Draft Zero: a screenwriting podcast

Draft Zero: a screenwriting podcast

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  • DZ-72: Theme & The Story Synopsis - Development Tools 2

    Listen tolearn concrete tools for developing theme in the early stages of your writing.

    Continuing our look at tools used in development, Chas & Stu are joined by Stephen Cleary to talk about Theme, The Thematic Logline and what Stephen calls The Story Synopsis. All are tools to help writers better understand their theme and how it is dramatised. We use the classic film WITNESS as an example, so spoilers abound.

    Thanks to Meegan May for reading the examples. Meegan May is an emerging queer screenwriter and former military intelligence analyst with plenty of award winning scripts and extensive experience in development. Look her up! http://meeganmay.com

    As always: SPOILERS ABOUND and all copyright material used under fair use for educational purposes.

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      CHAPTERS

      • 00:00:00 – Intro: Theme in Development
      • 00:01:54 – The Story Synopsis
      • 00:04:19 – Plot & Theme / Praxis & Mythos
      • 00:11:12 – Back to the Story Synopsis
      • 00:13:45 – Witness
      • 00:16:09 – Thematic Logline
      • 00:17:00 – Using the Thematic Logline in development
      • 00:22:26 – Witness - 1st Act in Story Synopsis
      • 00:25:46 – Witness - 2nd Act in Story Synopsis
      • 00:28:55 – Characters, Plot & Theme
      • 00:30:27 – Witness - Book drops his facadé
      • 00:33:25 – Witness - 3rd Act in Story Synopsis
      • 00:40:49 – Witness - Complete Story Synopsis
      • 00:41:51 – Using the Story Synopsis in development
      • 00:48:04 – Rewriting using the Story Synopsis
      • 00:54:53 – Wrap Up
      • FILMS

        • WITNESS (1985) — (w) William Kelley, Earl W Wallace, William Kelley, Earl W Wallace, Pamela Wallace (d) Peter Weir
        • LAWRENCE OF ARABIA (1962) — (w) Michael Wilson, Robert Bolt (d) David Lean
        • MACBETH (1971) — (w) Kenneth Tynan, Roman Polanski (d) Roman Polanski
        • SCRIPTS

          • Study the script: WITNESS (1985) — William Kelley, Earl W Wallace, William Kelley, Earl W Wallace, Pamela Wallace
          • Study the script: LAWRENCE OF ARABIA (1962) — Michael Wilson, Robert Bolt
          • SHOT ZERO DEEP DIVES

            • Editing an Emotional Jolt: WITNESS
            • LINKS

              • Website: Meegan May
              • EPISODES IN THE DEVELOPMENT TOOLS SERIES

                • DZ-106: How do you know if you have enough story?
                • DZ-71: Treatments & Loglines - Development Tools 1
                • DZ-72: Theme & The Story Synopsis - Development Tools 2
                • DZ-81: Pitch Decks & Look Books - Development Tools 4
                • DZ-73: Selling documents - Development Tools 3
                • RELATED EPISODES

                  • DZ-41: Theme and Worldview
                  • DZ-54: Thematic Sequences
                  • DZ-71: Treatments & Loglines - Development Tools 1
                  • ———

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                    If you enjoy the show, please leave a review on Apple Podcasts, a rating on Spotify, or a review on Podchaser.

                    We are @stuwillis, @mehlsbells and @chasffisher on Twitter. You can find @draft_zero and @_shotzero on Instagram and Twitter.

                    Full show notes at: https://draft-zero.com/2020/dz-72/

                    1 hr 1 min
                  • DZ-71: Treatments & Loglines - Development Tools 1

                    Listen to understand why a treatment isn't something to dread, but the plot-development tool that saves you months of writing.

                    Stu and Chas are joined by fan-favourite, Stephen Cleary, to NOT look at what makes great screenplays work -- but what makes great "short documents" work. We draw on Stephen Cleary's wealth of experience in developing work with writers, as a producer, as a script editor and as a former head of development.

                    This recording turned especially epic and so we have divided it into three parts that can be listened to in any order.

                    Part 1 (this part) explores the short documents and tools you can use to develop your story’s PLOT before going to script, including the Premise, the Logline, various synopses, character documents, and - of course - the dreaded Treatment… But also looks at development tools that aren’t written like: script reads, mini-shoots and animatics.

                    Stay tuned for :

                    • Part 2 (DZ-71) which delves into documents that develop your story’s theme; and then
                    • Part 3 (DZ-73) where we look at how to write short documents differently when your objective isn’t story development but rather selling your idea/project.
                    • As always: SPOILERS ABOUND and all copyright material used under fair use for educational purposes.

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                        CHAPTERS

                        • 00:00:00 – Intro
                        • 00:13:32 – The writing gym
                        • 00:19:32 – Animatics & Script Readings
                        • 00:28:08 – Telling your story out loud
                        • 00:31:07 – Why Treatments suck
                        • 00:36:49 – The Premise
                        • 00:44:43 – Exploring WRITTEN short docs
                        • 01:04:29 – What about non-hero's journey?
                        • 01:14:36 – Using short docs to keep going
                        • 01:21:04 – Back to the Premise
                        • 01:24:37 – Moving from Premise to Logline
                        • 01:25:33 – Stay tuned for Part 2!
                        • EPISODES IN THE DEVELOPMENT TOOLS SERIES

                          • DZ-106: How do you know if you have enough story?
                          • DZ-71: Treatments & Loglines - Development Tools 1
                          • DZ-72: Theme & The Story Synopsis - Development Tools 2
                          • DZ-81: Pitch Decks & Look Books - Development Tools 4
                          • DZ-73: Selling documents - Development Tools 3
                          • ———

                            More Draft Zero is brought to you by our awesome Patreons.

                            If you enjoy the show, please leave a review on Apple Podcasts, a rating on Spotify, or a review on Podchaser.

                            We are @stuwillis, @mehlsbells and @chasffisher on Twitter. You can find @draft_zero and @_shotzero on Instagram and Twitter.

                            Full show notes at: https://draft-zero.com/2020/dz-71/

                            1 hr 27 min
                          • DZ-70: Joker & Melodrama

                            Listen if you're writing a character whose trauma becomes the engine of your entire narrative.

                            Draft Zero return with their next YouTube livestream! Stu and Chas take a deep dive into JOKER and analyse the film through the story paradigm of melodrama. Is it a melodrama? Why or why not does that matter? And does that influence how it has been written on the page?

                            They then answer listeners questions on JOKER and more.

                            As always: SPOILERS ABOUND and all copyright material used under fair use for educational purposes.

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                            • Watch and comment on YouTube.
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                              CHAPTERS

                              • 00:00:00 – Intro: Joker & Melodrama
                              • 00:01:42 – What is Melodrama?
                              • 00:16:47 – Why Joker?
                              • 00:23:25 – Is Joker a Melodrama?
                              • 00:24:40 – Father & Son
                              • 00:28:00 – Penny Fleck's confession
                              • 00:41:30 – What is it like to be powerless?
                              • 00:54:35 – Bathroom Dancing
                              • 01:01:12 – The Joker Born
                              • 01:15:04 – Arthur Stands Up
                              • 01:28:42 – Listener Questions
                              • FILMS

                                • JOKER (2019) — (w) Scott Silver, Todd Phillips (d) Todd Phillips
                                • SCRIPTS

                                  • Study the script: JOKER (2019) — Scott Silver, Todd Phillips
                                  • LINKS

                                    • Read: Slap Happy Larry - Tips for Writing Melodrama
                                    • Website: DZ LiVEsolation Announcments
                                    • RELATED EPISODES

                                      • DZ-67: Writing Passive Protagonists & Melodrama
                                      • ———

                                        More Draft Zero is brought to you by our awesome Patreons.

                                        If you enjoy the show, please leave a review on Apple Podcasts, a rating on Spotify, or a review on Podchaser.

                                        We are @stuwillis, @mehlsbells and @chasffisher on Twitter. You can find @draft_zero and @_shotzero on Instagram and Twitter.

                                        Full show notes at: https://draft-zero.com/2020/dz-70/

                                        1 hr 37 min
                                      • DZ-69: PARASITE & Audience Questions

                                        Listen to understand how refusing to give your audience moral clarity can deepen their investment in character fates.

                                        Draft Zero return with their next YouTube livestream! Stu and Chas take a deep dive into PARASITE and how its mastery of audience questions elevates the film. They then answer listeners questions on PARASITE and much more.

                                        If you want to watch along instead of listen, you can watch on YouTube:

                                        As always: SPOILERS ABOUND and all copyright material used under fair use for educational purposes.

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                                          → Read the transcript for this episode.

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                                          CHAPTERS

                                          • 00:00:00 – Cold Open
                                          • 00:01:37 – Introducing Parasite: Why Audience Questions Elevate the Film
                                          • 00:05:36 – › How sequence questions control the audience's moment-to-moment engagement
                                          • 00:09:54 – › When filmmakers withhold plot questions to force thematic reflection
                                          • 00:10:08 – PARASITE'S Cast of Characters
                                          • 00:12:43 – The Establishing Sequence: Introducing the Kims
                                          • 00:15:21 – › How given circumstances prime audience sympathy before the plan begins
                                          • 00:19:35 – › Directing and blocking as tools for revealing character intention on the page
                                          • 00:23:44 – The Kims Infiltrate the Park Household
                                          • 00:27:01 – › Narrative point of view and when the audience falls behind the characters
                                          • 00:31:23 – › How the shift from opportunism to plan changes the audience's relationship to character
                                          • 00:37:04 – › Escalating micro-questions and the fun-and-games logic of the con sequence
                                          • 00:42:50 – The Kims Settle In: Character Questions Replace Plot Questions
                                          • 00:47:13 – The Midpoint: What Is in the Basement
                                          • 00:53:19 – The Flood: Theme Surfaces When Plot Questions Dissolve
                                          • 00:56:20 – The Birthday Party and the Unresolved Bomb
                                          • 00:59:04 – › Mr Kim's no-plan monologue as the film's thematic statement
                                          • 01:03:44 – › How class resentment is built to justify an irreversible character decision
                                          • 01:05:29 – What Is the Parasite? The Double Ending and the Final Frame
                                          • 01:10:30 – Listener Questions and Backmatter
                                          • 01:13:43 – › Screenplay competitions as deadlines that force writers to let go
                                          • 01:17:15 – › Elevated genre and when plot pauses force audiences to ask what the film is about
                                          • FILMS

                                            • PARASITE (2019) — (w) Bong Joon Ho, Bong Joon Ho, Han Jin Won (d) Bong Joon Ho
                                            • SCRIPTS

                                              • Study the script: PARASITE (2019) — Bong Joon Ho, Bong Joon Ho, Han Jin Won
                                              • LINKS

                                                • Website: DZ LiVEsolation Announcments
                                                • RELATED EPISODES

                                                  • DZ-46: Structure & Point of View
                                                  • DZ-54: Thematic Sequences
                                                  • ———

                                                    More Draft Zero is brought to you by our awesome Patreons.

                                                    If you enjoy the show, please leave a review on Apple Podcasts, a rating on Spotify, or a review on Podchaser.

                                                    We are @stuwillis, @mehlsbells and @chasffisher on Twitter. You can find @draft_zero and @_shotzero on Instagram and Twitter.

                                                    Full show notes at: https://draft-zero.com/2020/dz-69/

                                                    1 hr 23 min
                                                  • DZ-68: Using POV to structure KNIVES OUT

                                                    Listen to help you master the gap between what your audience knows and what your characters know.

                                                    Born out of isolation madness, this episode is an edited version of Draft Zero’s first YouTube livestream. Stu and Chas both watched KNIVES OUT and - together with our listeners - broke down each sequence and turning point by reference to what the audience knows in relation to the characters (aka narrative point of view). They then answer listener questions on KNIVES OUT and much else besides live on air.

                                                    If you want to watch along instead of listen, the video of the episode can be found here:

                                                    As always: SPOILERS ABOUND and all copyright material used under fair use for educational purposes.

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                                                    • Send us feedback.
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                                                      ———

                                                      CHAPTERS

                                                      • 00:05:19 – Summary of narrative point of view and audience expectations
                                                      • 00:10:12 – Exploring some of Rian Johnson's word craft
                                                      • 00:14:15 – Micro POV shifts in the interview montage
                                                      • 00:21:16 – How POV shifts turn the film
                                                      • 00:47:22 – When to let your foot off the plot gas
                                                      • 00:59:46 – Backmatter / Listener Questions
                                                      • FILMS

                                                        • KNIVES OUT (2019) — (w) Rian Johnson
                                                        • SCRIPTS

                                                          • Study the script: KNIVES OUT (2019) — Rian Johnson
                                                          • RELATED EPISODES

                                                            • DZ-05: Shifting audience point of view and heightened emotions
                                                            • DZ-46: Structure & Point of View
                                                            • ———

                                                              More Draft Zero is brought to you by our awesome Patreons.

                                                              If you enjoy the show, please leave a review on Apple Podcasts, a rating on Spotify, or a review on Podchaser.

                                                              We are @stuwillis, @mehlsbells and @chasffisher on Twitter. You can find @draft_zero and @_shotzero on Instagram and Twitter.

                                                              Full show notes at: https://draft-zero.com/2020/dz-68/

                                                              1 hr 33 min
                                                            • DZ-67: Writing Passive Protagonists & Melodrama

                                                              Listen if you want to write powerful stories centred on characters without much agency.

                                                              Stu and Chas are joined by Stephen Cleary following his exploration into Melodrama, and together they try to reclaim the word from its pejorative meaning.

                                                              By examining powerful Melodramas - like THE HANDMAID’S TALE, LADIES IN BLACK and STRANGER THINGS… with many a tangent on MARRIAGE STORY, PETE’S DRAGON, MILDRED PIERCE, GAME OF THRONES, LOST, THE JOKER, THE KILLING, THE WITCHER, war movies and survival films - the three hosts try to unpick what makes Melodrama an alternate story paradigm to the Hero’s Journey.

                                                              They delve into how Melodramas centre on characters that don’t have agency; where the plot happens to characters (as opposed to being driven by them); how Melodramas don’t end so much as close; and how all of the above delves into character questions more deeply than the Hero’s Journey. And to wrap it all up, the kind of techniques you use on the page to write effective melodramas.

                                                              Content Warning : There is a lot of discussion in this episode about melodrama being associated with "women’s stories" vs "the hero’s journey" - which is biased towards a "masculine" mode of storytelling - and we fully acknowledge in the show and here that we are three cismen talking about these things.

                                                              This episode was edited by Christopher Walker.

                                                              As always: SPOILERS ABOUND and all copyright material used under fair use for educational purposes.

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                                                              • Thanks to our Patrons, especially Khrob, Theis, Sandra, Jesse, Randy, Paulo, Thomas, Jennifer, Malay, Alexandre and Lily.

                                                                ———

                                                                CHAPTERS

                                                                • 00:01:25 – Intro: Melodrama & Passive Protoganists
                                                                • 00:01:31 – What is Melodrama?
                                                                • 00:38:06 – The Handmaid's Tale
                                                                • 00:56:44 – Horror and Melodrama
                                                                • 01:00:35 – Marriage Story
                                                                • 01:15:18 – The Handmaid's Tale & Narrative Techniques
                                                                • 01:30:37 – Game of Thrones and Endings
                                                                • 01:33:20 – Melodrama & Endings
                                                                • 01:39:19 – Ladies in Black
                                                                • 02:13:47 – Stranger Things
                                                                • 02:31:52 – The Killing
                                                                • 02:38:23 – The Witcher
                                                                • 02:44:16 – Wrap Up: Passive & Still Characters
                                                                • FILMS

                                                                  • LADIES IN BLACK (2018) — (w) Madeleine St John, Sue Milliken, Bruce Beresford (d) Bruce Beresford
                                                                  • MARRIAGE STORY (2019) — (w) Noah Baumbach
                                                                  • PETE'S DRAGON (2016) — (w) Toby Halbrooks, David Lowery (d) David Lowery
                                                                  • MILDRED PIERCE (1945) — (w) Ranald Macdougall, James M Cain (d) Michael Curtiz
                                                                  • JOKER (2019) — (w) Scott Silver, Todd Phillips (d) Todd Phillips
                                                                  • SHOWS

                                                                    • THE HANDMAID'S TALE 1x1 "Offred" — Reed Morano (d), Margaret Atwood (w)
                                                                    • STRANGER THINGS — (w) Ross Duffer, Matt Duffer
                                                                    • THE WITCHER — (w) Lauren Schmidt Hissrich
                                                                    • LOST — (w) Jj Abrams, Damon Lindelof, Jeffrey Lieber
                                                                    • SCRIPTS

                                                                      • Study the script: MARRIAGE STORY (2019) — Noah Baumbach
                                                                      • Study the script: JOKER (2019) — Scott Silver, Todd Phillips
                                                                      • RELATED EPISODES

                                                                        • DZ-52: Antagonists! 4 - vs Systems
                                                                        • DZ-60: Unfilmables 1 - Engaging imagination
                                                                        • DZ-61: Unfilmables 2 - Moments of Awe
                                                                        • DZ-63: Tools for Better Dialogue 2 - Hook and Eye
                                                                        • ———

                                                                          More Draft Zero is brought to you by our awesome Patreons.

                                                                          If you enjoy the show, please leave a review on Apple Podcasts, a rating on Spotify, or a review on Podchaser.

                                                                          We are @stuwillis, @mehlsbells and @chasffisher on Twitter. You can find @draft_zero and @_shotzero on Instagram and Twitter.

                                                                          Full show notes at: https://draft-zero.com/2020/dz-67/

                                                                          2 hr 59 min
                                                                        • DZ LiVEsolation Annoucement

                                                                          How does Draft Zero cope with lockdown?

                                                                          LINKS

                                                                          • Facebook: http://facebook.com/draftzeropodcast/
                                                                          • Patreon: http://patreon.com/draftzero/
                                                                          • YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCIEz5b9FMNa7Tj8DkcJQWRA

                                                                          Dear DZ Listeners,

                                                                          We hope you are all staying healthy and safe. Due this difficult time of lockdown, Chas and Stu have decided to "regularly" do special live-streamed episodes (via YouTube Live) of Draft Zero that we are calling LiVEsolation.

                                                                          They different from (and in addition to) Draft Zero Classic™ as you'll be able to interact with us as we record: asking questions, prompting for clarification, and making observations that come part of the discussion. You'll also be able to see video of our us (👎) while also seeing video of the scripts and scenes we are discussing (👍). After they're streamed, recordings of the livestreams (including the chat!) will be on our YouTube channel for later viewing.

                                                                          LiVEsolation episodes that we particularly like will also be cleaned up and put out through the traditional podcast feed… but not always. Because our priority is doing these regularly, they'll be looser - like a great live gig. We are aiming for once-a-week and at the same time… but that won't always be possible due to… well…life. We are also having special guests and will need to work around their schedules and timezones.

                                                                          So how do you keep up wth our shifting schedule?

                                                                          We recommend you like our page on Facebook. Our livestreams will be created as events so you know what streams we will be doing and when… in your timezone!

                                                                          We are also making PUBLIC posts on our Patreon page (i.e. ones you don't have to pay for if you don't have the coin during these trying times), so if you follow us there you'll get something like an email newsletter with announcements about what's forthcoming. Oh, and if you are a Patreon you'll get priority access to the online chat (when appropriate) and also get to vote on forthcoming topics.

                                                                          Meanwhile, Draft Zero Classic™ episodes will continue as scheduled. All of the above is in addition to what we already had planned, driven entirely by isolation and a need for community right now.

                                                                          We hope to see you on the livestream soon!

                                                                          — Stu and Chas.

                                                                          6 min
                                                                        • DZ-66: The Mandalorian and The Rise of Skywalker - Audience Knowledge vs Character Motivation

                                                                          Listen to understand how fan service weaponizes external knowledge against character logic.

                                                                          By Order 66: Chas and Stu are joined by special guest - filmmaker Mel Killingsworth - to talk all things Star Wars. Well. Focusing on The Mandalorian and The Rise of Skywalker and wherever else our tangents take us.

                                                                          Our primary lens is look at how both shows handle "fan service" — but really its about how you handle character motivations when your audience has more knowledge than your characters, especially knowledge from outside the show itself. To that end, we discuss the characters of Poe, Rey, Kylo, and Palpatine in depth. We also discuss the Watchmen TV Show, Mindhunter, Jojo Rabbit, Snowtown and Zodiac.

                                                                          As always: SPOILERS ABOUND and all copyright material used under fair use for educational purposes.

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                                                                            ———

                                                                            CHAPTERS

                                                                            • 00:00:00 – Introduction
                                                                            • 00:04:28 – Poe's Backstory
                                                                            • 00:11:38 – The Mandalorian
                                                                            • 00:23:00 – The Rise of Skywalker
                                                                            • 00:24:15 – Rey Palpatine
                                                                            • 00:38:15 – Palpatine's Plan
                                                                            • 00:46:22 – Rey Skywalker
                                                                            • 00:52:12 – Ben Solo - Depressive Demon Nightmare Boy
                                                                            • 01:07:09 – Palpatine's Return & Watchmen
                                                                            • 01:15:44 – Rose Tico
                                                                            • 01:19:11 – Fake-Out Deaths
                                                                            • 01:25:47 – The Mandalorian (Revisted)
                                                                            • 01:30:32 – Wrap Up & Key Learnings
                                                                            • FILMS

                                                                              • THE MANDALORIAN (2019) — (w) Jon Favreau
                                                                              • STAR WARS: THE RISE OF SKYWALKER (2019) — (w) Jj Abrams, Chris Terrio, Jj Abrams, Chris Terrio, Derek Connolly, Colin Trevorrow (d) Jj Abrams
                                                                              • LINKS

                                                                                • Read: Wikipedia - Fan Service
                                                                                • Read: Jeanette Ng - The Rise of Skywalker: Memorabilia without Memory, a Misunderstanding of Hope
                                                                                • Read: Film Crit Hulk - The Force Belongs To Us: THE LAST JEDI's Beautiful Refocusing of Star Wars
                                                                                • ———

                                                                                  More Draft Zero is brought to you by our awesome Patreons.

                                                                                  If you enjoy the show, please leave a review on Apple Podcasts, a rating on Spotify, or a review on Podchaser.

                                                                                  We are @stuwillis, @mehlsbells and @chasffisher on Twitter. You can find @draft_zero and @_shotzero on Instagram and Twitter.

                                                                                  Full show notes at: https://draft-zero.com/2020/dz-66/

                                                                                  1 hr 46 min
                                                                                • DZ-65: Collaborating with a Director - The Snip

                                                                                  Listen if you are thinking of producing your own short film!

                                                                                  This episode, Chas steps down as co-host (kinda) and is interviewed by Stu as a guest, alongside director Ben Mizzi, about the short rom-com that Chas wrote and Ben directed & produced. The episode covers taking an idea from pitch to screen, working with a director, directing performance on the page, and marketing and distribution strategies for short films.

                                                                                  And if you want to watch THE SNIP (a 16 min rom com about a guy who gets a vasectomy without telling his wife) here it is: https://youtu.be/_iBdDFKqqbs

                                                                                  Thanks to Chris Walker for editing this episode.

                                                                                  As always: SPOILERS ABOUND and all copyright material used under fair use for educational purposes.

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                                                                                    ———

                                                                                    CHAPTERS

                                                                                    • 00:00:20 – Introduction: The Snip
                                                                                    • 00:03:44 – Working With a Director
                                                                                    • 00:13:16 – How did you go from pitch to script?
                                                                                    • 00:22:21 – Short films and audience expectations
                                                                                    • 00:26:34 – What expectations can you have of the end product?
                                                                                    • 00:39:08 – How do you "direct" performance on the page?
                                                                                    • 00:46:00 – How do you direct performance from a writer?
                                                                                    • 00:52:21 – What are some marketing strategies for short films?
                                                                                    • 00:58:16 – What is your online release strategy?
                                                                                    • LINKS

                                                                                      • YouTube: THE SNIP
                                                                                      • LISTEN: Screen Director with Jeremy Saunders on Key Art
                                                                                      • ———

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                                                                                        If you enjoy the show, please leave a review on Apple Podcasts, a rating on Spotify, or a review on Podchaser.

                                                                                        We are @stuwillis, @mehlsbells and @chasffisher on Twitter. You can find @draft_zero and @_shotzero on Instagram and Twitter.

                                                                                        Full show notes at: https://draft-zero.com/2020/dz-65/

                                                                                        1 hr 4 min
                                                                                      • DZ-64: Backmatter - Controlling your Work, Treatments, and Writing Styles

                                                                                        Listen to understand what you can control in your career--and what you absolutely cannot.

                                                                                        In our annual Backmatter-only episode, Stu and Chas indulge themselves by offering personal opinions on the life and work of emerging screenwriters based on their own personal experience.

                                                                                        To that end, they discuss: what is and is not in your control in relation to an emerging writing career; choosing what project to develop next; using the Black List site to gain traction; the difference between treatments for pitching as opposed to for development; and the difference in writing style when writing on spec as against work for hire.

                                                                                        We also unexpectedly have a guest: David Wappel kindly joins us to share his thoughts on anchoring nouns.

                                                                                        As always: SPOILERS ABOUND and all copyright material used under fair use for educational purposes.

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                                                                                          ———

                                                                                          CHAPTERS

                                                                                          • 00:00:00 – Introduction
                                                                                          • 00:05:27 – What is in your control?
                                                                                          • 00:28:58 – Choosing what to develop
                                                                                          • 00:33:24 – Using the Black List site
                                                                                          • 00:59:47 – Treatments for development vs for pitching
                                                                                          • 01:23:23 – Writing on spec vs work for hire
                                                                                          • 01:37:37 – Backmatter to backmatter
                                                                                          • LINKS

                                                                                            • Read: M. Night Shyamalan on His Failures, His Successes, and Glass
                                                                                            • YouTube: Can't watch a rough cut lady song
                                                                                            • Read: Write Along Podcast on Planners and Pantsers
                                                                                            • EPISODES IN THE BACKMATTER SERIES

                                                                                              • DZ-17: Where's my gold-plated ensuite?
                                                                                              • DZ-36: Backmatter - Time Risk and Fixing Movies
                                                                                              • DZ-47: Backmatter - A Lost Jedi, White Knighting, and Writers-On-Set
                                                                                              • DZ-57: Backmatter - Aesthetics and Forgiveness in Writing
                                                                                              • DZ-64: Backmatter - Controlling your Work, Treatments, and Writing Styles
                                                                                              • DZ-77: Backmatter - Prioritising and choosing projects
                                                                                              • DZ-86: Backmatter - Minimum Viable Product
                                                                                              • DZ-95: Backmatter - Building and Maintenance
                                                                                              • ———

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                                                                                                Full show notes at: https://draft-zero.com/2020/dz-64/

                                                                                                1 hr 43 min

                                                                                              About Draft Zero: a screenwriting podcast

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                                                                                              Two emerging screenwriters – Chas Fisher and Stuart Willis – try to work out what makes great screenplays work. Discovering what it takes by analysing what successful writers put on the page.

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