  زندگی

                    ۷

                    دیکھنے  والی  نگاہیں  ہی  نہیں

                    ورنہ  ہر  شے  میں  نہاں  ہے  زندگی

                    ۸

                    کشتیِ  عمرِ  رواں  کی  خیر  ہو

                    ایک  بحرِ  بے  کراں  ہے  زندگی

                    ۹

                    جس  کو  اپنوں  نے  بگاڑا  ہے  شفقؔ

                    صورتِ  اُردُو  زباں  ہے  زندگی

                     

                    सूरत-ए उर्दू ज़बां है ज़िंदगी – कृष्ण गोपाल शफ़क़

                    १

                    दास्तां ही दास्तां है ज़िंदगी
                    ज़िंदगी में अब कहाँ है ज़िंदगी

                    २

                    आप मंज़िल, आप मंज़िल का जुनूं
                    आप मीर-ए कारवां है ज़िंदगी

                    ३

                    खो गई है हादसों की भीढ में
                    अब कहाँ ड़ूंडूं, कहाँ है ज़िंदगी

                    ४

                    नामुराद-ए आर्ज़ू-ए इश्क़ को
                    एक बेवा का जहां है ज़िंदगी

                    ५

                    राह-ए हक़ में हो गई जो भी निसार
                    ज़िंदगी वो जावेदां है ज़िंदगी

                    ६

                    मिल गई ख़ुशियों की हर मंज़िल मुझे
                    आज मुझ पे मेहरबां है ज़िंदगी

                    ७

                    देखने वाली निगाहें ही नहीं
                    वर्ना हर शै में नेहां है ज़िंदगी

                    ८

                    कश्ती-ए उम्र-ए रवां की ख़ैर हो
                    एक बहर-ए बेकरां है ज़िंदगी

                    ९

                    जिस को अपनों ने बिगाढा है शफ़क़
                    सूरत-ए उर्दू ज़बां है ज़िंदगी

                     

                    Click here for background and on any passage for word meanings and explanatory discussion. shafaq-gopal krishn batta (1933-xxxx), paTiala. MA urdu in addition to a medical degree. He practiced as a physician. Organized Indo-pak mushaa’era annually in ambala. Formed a society of poets who met regularly. Published three collections of his own poetry, one in devnagiri script.

                    1
                    daastaaN1 hii2 daastaaN hai zindagi
                    zindagi meN ab kahaaN3 hai zindagi 1.story, fable, fairy tale 2.only 3.where
                    Life has become nothing but a series of stories, fairy tales, possibly of past glory and future promises. The poet questions the presence of any true life or vitality in today’s existence.
                    2
                    aap1 manzil2, aap manzil kaa junuuN3
                    aap miir4-e kaarvaaN5 hai zindagi 1.itself as in apn’e aap 2.destination 3.passion 4.leader 5.travel party, party of seekers
                    Life is self-driven: it is both the goal and the passion to reach that goal. It leads itself, like a caravan led by its own spirit, perhaps suggesting that autonomy and internal motivation is what life ought to be. If it is not that, then it is fables and promises, as in the previous she’r.
                    3
                    kho gaii1 hai haadesoN2 kii bhiiR3 meN
                    ab kahaaN4 DhuuNDuuN5, kahaaN hai zindagi 1.has been lost 2.accidents, calamities, curses 3.crowd 4.where 5.search
                    In the chaos and crowd of incidents and tragedies, life has gotten lost i.e., life is an onslaught of calamities. The poet expresses despair, asking where and how to find (energetic, happy) life again amidst such confusion.
                    4
                    naamuraad1-e aarzu2-e ishq ko
                    ek bevaa3 kaa jahaaN4 hai zindagi 1.disappointed, unfulfilled 2.longing, unfulfilled desire 3.widow 4.world
                    Culturally the life of a widow has been (sadly, still is) considered devoid of meaning/purpose. For someone whose love remains unfulfilled, life feels like the lonely and sorrowful world of a widow.
                    5
                    raah1-e haqq2 meN ho gaii jo bhii nisaar3
                    zindagi vo jaavedaaN4 hai zindagi 1.path 2.truth, justice 3.sacrificed itself 4.eternal, immortal
                    Those who sacrifice themselves in the path of truth achieve an immortal life, suggesting that real life lies in noble sacrifice and selflessness.
                    6
                    mil gaii KhushiyoN kii har manzil1 mujhe
                    aaj2 mujh pe mehrbaaN3 hai zindagi 1.destination, stage along the journey (of life) 2.today 3.kind, benevolent
                    The poet feels that today life is kind and generous, having blessed them with all possible joys and accomplishments. I am not sure if he is referring to something specific that happened on that day … perhaps he considers the opportunity to read his Ghazal before this audience to be a source of joy for him.
                    7
                    dekhne vaalii1 nigaaheN2 hii nahiiN
                    varna3 har shai4 meN nehaaN5 hai zindagi 1.able to see, discern 2.gaze, eyes 3.otherwise 4.thing, object 5.hidden
                    Life exists everywhere, in every object and moment, but people lack the insightful/discerning eyes to truly see it. This can mean that (a)there is life/energy/functionality/critical role in everything in this world and therefore it has to be respected or (b)there is life in all objects not just animals and plants.
                    8
                    kashtii-e umr1-e ravaaN2 kii Khair3 ho
                    ek bahr4-e bekaraaN5 hai zindagi 1.life 2.flowing, passing 3.may it be protected/preserved 4.ocean 5.boundless, vast
                    Life is compared to a tiny boat sailing in an endless ocean of time. The poet prays for its safety, acknowledging the vast and uncertain journey of life.
                    9
                    jis ko apnoN1 ne bigaaRaa2 hai shafaq3
                    suurat4-e urdu zabaaN5 hai zindagi 1.friends, our own 2.spoil, destroy 3.pen-name 4.like, similar to 5.language
                    Life resembles the urdu language, beautiful, delicate, and deep, but has been neglected and damaged by its own people. This is both a lament and a metaphor for linguistic/cultural erosion.

                    shafaq-gopal krishn batta (1933-xxxx), paTiala.  MA urdu in addition to a medical degree.  He practiced as a physician.  Organized Indo-pak mushaa’era annually in ambala.  Formed a society of poets who met regularly.  Published three collections of his own poetry, one in devnagiri script.

                    1
                    daastaaN1 hii2 daastaaN hai zindagi
                    zindagi meN ab kahaaN3 hai zindagi

                    1.story, fable, fairy tale 2.only 3.where

                    Life has become nothing but a series of stories, fairy tales, possibly of past glory and future promises.  The poet questions the presence of any true life or vitality in today’s existence.

                    2
                    aap1 manzil2, aap manzil kaa junuuN3
                    aap miir4-e kaarvaaN5 hai zindagi

                    1.itself as in apn’e aap 2.destination 3.passion 4.leader 5.travel party, party of seekers

                    Life is self-driven: it is both the goal and the passion to reach that goal. It leads itself, like a caravan led by its own spirit, perhaps suggesting that autonomy and internal motivation is what life ought to be.  If it is not that, then it is fables and promises, as in the previous she’r.

                    3
                    kho gaii1 hai haadesoN2 kii bhiiR3 meN
                    ab kahaaN4 DhuuNDuuN5, kahaaN hai zindagi

                    1.has been lost 2.accidents, calamities, curses 3.crowd 4.where 5.search

                    In the chaos and crowd of incidents and tragedies, life has gotten lost i.e., life is an onslaught of calamities. The poet expresses despair, asking where and how to find (energetic, happy) life again amidst such confusion.

                    4
                    naamuraad1-e aarzu2-e ishq ko
                    ek bevaa3 kaa jahaaN4 hai zindagi

                    1.disappointed, unfulfilled 2.longing, unfulfilled desire 3.widow 4.world

                    Culturally the life of a widow has been (sadly, still is) considered devoid of meaning/purpose.  For someone whose love remains unfulfilled, life feels like the lonely and sorrowful world of a widow.

                    5
                    raah1-e haqq2 meN ho gaii jo bhii nisaar3
                    zindagi vo jaavedaaN4 hai zindagi

                    1.path 2.truth, justice 3.sacrificed itself 4.eternal, immortal

                    Those who sacrifice themselves in the path of truth achieve an immortal life, suggesting that real life lies in noble sacrifice and selflessness.

                    6
                    mil gaii KhushiyoN kii har manzil1 mujhe
                    aaj2 mujh pe mehrbaaN3 hai zindagi

                    1.destination, stage along the journey (of life) 2.today 3.kind, benevolent

                    The poet feels that today life is kind and generous, having blessed them with all possible joys and accomplishments.  I am not sure if he is referring to something specific that happened on that day … perhaps he considers the opportunity to read his Ghazal before this audience to be a source of joy for him.

                    7
                    dekhne vaalii1 nigaaheN2 hii nahiiN
                    varna3 har shai4 meN nehaaN5 hai zindagi

                    1.able to see, discern 2.gaze, eyes 3.otherwise 4.thing, object 5.hidden

                    Life exists everywhere, in every object and moment, but people lack the insightful/discerning eyes to truly see it.  This can mean that (a)there is life/energy/functionality/critical role in everything in this world and therefore it has to be respected or (b)there is life in all objects not just animals and  plants.

                    8
                    kashtii-e umr1-e ravaaN2 kii Khair3 ho
                    ek bahr4-e bekaraaN5 hai zindagi

                    1.life 2.flowing, passing 3.may it be protected/preserved 4.ocean 5.boundless, vast

                    Life is compared to a tiny boat sailing in an endless ocean of time. The poet prays for its safety, acknowledging the vast and uncertain journey of life.

                    9
                    jis ko apnoN1 ne bigaaRaa2 hai shafaq3
                    suurat4-e urdu zabaaN5 hai zindagi

                    1.friends, our own 2.spoil, destroy 3.pen-name 4.like, similar to 5.language

                    Life resembles the urdu language, beautiful, delicate, and deep, but has been neglected and damaged by its own people. This is both a lament and a metaphor for linguistic/cultural erosion.

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                    3 min
                  • dashna-e pinhaaN liye hu’e-saadhu raam aarzu saharanpuri

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                    Recitation

                    • اُردو
                    • देवनागरी
                    • Roman
                    • Notes
                    • دشنۂ  پِنہاں  لئے  ہوئے  ۔  سادھو  رام  آرزوؔ  سہارنپوری

                      ۱

                      کیف  و  صد  اِنبساط  کا  ساماں  لئے  ہوئے

                      خود  زندگی  ہے  میکدۂ  جاں  لئے  ہوئے

                      ۲

                      حسنِ  تمامِ  عالمِ  اِمکاں  لئے  ہوئے

                      دل  ہے  کسی  کا  گوشۂ  داماں  لئے  ہوئے

                      ۳

                      طے  کر  رہا  ہوں  عشق  کی  منزل  کشاں  کشاں

                      حسنِ  نزاکتِ  غمِ  جاناں  لئے  ہوئے

                      ۴

                      اِس  عشقِ  سادہ  لوح  کو  اب  تک  نہیں  خبر

                      وہ  بھی  ہیں  اِک  لطیف  سا  ارماں  لئے  ہوئے

                      ۵

                      ہر  منزل  و  مقام  سے  گزرے  ہیں  اہلِ  عشق

                      دامن  میں  حادثات  کے  طوفاں  لئے  ہوئے

                      ۶

                      جو  حسن  سے  بلند  ہے  جو  عشق  سے  لطیف

                      ایسی  بھی  ایک  چیز  ہے  اِنساں  لئے  ہوئے

                      ۷

                      معصوم  ہے  وہ  حسن  مگر  پھر  بھی  آرزوؔ

                      ایک  اِک  ادا  ہے  دشنۂ  پِنہاں  لئے  ہوئے

                      दश्ना-ए पिनहाँ लिये हुए – साधु राम आरज़ू सहरनपुरी

                      १

                      कैफ़ ओ सद इंबेसात का सामां लिये हुए

                      ख़ुद ज़िंदगी है मैकदा-ए जाँ लिये हुए

                      २

                      हुस्न-ए तमाम-ए आलम-ए इम्काँ लिये हुए

                      दिल है किसी का गोशा-ए दामाँ लिये हुए

                      ३

                      तय कर रहा हूँ इश्क़ की मंज़िल कशाँ-कशाँ

                      हुस्न-ए नज़ाकत-ए ग़म-ए जानाँ लिये हुए

                      ४

                      इस इश्क़-ए सादा-लौह को अब तक नहीं ख़बर

                      वो भी हैं एक लतीफ़-सा अर्माँ लिये हुए

                      ५

                      हर मंज़िल-ओ-मक़ाम से गुज़रे हैं अहल-ए इश्क़

                      दामन में हादसात के तूफ़ाँ लिये हुए

                      ६

                      जो हुस्न से बुलंद है जो इश्क़ से लतीफ़

                      ऐसी भी एक चीज़ है इंसाँ लिये हुए

                      ७

                      मासूम है वो हुस्न मगर फिर भी आरज़ू

                      एक एक अदा है दश्ना-ए पिनहाँ लिये हुए

                       

                      Click here for background and on any passage for word meanings and explanatory discussion. saadhu ram aarzu saharanpuri (1901-1983) saharanpur and kolkata. He was a shaagird of faani badayuni. There are at least two collections of Ghazal and nazm. There is precious little by way of biographical information but it seems that he was associated with teaching (perhaps urdu) in some college in kolkata. This is one of two Ghazal in the same zamiin, both linked to Ghalib naqsh-e qadam.

                      1
                      kaif1 o sad-inbesaat2 ka saamaaN3 liye hu’e
                      Khud zindagi hai maikada4-e jaaN liye hu’e 1.state of joy, intoxication, ecstasy 2.a hundred delights 3.provisions 4.tavern 5.life, soul
                      This couplet suggests that life itself is a tavern, or a source of spiritual intoxication. It’s a journey filled with every possible kind of joy and happiness, as if life itself holds all the provisions for a hundred different delights.
                      2
                      husn-e-tamaam1-e aalam2-e imkaaN3 liye hu’e
                      dil hai kisi ka goshaa4-e daamaaN5 liye hu’e    1.complete/perfect beauty 2.world of 3.possibilities 4.corner 5.hem of the garment
                      Here ‘husn-e tamaam’ can either be perfect beauty attributed to the divine or an exaggerated description of the beloved. gosha-e daamaaaN lena or pakaRnaa – implies holding the hem of someone’s garment as an appeal or protest, demanding justice. Thus, the heart carries in itself an image of husn-e tamaam and a vision of a world of possibilities. But these possibilities have not materialized for him and he has not realized the husn-e tamaam – has not been able to achieve union with it (as a sufi mystic would want to). So, in protest it is holding the corner of the hem of their garment.
                      3
                      ta’e1 kar rahaa huN ishq ki manzil2 kashaaN-kashaaN3
                      husn4-e nazaakat5-e Gham6-e jaanaaN7 liye hu’e 1.to travel, to cross, to cover a distance 2.destination 3.pulled and stretched, with difficulty 4.beauty 5.grace 6.sorrow 7.beloved
                      The poet describes the journey of love as difficult and challenging, something he is being dragged through. However, he is doing so while carrying the ‘delicate beauty of the pain of love for the beloved.’ This paradoxical statement suggests that even the pain and sorrow associated with love are beautiful and graceful, and it’s this delicate pain that propels the lover forward on their difficult journey.
                      4
                      is ishq-e saadah-lauh1 ko ab tak nahiiN Khabar2
                      vo bhi haiN ek latiif3 saa armaaN4 liye hu’e 1.simple-minded, naive 2.awareness, knowledge 3.delicate, subtle 4.desire, wish

                      Here ishq is used to mean the lover, in this case the poet/lover, and vo is used to mean the beloved. He is so naïve and simple-minded that he is not even aware that the beloved too carries a subtle, refined desire in her heart i.e., she reciprocates his love in subtle ways. Is it a stretch to consider the beloved to be the divine.

                      5
                      har manzil1-o-maqaam2 se guzre3 haiN ahl-e-ishq4
                      daaman5 meN haadsaat6 ke tufaaN7 liye hu’e 1.destination 2.stage/position along the journey 3.passed through 4.people of love, lovers 5.hem of the garment 6.calamities, misfortunes 7.storm, tempest
                      The journey of love is not easy. In every stage of the destination that lovers pass through, they carry a storm of calamities with them (in their lap) i.e., there are trials to be faced at every stage of the journey.
                      6
                      jo husn1 se buland2 hai jo ishq se latiif3
                      aisi bhi ek chiiz4 hai insaaN5 liye hu’e 1.beauty 2.elevated, superior 3.delicate, subtle 4.thing 5.human
                      Says the poet – the human being or the human condition carries something (mysterious) that is ‘higher than/superior to beauty’ and ‘more delicate/fragile than love.’ Quite what this mysterious quality is, the poet leaves for us to figure out. It may be an intense desire to merge with the divine, the constant search … it is the reader’s choice.
                      7
                      maa’usum1 hai vo husn2 magar phir bhi aarzu3
                      ek ek adaa4 hai dashna5-e pinhaaN6 liye hu’e 1.innocent, guileless 2.beauty, beloved 3.pen-name, taKhallus, also desire, wish 4.gesture, style 5.dagger 6.hidden, concealed
                      The beloved is guileless. She does not mean to cause any harm. Yet every gesture, every mannerism is like a ‘hidden dagger’ that cuts the heart. In much the same way an aarzu might seem innocent and harmless but every one drags you into materialism like a subtle knife cutting your soul off the divine beloved.

                      saadhu ram aarzu saharanpuri (1901-1983) saharanpur and kolkata.  He was a shaagird of faani badayuni.  There are at least two collections of Ghazal and nazm.  There is precious little by way of biographical information but it seems that he was associated with teaching (perhaps urdu) in some college in kolkata.  This is one of two Ghazal in the same zamiin, both linked to Ghalib naqsh-e qadam.

                      1
                      kaif1 o sad-inbesaat2 ka saamaaN3 liye hu’e
                      Khud zindagi hai maikada4-e jaaN liye hu’e

                      1.state of joy, intoxication, ecstasy 2.a hundred delights 3.provisions 4.tavern 5.life, soul

                      This couplet suggests that life itself is a tavern, or a source of spiritual intoxication. It’s a journey filled with every possible kind of joy and happiness, as if life itself holds all the provisions for a hundred different delights.

                      2
                      husn-e-tamaam1-e aalam2-e imkaaN3 liye hu’e
                      dil hai kisi ka goshaa4-e daamaaN5 liye hu’e

                      1.complete/perfect beauty 2.world of 3.possibilities 4.corner 5.hem of the garment

                      Here ‘husn-e tamaam’ can either be perfect beauty attributed to the divine or an exaggerated description of the beloved.  gosha-e daamaaaN lena or pakaRnaa – implies holding the hem of someone’s garment as an appeal or protest, demanding justice.  Thus, the heart carries in itself an image of husn-e tamaam and a vision of a world of possibilities.  But these possibilities have not materialized for him and he has not realized the husn-e tamaam – has not been able to achieve union with it (as a sufi mystic would want to).  So, in protest it is holding the corner of the hem of their garment.

                      3
                      ta’e1 kar rahaa huN ishq ki manzil2 kashaaN-kashaaN3
                      husn4-e nazaakat5-e Gham6-e jaanaaN7 liye hu’e

                      1.to travel, to cross, to cover a distance 2.destination 3.pulled and stretched, with difficulty 4.beauty 5.grace 6.sorrow 7.beloved

                      The poet describes the journey of love as difficult and challenging, something he is being dragged through. However, he is doing so while carrying the ‘delicate beauty of the pain of love for the beloved.’ This paradoxical statement suggests that even the pain and sorrow associated with love are beautiful and graceful, and it’s this delicate pain that propels the lover forward on their difficult journey.

                      4
                      is ishq-e saadah-lauh1 ko ab tak nahiiN Khabar2
                      vo bhi haiN ek latiif3 saa armaaN4 liye hu’e

                      1.simple-minded, naive 2.awareness, knowledge 3.delicate, subtle 4.desire, wish

                      Here ishq is used to mean the lover, in this case the poet/lover, and vo is used to mean the beloved.  He is so naïve and simple-minded that he is not even aware that the beloved too carries a subtle, refined desire in her heart i.e., she reciprocates his love in subtle ways.  Is it a stretch to consider the beloved to be the divine.

                      5
                      har manzil1-o-maqaam2 se guzre3 haiN ahl-e-ishq4
                      daaman5 meN haadsaat6 ke tufaaN7 liye hu’e

                      1.destination 2.stage/position along the journey 3.passed through 4.people of love, lovers 5.hem of the garment 6.calamities, misfortunes 7.storm, tempest

                      The journey of love is not easy.  In every stage of the destination that lovers pass through, they carry a storm of calamities with them (in their lap) i.e., there are trials to be faced at every stage of the journey.

                      6
                      jo husn1 se buland2 hai jo ishq se latiif3
                      aisi bhi ek chiiz4 hai insaaN5 liye hu’e

                      1.beauty 2.elevated, superior 3.delicate, subtle 4.thing 5.human

                      Says the poet – the human being or the human condition carries something (mysterious) that is ‘higher than/superior to beauty’ and ‘more delicate/fragile than love.’  Quite what this mysterious quality is, the poet leaves for us to figure out.  It may be an intense desire to merge with the divine, the constant search … it is the reader’s choice.

                      7
                      maa’usum1 hai vo husn2 magar phir bhi aarzu3
                      ek ek adaa4 hai dashna5-e pinhaaN6 liye hu’e

                      1.innocent, guileless 2.beauty, beloved 3.pen-name, taKhallus, also desire, wish 4.gesture, style 5.dagger 6.hidden, concealed

                      The beloved is guileless.  She does not mean to cause any harm.  Yet every gesture, every mannerism is like a ‘hidden dagger’ that cuts the heart. In much the same way an aarzu might seem innocent and harmless but every one drags you into materialism like a subtle knife cutting your soul off the divine beloved.

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                    • azm o yaqiiN ki baat karo-shiish chandr saxena taalib dehlavi

                      For word meanings and explanatory discussion in English click on the tabs marked “Roman” or “Notes”.

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                      Recitation

                      • اُردو
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                      • عزم  و  یقیں  کی  بات  کرو  ۔  شیش  چند  سکسینہ  طالبؔ  دہلوی

                        ۱

                        نہ  کفر  کی  نہ  کبھی  ہم  سے  دیں  کی  بات  کرو

                        کسی  کی  زُلف،  کسی  کی  جبیں  کی  بات  کرو

                        ۲

                        فضول  کیوں  فلکِ  ہفتمیں  کی  بات  کرو

                        جہاں  پہنچ  ہو  تمہاری،  وہیں  کی  بات  کرو

                        ۳

                        یہ  بار  بار  ہے  کیا  ذکر  زال  دنیا  کا

                        کسی  حسیں،  کسی  زہرہ  جبیں  کی  بات  کرو

                        ۴

                        بسی  ہوئی  ہے  جو  خوابوں  میں  روزِ  اوّل  سے

                        اگر  کرو  تو  اُسی  نازنیں  کی  بات  کرو

                        ۵

                        شعور  و  عقل  میں  یخ  بستگی  کا  عالم  ہے

                        نگاہِ  گرم،  رخِ  آتشیں  کی  بات  کرو

                        ۶

                        جنوں  زدوں  کو  اب  اسبابِ  ہوش  ہے  لعنت

                        نہ  جیب  کی  نہ  کبھی  آستین  کی  بات  کرو

                        ۷

                        ہزار  رنگ  ہے  جس  سے  حیات  کا  دامن

                        کرو  تو  حُسنِ  حیات  آفریں  کی  بات  کرو

                        ۸

                        یہ  کیا  کہ  جب  بھی  مِلو  روئے  جاؤ  قسمت  کو

                        کبھی  تو  خیر  سے  عزم  و  یقیں  کی  بات  کرو

                        ۹

                        جنابِ  شیخ،  بس  اِتنی  سی  عرض  ہے  اپنی

                        زمیں  پہ  رہ  کے  نہ  عرشِ  بریں  کی  بات  کرو

                        ۱۰

                        وطن  میں  رہ  کے  وطن  کا  ہو  تذکرہ  پہلے

                        پھر  اختیار  ہے  چاہے  کہیں  کی  بات  کرو

                        ۱۱

                        ازل  سے  گود  میں  جس  کے  پلے  ہو  اے  طالبؔ

                        زبانِ  شُکر  سے  اُس  سرزمیں  کی  بات  کرو

                        अज़्म ओ यक़ीं की बात करो – शीश चंद सक्सेना तालिब देहलवी

                        १

                        न कुफ़्र की न कभी हम से दीं की बात करो

                        किसी की ज़ुल्फ़, किसी की जबीं की बात करो

                        २

                        फ़ुज़ूल क्यूं फ़लक-ए हफ़्तमीं की बात करो

                        जहां पहुंच हो तुम्हारी, वहीं की बात करो

                        ३

                        ये बार बार है क्या ज़िक्र-ए ज़ाल-दुनिया का

                        किसी हसीं, किसी ज़ुहरा-जबीं की बात करो

                        ४

                        बसी हुई है जो ख़्वाबों में रोज़-ए अव्वल से

                        अगर करो तो उसी नाज़नीं की बात करो

                        ५

                        शऊर-ओ-अक़्ल में यख़-बस्तगी का आलम है

                        निगाह-ए गर्म, रुख़-ए आतिशीं की बात करो

                        ६

                        जुनूं-ज़दों को अब अस्बाब-ए होश है लानत

                        न जेब की न कभी आस्तीं की बात करो

                        ७

                        हज़ार रंग है जिस से हयात का दामन

                        करो तो हुस्न-ए हयात-आफ़्रीं की बात करो

                        ८

                        ये क्या के जब भी मिलो रोए जाओ क़िस्मत को

                        कभी तो ख़ैर से अज़्म-ओ-यक़ीं की बात करो

                        ९

                        जनाब-ए शैख़, बस इतनी सी अर्ज़ है अपनी

                        ज़मीं पे रह के न अर्श-ए बरीं की बात करो

                        १०

                        वतन में रह के वतन का हो तज़्केरा पहले

                        फिर एख़्तियार है चाहे कहीं की बात करो

                        ११

                        अज़ल से गोद में जिस के पले हो अए तालिब

                        ज़बान-ए शुक्र से उस सरज़मीं की बात करो

                         

                        Click here for background and on any passage for word meanings and explanatory discussion. taalib dehlavi-shiish chandr saxena (1910-1975), born and raised in ambaala. High school, 1925. After some interruption, BA (1935) from Hindu College, dehli. Started composing in 1927; shaagird of munshi maharaaj barq dehlavi. He may have been independently wealthy. He writes about frequent mushaa’era held at his house. He collected and compiled the works of munshi maharaj barq dehlavi, ramprakash sahir hoshiarpuri and chandrbhan kaifi dehlavi, which might otherwise have been lost. In addition, he compiled a collection called ‘hamaare husain’, elegies composed by non-muslim shu’ara as tributes to husain and karbala.

                        1
                        na kufr1 kii, na kabhi ham se diiN2 ki baat karo
                        kisii ki zulf3, kisii ki jabiiN4 ki baat karo 1.non-belief, atheism 2.religion, faith 3.hair, curls 4.forehead
                        The poet expresses a desire to move beyond theological debates – kufr o diiN. Instead, he suggests a focus on the beauty of a beloved, her hair zulf and (bright) forehead jabiiN, as a more worthwhile topic of discussion. The beloved can be symbolic for other things … in a religious/sufiyaana interpretation it would mean the universal divine spirit; in progressive interpretation (as in faiz or maKhdoom) it would mean the homeland or social justice.
                        2
                        fuzool1 kyuN falak-e-haftamiiN2 ki baat karo
                        jahaaN pahuNch3 ho tumhaari, vahiiN ki baat karo 1.useless, futile, unnecessary 2.seventh heaven 3.reach, access
                        Why waste time talking about things that are beyond your reach (seventh heaven – falak-e haftamiiN), that you cannot do anything about, that may not even be real. Talk about something within your reach (jahaaN pahuNch hai), that you can control and do something about.
                        3
                        ye baar-baar1 hai kya zikr2-e zaal3-e duniya ka
                        kisi hasiiN4, kisi zohra-jabiiN5 ki baat karo 1.again and again, constantly 2.narrative, talk 3.old, deceitful woman 4.beauty 5.bright/shining forehead (bright as Venus)
                        In a poetic tradition carried over from faarsi the world is referred to as an old deceitful woman who lures you with her charms – materialist attractions. Thus, the call to leave this aside and look to something beautiful. But if I take it to be zaal-duniya (old/ancient world) meaning ancient/obsolete traditions, then, in the next misra hasiiN and zohra-jabiiN lend themselves nicely to be interpreted as a beautiful future – socially just and harmonious. This is a stretch, but I like it better.
                        4
                        basii1 hui hai jo KhwaaboN meN roz-e-avval2 se
                        agar karo to usii nazniiN3 ki baat karo 1.residing, making a home in 2.the very first day, since the beginning 3.delicate, graceful, charming
                        The poet has this image carried over from his dreams/aspirations – an image of delicacy, grace and charm. If you have to talk about beauty, talk about this ideal rather than the romantic beloved. This could be idealistic love, divine love or in a progressive turn it could be social justice.
                        5
                        sha’oor1 o aql2 meN yaKh-bastagi3 ka aalam4 hai
                        nigaah5-e garm6, ruKh7-e aatishiiN8 ki baat karo 1.knowledge 2.intellect 3.bound in a frozen state, frozen 4.condition, state 5.gaze, vision 6.warm, passionate 7.face 8.fiery, radiant
                        The poet reflects on the current state of thought around him … knowledge and intellect seem to be in a frozen state – stuck in the past. To break out of this yaKh-bastagi he needs a warm/passionate gaze towards the future, looking at it with a bright/shining optimistic face/outlook. But the second misra can be interpreted in exactly the opposite way. He may be saying sha’oor o aql are in a state of yaKh-bastagi – it is better to leave them aside and move on to nigaah-e garm and ruKh-e aatishiiN i.e., this state of cold rationality can only be thawed by the warmth of passion; the message is to embrace emotion over cold logic.
                        6
                        junuuN-zadoN1 ko ab asbaab-e-hosh2 hai l’aanat3
                        na jeb4 ki na kabhi aastiiN5 ki baat karo 1.afflicted with passion/madness 2.tools/means of sanity 3.curse 4.pocket, shirt front, collar 5.sleeve
                        The first misra is clear enough – for those afflicted with the madness of love, any tools of sanity are a curse. They would rather remain in their state of frenzy, like majnuN. I am not sure what the jeb and aastiiN symbolize. One possibility … jeb is the shirt front/collar which the mad lover rips apart. He does not want to be lectured about his torn collar. But then what does aastiiN mean. It could be a stand-in for dignified clothing which the mad/passionate lover does not have and does not want to be lectured about. This is consistent with the second interpretation of she’r 5 above.
                        7
                        hazaar raNg1 hai jis se hayaat2 ka daaman3
                        karo to husn4-e hayaat-aafriiN5 ki baat karo 1.colors, forms 2.life 3.hem of the garment of life, valley of life – this world 4.beauty 5.life creating, life-giving
                        In a classical interpretation husn-e hayaat-aafriiN could be god or a divine creator. The divine has created all the variety of life. Let us talk about the beauty of this creator. In a more modern interpretation hazaar raNg could be the diversity cultures, languages and ethnicities; hayaat ka daaman remains this world or the world that the poet lives in – the world of hindustan; and the husn-e hayaat-aafriiN could be the very diversity represented in the first misra. Thus the poet is calling us to celebrate it.
                        8
                        ye kya keh jab bhi milo ro’e jaa’o qismat ko
                        kabhi to Khair1 se azm2 o yaqiiN3 ki baat karo 1.with grace 2.resolve 3.confidence
                        This could be in the spirit of the Progressive Writer’s Movement and/or the freedom struggle. What a pity that every time you complain/lament about fate. At least sometimes step up and take control of destiny with resolve and confidence.
                        9
                        janaab1-e shaiKh2, bas itni si arz3 hai apni
                        zamiiN pe rah ke na arsh-e-bariiN4 ki baat karo 1.honourific – respected 2.preacher, religious scholar 3.request, plea 4.highest heaven
                        Addressing a religious scholar, the poet makes a humble request. He asks the scholar to be practical and grounded. The message is to focus on the matters of this world and not get lost in abstract, heavenly discussions – arsh-e bariiN.
                        10
                        vatan1 meN rah ke vatan ka ho tazkira2 pahle
                        phir eKhtiyaar3 hai chaahe kahiiN ki baat karo 1.homeland 2.mention, discussion 3.choice, authority, freedom
                        The poet wants to prioritize the discussion of the needs of the homeland before talking about anything else. Once, you have done this, you are free to talk about wherever else you want.
                        11
                        azal1 se go’d2 meN jis ke pale3 ho aye taalib4
                        zabaan-e shukr5 se uss sarzamiiN6 ki baat karo 1.eternity, beginning of time 2.lap, embrace 3.grown up, nurtured 4.pen-name, taKhallus 5.thanks, gratitude 6.land, country, homeland
                        The words address the poet himself, but really they address the audience – O taalib in the language/words of gratitude talk about the land in whose lap you were nurtured from the beginning.

                        taalib dehlavi-shiish chandr saxena (1910-1975), born and raised in ambaala.  High school, 1925.  After some interruption, BA (1935) from Hindu College, dehli.  Started composing in 1927; shaagird of munshi maharaaj barq dehlavi.  He may have been independently wealthy.  He writes about frequent mushaa’era held at his house.  He collected and compiled the works of munshi maharaj barq dehlavi, ramprakash sahir hoshiarpuri and chandrbhan kaifi dehlavi, which might otherwise have been lost.  In addition, he compiled a collection called ‘hamaare husain’, elegies composed by non-muslim shu’ara as tributes to husain and karbala.

                        1
                        na kufr1 kii, na kabhi ham se diiN2 ki baat karo
                        kisii ki zulf3, kisii ki jabiiN4 ki baat karo

                        1.non-belief, atheism 2.religion, faith 3.hair, curls 4.forehead

                        The poet expresses a desire to move beyond theological debates – kufr o diiN. Instead, he suggests a focus on the beauty of a beloved, her hair zulf and (bright) forehead jabiiN, as a more worthwhile topic of discussion.  The beloved can be symbolic for other things … in a religious/sufiyaana interpretation it would mean the universal divine spirit; in progressive interpretation (as in faiz or maKhdoom) it would mean the homeland or social justice.

                        2
                        fuzool1 kyuN falak-e-haftamiiN2 ki baat karo
                        jahaaN pahuNch3 ho tumhaari, vahiiN ki baat karo

                        1.useless, futile, unnecessary 2.seventh heaven 3.reach, access

                        Why waste time talking about things that are beyond your reach (seventh heaven – falak-e haftamiiN), that you cannot do anything about, that may not even be real.  Talk about something within your reach (jahaaN pahuNch hai), that you can control and do something about.

                        3
                        ye baar-baar1 hai kya zikr2-e zaal3-e duniya ka
                        kisi hasiiN4, kisi zohra-jabiiN5 ki baat karo

                        1.again and again, constantly 2.narrative, talk 3.old, deceitful woman 4.beauty 5.bright/shining forehead (bright as Venus)

                        In a poetic tradition carried over from faarsi the world is referred to as an old deceitful woman who lures you with her charms – materialist attractions.  Thus, the call to leave this aside and look to something beautiful.  But if I take it to be zaal-duniya (old/ancient world) meaning ancient/obsolete traditions, then, in the next misra hasiiN and zohra-jabiiN lend themselves nicely to be interpreted as a beautiful future – socially just and harmonious.  This is a stretch, but I like it better.

                        4
                        basii1 hui hai jo KhwaaboN meN roz-e-avval2 se
                        agar karo to usii nazniiN3 ki baat karo

                        1.residing, making a home in 2.the very first day, since the beginning 3.delicate, graceful, charming

                        The poet has this image carried over from his dreams/aspirations – an image of delicacy, grace and charm.  If you have to talk about beauty, talk about this ideal rather than the romantic beloved.  This could be idealistic love, divine love or in a progressive turn it could be social justice.

                        5
                        sha’oor1 o aql2 meN yaKh-bastagi3 ka aalam4 hai
                        nigaah5-e garm6, ruKh7-e aatishiiN8 ki baat karo

                        1.knowledge 2.intellect 3.bound in a frozen state, frozen 4.condition, state 5.gaze, vision 6.warm, passionate 7.face 8.fiery, radiant

                        The poet reflects on the current state of thought around him … knowledge and intellect seem to be in a frozen state – stuck in the past.  To break out of this yaKh-bastagi he needs a warm/passionate gaze towards the future, looking at it with a bright/shining optimistic face/outlook.  But the second misra can be interpreted in exactly the opposite way.  He may be saying sha’oor o aql are in a state of yaKh-bastagi – it is better to leave them aside and move on to nigaah-e garm and ruKh-e aatishiiN i.e., this state of cold rationality can only be thawed by the warmth of passion; the message is to embrace emotion over cold logic.

                        6
                        junuuN-zadoN1 ko ab asbaab-e-hosh2 hai l’aanat3
                        na jeb4 ki na kabhi aastiiN5 ki baat karo

                        1.afflicted with passion/madness 2.tools/means of sanity 3.curse 4.pocket, shirt front, collar 5.sleeve

                        The first misra is clear enough – for those afflicted with the madness of love, any tools of sanity are a curse.  They would rather remain in their state of frenzy, like majnuN.  I am not sure what the jeb and aastiiN symbolize.  One possibility … jeb is the shirt front/collar which the mad lover rips apart.  He does not want to be lectured about his torn collar.  But then what does aastiiN mean.  It could be a stand-in for dignified clothing which the mad/passionate lover does not have and does not want to be lectured about.  This is consistent with the second interpretation of she’r 5 above.

                        7
                        hazaar raNg1 hai jis se hayaat2 ka daaman3
                        karo to husn4-e hayaat-aafriiN5 ki baat karo

                        1.colors, forms 2.life 3.hem of the garment of life, valley of life – this world 4.beauty 5.life creating, life-giving

                        In a classical interpretation husn-e hayaat-aafriiN could be god or a divine creator.  The divine has created all the variety of life.  Let us talk about the beauty of this creator.  In a more modern interpretation hazaar raNg could be the diversity cultures, languages and ethnicities; hayaat ka daaman remains this world or the world that the poet lives in – the world of hindustan; and the husn-e hayaat-aafriiN could be the very diversity represented in the first misra.  Thus the poet is calling us to celebrate it.

                        8
                        ye kya keh jab bhi milo ro’e jaa’o qismat ko
                        kabhi to Khair1 se azm2 o yaqiiN3 ki baat karo

                        1.with grace 2.resolve 3.confidence

                        This could be in the spirit of the Progressive Writer’s Movement and/or the freedom struggle.  What a pity that every time you complain/lament about fate.  At least sometimes step up and take control of destiny with resolve and confidence.

                        9
                        janaab1-e shaiKh2, bas itni si arz3 hai apni
                        zamiiN pe rah ke na arsh-e-bariiN4 ki baat karo

                        1.honourific – respected 2.preacher, religious scholar 3.request, plea 4.highest heaven

                        Addressing a religious scholar, the poet makes a humble request. He asks the scholar to be practical and grounded. The message is to focus on the matters of this world and not get lost in abstract, heavenly discussions – arsh-e bariiN.

                        10
                        vatan1 meN rah ke vatan ka ho tazkira2 pahle
                        phir eKhtiyaar3 hai chaahe kahiiN ki baat karo

                        1.homeland 2.mention, discussion 3.choice, authority, freedom

                        The poet wants to prioritize the discussion of the needs of the homeland before talking about anything else.  Once, you have done this, you are free to talk about wherever else you want.

                        11
                        azal1 se go’d2 meN jis ke pale3 ho aye taalib4
                        zabaan-e shukr5 se uss sarzamiiN6 ki baat karo

                        1.eternity, beginning of time 2.lap, embrace 3.grown up, nurtured 4.pen-name, taKhallus 5.thanks, gratitude 6.land, country, homeland

                        The words address the poet himself, but really they address the audience – O taalib in the language/words of gratitude talk about the land in whose lap you were nurtured from the beginning.

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